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  1. Navar

    Pokémon PMD: Below

    I’ve heard good things about this fic, and the synopsis did catch my attention, so here’s my attempt at giving a review about my thoughts on this story. Chapter 1 For an introductory chapter, it’s quite fast-paced, at least in my opinion. I don’t have any problems with it, though. Allows you to...
  2. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Double-Edged

    Chapter 5 Alright, it’s been a while since I reviewed this fic before, but I remember enough of it. Anyway, this was a chapter focused on a bunch of action, and with so many characters, it got a little confusing on who was who(probably also because I haven’t read this in a while, my bad), so I’m...
  3. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Free Fiction

    Merry Christmas! Here's a review for your story~ Chapter 1 Very big chapter, and full of things to comment about. Can’t say I was expecting Spanish, but at least I can understand it. A little bit, yeah. Anyway, this was a good introduction! I’m separating this into a few categories so as to...
  4. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 61 - Father

    Dungeon 61 - Father Brian managed to land on his feet and groaned, removing the crystal from himself and inserting it back into place, the aura transferring from his body into the crystal. Note to self: never try something like this again. He looked behind him, the portal slowly fading. Now...
  5. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 60 - Mortal

    Dungeon 60 - Mortal It was another peaceful night in Bright Dawn. The entire population of the city was unaware of what was happening, or going to happen in the future. Due to this, they were able to continue with their peaceful lives, and with the stroke of midnight, most were inside their...
  6. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 59 - Home

    Dungeon 59 - Home "Whoaa!" Brian fell through the portal, crashing right against a hard, wooden surface… and hearing it crack under the pressure. Not like he had time to react, seeing the figure of Dex about to join him. He rolled to the side, watching the Floatzel fall where he once stood...
  7. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 58 - Heart

    Dungeon 58 - Heart Team Liberators had arrived at Cydonia the day before. All of them were tired, emotionally and physically, but they decided to keep the good fight going. A decision that was far easier on their heads. Actually doing it was proving to be hard, especially for Meggie. She had...
  8. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 57 - Monarch

    Dungeon 57 - Monarch Scar hopped out of the portal, landing on his feet. Max came after him, striking a pose and lifting a fist in the air. Then, it was Necrozma's turn. He simply walked off, and once he got to the other side, took a large whiff of air. Nothing mattered more, nothing except...
  9. Navar

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Heroic Dreamers
    Threadmarks: Chapter 11 - Clash! Thunderclap!

    Chapter 11 - Clash! Thunderclap! I'm singing to the beat, I won't stop. Gotta keep on, Won't give up. I'll come and see you. Just know I am here for you now. For the citizens of Thornwell, it was just another day, with the sun shining brightly in the sky, the birds singing in the...
  10. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 56 - Vessel

    Dungeon 56 - Vessel Complete. That's what the power rushing through his veins made him feel, that was the sensation of freedom, of the wind blowing on his fur, of the gentle breeze, of everything. His feelers twitched, picking up auras—a funny thing, he never knew this was how Lucario saw the...
  11. Navar

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Heroic Dreamers
    Threadmarks: Chapter 10 - Silhouettes

    Chapter 10 - Silhouettes I can fly the sky with no doubts, Just like when I spread my own wings out. I'll keep my head up, And I'll shout as I leave from the ground. Trigger warning for this chapter: Shiron had just finished downing a large cup of water when he heard the door knocking...
  12. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Special Episode 4 - Interlude

    Special Episode 4 - Interlude "I can find out. Things are no longer like they were nine years ago. We can locate him." "Are you sure, dad?" "I give you my word. Both as an explorer and as your father. Besides, we both know how tough Lance is. He's okay. I just know it." Nick promised Brian...
  13. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 55 - Sapphire: Part 2

    Dungeon 55 - Sapphire: Part 2 Meggie panted. Ignoring her wounds was the best thing she could do right now. And she already had her eyes set on someone to fight. She hovered towards Max, creating claws on her fingers. With a quick spin, she shortened the distance between them, and managed a...
  14. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 54 - Sapphire: Part 1

    Dungeon 54 - Sapphire: Part 1 Lance took a large breath, conjuring a bone club. It glowed with a purple aura. He looked at his former allies—at Scar, Max and Lilith. They were his enemies now. And… "...I am alongside them once more." Lance pointed the bone at Scar, flames burning inside both...
  15. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 53 - Phantoms

    Dungeon 53 - Phantoms A portal cracked open, and out of it came Lilith and Max, landing on the ground without a single bruise on their bodies. She stretched her arms out, watching the portal disappear into an entercard, one she picked up. "Well… I kinda wished we picked up some bug repel. They...
  16. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 52 - Hive

    Dungeon 52 - Hive "Goggles? Check. Scarf? Check. Supplies?" Brian zipped the bag open, shoving a nut-like seed, with a tiny, green vine sticking out of it. He repeated the process, shoving three more. "Reviver seeds? Check," he grinned. "Dex? What about the orbs? What'd ya got?" Dex held one...
  17. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 51 - Solace

    Dungeon 51 - Solace Brian couldn't sleep. How could he, after what happened the day before? True, he was unconscious for most of it, but… it never escaped his mind. He remembered it all. The power, the strength, the rage, that primal feeling Brian wasn't even sure he had in the first place—all...
  18. Navar

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Heroic Dreamers
    Threadmarks: Chapter 9 - Just Live More

    Chapter 9 - Just Live More Stay strong, my wings, don't let me go. I can make it. I'm not on my own. Keep flying on through the day. On my love! "More! Put your heart into it!" A Beedrill buzzed, dodging countless rocks thrown in his direction. His face dripped with sweat, but with swift...
  19. Navar

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Heroic Dreamers
    Threadmarks: Chapter 8 - Not So Different

    A/N: This chapter contains a trigger warning for child abuse. Chapter 8 - Not So Different After the dream I'm lost and alone. Quickly falling right through the unknown. So I will fly and be free. Escape this awful wasteland. I will not worry! Compared to the other days, Shiron woke up...
  20. Navar

    Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Liberators of Fate
    Threadmarks: Dungeon 50 - Nightmare

    Dungeon 50 - Nightmare Lance let the rain fall on him, hide the tears on his snout, and his emotions run wild. How long had it been since Brian left? Time didn't seem to mean anything anymore. Nothing did. Hah. I really am… a monster, aren't I? It was almost pitiful, really. Lance clenched...
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