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HI Sind! I'm here for your catnip review! So. To start off, I think you do a great job of implying a lot about the traumatic event without getting deep into the details. There may be storytelling instances where going into more detail would be warranted. But honestly, in this case, I think...

Yeah. If you remember your type advantages right (do they even matter in this game? This is still just a game, right?) then you're in big trouble here. Waking up these other pokemon seems like a good idea! (...hopefully)

Hi Blackjack! I'm here for your catnip review! Man. The first scene does a great job of showing off Nanu’s apathy. Is Team Skull illegally squatting? Yeah. Does he care? Kind of. Is he going to do anything about it? Not if he doesn't have to, no. But even so, there are hints that he cares about...

Yooo second person pov? I have a soft spot for it when written right, and I think it really works well here. I honestly got pretty hooked into this. I think it just happens to scratch a itch I have for stories about lab-created characters questioning their humanity and/or who they are. And...

Blitz review, lets gooooo! I’m glad I thought to look up the meaning of the word Peregrine, as I’d only previously heard it with regards to falcons, because if the themes of the story weren’t already clear enough, it really tied things together. I like the idea of Wes taking all the pokemon...

Hi there! Hitting this one up for review blitz. For "No, you can't go to work with me..." Man you really did a great job of capturing the vibe of a person and their pet they're particularly close to. And the vibe of a cat and how much it can feel like they're silently judging you if you don't...

Oh man, I've kind of wanted to do a drabble-dex idea (or something similar) myself. So I'm pretty excited to check this out! -The Bulbasaur drabble is cute! It does a great job of capturing the nervousness and inexperience of a new trainer just starting out. Given that it's the first pokemon in...

Oh no, not again! Your increased ALCOHOL LEVEL makes it difficult to get the thought out of your head. Who is Pourygon? What is Pourygon? Why is Pourygon? You waste several minutes zoned out thinking about this. It looks like everyone has left except for Zor. He runs the local daycare and...

It's weird, you don't remember going by Ingo. You're not sure where that name came from. Maybe you knew another sneasel with that name? That's right, you did insist people call you Bloodclaw at one time. But it was never your real name. But that DOES remind you of something important. That's...

You shimmy closer, balancing on two legs so as to not spill your drink. As you get closer you begin to make out words. (Sneasel): ...Bit off more than I could chew in a fight. (Sneasel): I apologize that you had to see me like this. (Hawlucha): But how did you end up in this fight? If there's...

>Hope you don't look delicious. >Take up a defensive position.

Content Warning: This update contains blood. Oh. This is concerning. You find Fuse standing in front of the regigigas statue, supporting a strange, injured sneasel. Sparkles is nowhere to be seen, but a small crowd is starting to gather. Besides the two that are at the center of...

Your eyes can't help but keep darting to the espurr, Kiki, and the half-eaten meat on her plate. Eugh, that was probably someone's parent or child or sibling. You understand that some pokemon just have to eat meat, but it still grosses you out. Sure, there are a significant number of regulations...

Hi Amby! Gonna review a handful of chapters. I swear I read these before at some point because I remember reading through the trial, but I looked in multiple places and couldn't find any place I'd left a review, so here we are. Picking up on chapter 22… The action sequence was fun! While I...

Figured I should throw my hat in the ring! Do you like stories that fall on the darker side, and grapples with topics like morality, trauma, touches of anti-colonialism and the Meat Issue that pops up in an all-sapient pokemon society? Consider Places We Call Home! This fic follows Haru, an...

Thanks for the review, Inke! I apologize that I haven't had the spoons to reply to any recent review - life's been hectic for a while now. But know I always read and appreciate every one. Alliance "Up ahead, that has to be the right place. Right, Susana?" Haru didn't look up to see where the...

Hi! I can volunteer up to 3 art prizes this year, depending on complexity (probably one sketch, one flat color, and one full color)

The Choice Nip stirred, waking. His head — no, his whole body — ached, dulling his senses. But as he struggled awake, he became aware of wind whipping around him, tugging at his fur. Amidst the pain, the sensation felt distant. Something sharp dug into his sides. He peeked one eye open just a...

Hi guys! I'm sorry it took so long to get to this. Life's been busy! But I'm back, and ready to go over my thoughts for the next section. Starting with Chapter 44, In Harm's Way There's nothing really wrong with this, but it does read a bit awkwardly to me. I think it's the end of the...

Sorry for taking so long! My limited writing energy was occupied elsewhere. But it's good to be back. Onwards! Pokemon on a Mission H… help… Shimmer stirred, still half-asleep, and blearily opened her eyes. Pale dawn light filtered through her window, painting patches of sunlight on the...