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Rematch Turn 1 Psych-Up Brisa's speed. 2x Blast seeds on rayquaza

"Gone," blue reported, flicking his tail over to the hat and scarf. "Probably dead. What's not clear though is if he was murdered-" he gave the other Pokemon a hard look "-or if this was an unfortunate accident. Regardless, I suggest we start investigating immediately." Oh how he wished Yellow...

Blue crinkled his nose as he looked over the absolute farce of a mew. He hated it when gods behaved like irrational children. HIS new would NEVER. He ignored her and instead approached the oshawot, gently flicking him with his tail. "Hey, listen. It's going to be okay. We'll figure this out...

The End. (2 chapter review)

The End. (2 chapters, 580 words. +1 point for theme)

Been a while since I read any of your stuff. I remember liking what I read before of your Sonic fic, so let’s see how I feel about your pokemon works. This review will cover the first two chapters. Chapter 1 So one thing that I really liked about the opening of this chapter is that it’s not...

Three Chapter Review of PMD Stargazers be (one chapter is off site)

Wrote a review of the first three chapters of PMD: Stargazers (note that the third chapter is off-site, but I included it in spoiler brackets). Total review length is just shy of 800 words, so that should be 3 points +1 for theme adherence.

Three chapter review of FIghting Nature

3 chapter review for Fighting Nature, about 950 words. Meets the weekly theme, so 4 points.

Hey there Cynch! This is gonna be a review over the first three chapters, since that seems like a good break point. Let’s jump right into things! Chapter 1 I like the dynamic you’ve got set up with Sid and Raskin. They really do feel like friendly roommates. The entire opening passage, and...

The vaporeon stepped inside, casually looking the building over with a cool, neutral expression. His gaze landed on the TV, and the end of his tail twitched siltly. "What strange technology you have. Perhaps it would be worthwhile for me to look it over later. My society is always looking for...

I can't remember who in the thread suggested it (and I'm too tired to look back right now lol) but I think the idea of adding a straw poll up, maybe around the time the boss is revealed, would be a good way to approach it. I'm definitely for trying out the extended schedule (which I think we're...

Reviewed 5 chapters of Liberators of Fate

A 1600 word review for Liberators of Fate 5 Chapters, so 5 points. +1 for weekly theme.

Hey there Navar! This is a review of chapters 1-5. I’ll go over some thoughts on each chapter, then my overall thoughts up to this point! And like I said when I talked to you before, I’m going to focus on story and plot, but I’ll also point out a few spots in the prose that felt particularly off...

A small whirlwind of ice surrounded Nip as he launched himself at Groudon, aiming consecutive spinning kicks at the behemoth's chest. As he landed, he did his best to ignore the blistering heat, even as the smell of singed fur reached his nostrils. He dashed forward, his claws coated in shadow...

Nip Turn 6: Triple Axel Groudon Shadow Spike Groudon Shadow Spike Groudon

Nip Turn 5: Psych Up Dave's speed

Tenatively logging turn five as *Psych Up*on someone with max speed, but if the the other plan goes through I'll swap it out to shadow spike. Or they can override if needed.