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All right, I'm back to fully catch up on this one. And it's a Giovanni-focused chapter! Really should have stretched myself to finish the whole thing last time around, but oh, well, I guess this way I get a bonus twice. I do really enjoy your Giovanni! The first scene with Fuji, in particular...

All right, back to wrap up the second arc. It feels like we're right on the threshold to a big change in the story! It feels like there's still plenty to wrap up in Theran village, primarily to do with whatever's happening with Jhorlo, so I'm curious how that's come together before we move on to...

Title: Krookodile Tears Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/krookodile-tears-threeshot.964/post-51814 Number of Chapters: 1 Theme: No Title: Places We Call Home Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/places-we-call-home.104/post-51955 Number of Chapters: 3...

Chapter three! This is kind of a transitional chapter. Connor learns about the haunted mansion, he meets up with Florence, and then we cut off when they actually enter the haunted mansion--I imagine the next chapter's when shit's really going to go down. Will have to read on for a couple more...

All right, let's get into the next story arc! I'm going to look at chapters 10-12 here. Jhorlo's deal with Umbra was the most interesting part of Chapter 10 to me. We knew Jhorlo was shady before, but he's really showing his true colors here! The assertion that scavenging won't produce enough...

Mmm, week three plans... I still have nine one-shots from W2 that I didn't get to but wanted to. Some of them are eligible for the W3 bonus, and some of them aren't... It would be lovely to get those that qualify done squared away this week! The others should work for W4. This week I'd like to...

Welcome to Week 3, everyone! As I did last year, I thought I'd put together a list of recent stories that are eligible for the weekly theme to make it easier for people to plan their reviewing. Note that this lists includes only stories posted since the beginning of November 2021, and only...

I recall hearing quite a bit about this (part of?) story, so it's convenient for me that you decided to split it out! Hope I'll be able to follow along with it as Blitz progresses. I enjoyed your last deserty story a lot, so I'm looking forward to this one, too! I really like the picture you've...

Title: Places We Call Home Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/places-we-call-home.104/post-51754 Number of chapters: 2 Weekly theme: No Title: Hey, Space Cadet! Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/hey-space-cadet.859/post-51756 Number of chapters: 1...

All right, looks like Catnip is sending me back here a little early! I think I'd like to take this story one chapter at a time, so here's #2. The results of the psychic examination were curious. It sounds as though Connor remembers everything fine (or, like, as fine as can be expected after a...

Hey, Namo! This is kind of an old one, isn't it? I was trying to figure out what one-shots you had that I hadn't read yet, and this seemed like a fun choice! I love dunsparce, so it was a natural fit. The highlight of this story for me was Totta herself. You definitely have a talent for...

Hey, windskull! Here with the beginning of your much-overdue Blacklight prize reviews. Unfortunately where I left off last time ended up being a kind of an awkward spot, as there's only one chapter left in the initial arc. What I'm going to do is start with that chapter + the bonus here, do the...

A fun story as always! It's been ages since I've played one of the Rescue Team games, so the plot parodies were a bit lost on me--lots of, "Wait, is that really what happened?" on my end, lol. Although the villagers chasing you off on flimsy evidence, then accepting you back on equally flimsy...

Beautiful work, Pano! Thanks for putting these all together.

Ah, sorry, I should have been more clear. wrt Victory Road, I wasn't talking about the part where the trainer ultimately decides to leave Butterfree behind--I agree with you that that's important and should be included. Rather, these were the specific paragraphs I thought might be cuttable...

Ah, sorry for the confusion! I meant that it's a common setup for narrative fiction, not that it's something I've experienced myself. Yet! ;)

Aaaaa, this is delightful! I hope you had a lot of fun writing this, because it's definitely loads of fun to read. He really would be a shit doctor. :P This is the SWEETEST thing, though. Imagine if these two had been given opposite alignments. :P Of COURSE the child tried to get out of...

Title: Broken Things Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/broken-things.57/post-51593 Chapters: 4 Theme: No Title: Luceat Lux Vestra Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/luceat-lux-vestra.977/post-51592 Chapters: 3 Theme: No Title: Burner Link...

Edit: Sorry, I missed the note about revisions on this one. Apologies if this wasn't the sort of feedback you were looking for; let me know if you'd prefer for me to delete this or otherwise change things. Glad to see this one posted up on the forums. Really need to respond to more of last...

Back at last! Always up in the air how much I'll get through, but for now at least I can clear out the last of "Electric." Seems like I kind of left off in an awkward place last time; ended on a big "Kekoa NO" moment, while these chapters are much quieter and focused on the group as individuals...