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Glad to see you over here! I've caught you around Discord, of course--your fic sounds like a load of fun. Hope we'll get to see it once you're able to start in on drafting! Until then, feel free to ask for any help or advice you might need to keep the writing process rolling. Welcome to the...

Delighted to see another chapter! And what a chapter it is, too. Lots of big reveals, and some even bigger questions raised... Feels like a real "point of no return" within the story, really. Having Giovanni show up here was a killer twist, and he continues to be loads of fun whenever he's in a...

LET THEM EAT CAKE! :yoomtah: I certainly remember reading this back when it was posted for AQ--can't remember whether I commented on it, but I hope I at least said something! Happy to take another look for a more in-depth review. This story is really built around the central idea of change...

PLA fic! I was so hoping somebody would write for that game this year, and this fic didn't disappoint. We love some weird time bullshit and Meiji-era Sinnoh vibes, and you did a great job with both here. I'm not sure whether you plan to ever write more Hisui fic, but the setting seems like it...

Hey, Bench! Happy Blitz, and happy Catnip. I remember when you wrote this story--it's always fun to see what people will come up with to celebrate milestones in the Pokémon franchise, and this strikes me as a very fitting tribute to PMD. I enjoy the incorporation of all the different PMD games...

Here is the final list of fics that are ineligible for the Week 4 theme bonus. Any story not on this list IS ELIGIBLE for the Week 4 theme bonus! Italicized titles were added after the first version of this list was compiled. Fics Not Eligible for the Week 4 Theme Bonus 109 A New Path A...

Happy birthday, Wind! This seems like an excellent opportunity to settle in with some hot chocolate and get caught up on Places We Call Home. Although we don't have a terribly cozy set of chapters here, do we? I'm quite enjoying the uptick in action we've seen since Chapter 20 or so; it looks...

Summary: A zoroark survives an attempt on her life. Only one ice dragon stands in the way of her revenge. Content Warnings: Violence, cursing What Was Left Behind It was the ice that called. For some time all she knew was its cold and the burning, a low, deep pain not of fire but of something...

All right, back to catch up on this one. Probably what I enjoyed the most from this run of chapters is the many ways you've recontextualized the game and shuffled things around to make the narrative work better. Up until Pyrite Town the story struck me as more of a straight retelling: we were...

Here we are, back for another Blitz catchup on Once a Thief! And the recent Newangle City chapters have me really intrigued, here--this is probably my favorite of the settings so far in this story, and it's been a lot of fun getting to explore it! As always, the worldbuilding here is on point...

Hey, Tetra! I enjoyed getting acquainted with this story for the Festival of Masks, and now that I'm caught up, it's time for a Blitz review! This story is a lot of fun. I can tell you're having a great time with it, which always makes for a positive reading experience. And I love how you pack...

The Mother Goose cometh... > Peccary Pete: reflect upon your crimes

A brisk middle section--I was surprised to find myself reaching the end of it! Dave and Mia certainly make a good pair; sometimes, her blunt literal-mindedness is exactly what he needs to calm himself down and take another look at things. I do kind of think that one way or another the ultimate...

Happy birthday, Josh! I hope you had a great day and that the next year treats you much better than the last has.

Hey, Fauxfox! I know this story's been a long time in the making, so I wanted to come have a look at what you've been up to! We have a lot of classic PMD elements here--waking up with amnesia, being rescued by an exploration partner, trying to adapt to a new form--and we get through them at a...

All right, back again, this time to give you some proper feedback on your story! I had fun reading it for Smeargle Swap, so it's only appropriate I give you a bit more of a response. First of all, it's got to be said that "sky pirates PMD" is a real banger premise! You've got a very different...

Aaaaaa, it's finally here! :D It was a delight to finally get to sit down and read this, including getting the full/final version of some scenes you've hinted about in the past. This fic is exactly what it says on the tin, and it's been a lot of fun thus far! I really enjoy how Dave's...

Hey, Ambyssin! Back at long last for chapters 19-25. This is kind of the culmination of the trial arc, and it's fun to see how things come together here. The whole trial here is the first major video game that I'm actually familiar with in this fic, and I was surprised at how closely the beats...

Happy birthday! Hope you have a great one.

Welcome to the forums! Glad to see you here. We have a lot of people who enjoy giving in-depth feedback here, so I hope you'll end up getting some helpful comments. Probably your best bet to get some feedback is to have a look at the Blitz promo and review exchange thread and see if there's...