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Chapter 7: Some really great, believable kid behavior here. :P I really like the tension you got out of slowly ruminating over this moment. A good instance where slowing things down really added something. This is a really great way to mask the fact that you hadn't come up with the name...

Yess, I have been waiting for my turn to come. >:3 I'm going a similar route as Namo, and considering that I already have art from Dragonfree, canis, and Umbra, I'll go with... @Adamhuarts's character sketch!

The chapter just felt... comfy overall, and it was really easy to sink into that feeling along with the characters, what with all the fun details to the world, the background characters, and the town. We've barely been in Sedre and it already feels thoroughly lived-in. Almost to the point that...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/broken-things.57/page-3#post-2253 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/wandersword.31/page-2#post-2249 I’m really sorry that I’m just dumping these here but I’m on mobile and super busy right now. Neither one fits the weekly...

Leaving some long-overdue thoughts on 14 and 15! So first of all… Coco. omg Coco. The funny thing is, I was actually wondering if the egg might be a dragon (given Cuicatl’s dragon-affinity) but I definitely wasn’t expecting Tyrunt! And I was wondering how Cuicatl would wind up in...

I Can’t. Believe. I never commented on chapter 4. So first of all, I want to say that I love the air of suspense that this chapter set up. The introduction of the mystery, the buildup, and the payoff were all very satisfying. To say nothing of the fact that I can't believe I missed the...

Thanks for the reviews, everyone! Chapter 29 is coming soon. Only two more chapter until the end of Book 1!

Greenhorn Prometheus Base Score: 3 Wordcount: im sorry, I don’t know, I’m on mobile ;-; Theme: 4

Welp, it’s been a long time coming, but I’m finally here to check this out! (And I say a long time for anyone else reading this because not only was Halloween several months ago, but also, I was one of the ones who knew about this project during its inception!) Just a quick disclaimer: I have...

~CHAPTER 28: LEGENDARY REVENGE~ We’d been warned. I already had some idea of what awaited us when we appeared on the edge of Viridian, looking down on the city from atop the hills to the east. But that didn’t compare to seeing it in real life. Nothing could have prepared me for the sight...

Thanks for the reviews everyone! They were a ton of fun to read, and it's so great to hear your thoughts on these chapters since they're some of my favorites. Next chapter is the action-packed climax of Book 1!

*Cracks knuckles* Alright. Time to start getting serious about this Dave and Katherine Discuss Real Life Base: 3 Theme: 4 Wordcount: 2 Total: 9 Soul Dissonance Base: 3 Theme: 4 Wordcount: 2 Total: 9 Running total: 27

Heyy, I'm really glad you went ahead with writing this fic! And this was a heck of an intro too! Like the others have said, it's not everyday that you see Marshadow in a fic. And I don't really know if Marshadow... has any... canon lore to speak of? So coming up with your own orgin for it...

A Morphic fic??? :O And also... one that I think I might have read before? There are definitely some details here that feel familiar (did you post it on tumblr?) Well, regardless, I never got to offer any thoughts before, so I'm glad you brought it here! I snorted Oof, so she had to appeal...

Hoo boy. So, like everything else related to LC, the story behind its title is a long one, involving a lot of old story concepts that got purged long ago. Despite what you might think, The Legendarian Chronicles isn't just saying "this is a chronicle about Legendaries." No, that would be too...

Reviewed Run Boy Run Base: 3 points Weekly theme adherence: 4 points Word count: 2 points Total: 9 points

nuuuuu ;-; ...ah, I know how it goes, hopefully it won't be on hiatus for too long. ;P Anyway, I'm always a fan of your stuff so I knew I had to check this out! And hoo boy, not wasting a second throwing us right into it. On the one hand, yeah, it is a bit hard to feel emotionally affected...

Everything looks pretty dang good to me! And the wordcount bonuses look reasonable such that they don't completely dwarf short reviews, which I think was the main concern. Oh, while this isn't necessary to hammer out before the event begins, we should try to get an idea pretty early on of how...

Hope you're ready for a big ol' pile of reveals~ ~Chapter 27: The Revolt~ I stared at the two of them, a feeling of unease growing inside me. Stalker appeared relatively unfazed by Starr’s revelation and was simply watching us with a calm, expectant look, like we’d go right back to our...

Congrats to everyone who won NaNo! You guys always astound me. xD Soooo, overall my NaNo performance wasn't great this year. I got stuck several times due to needing to re-outline the end of Book 2, and it made it really hard to sink myself into word sprints like last year. But, at the end of...