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"Well, there's plenty to forget." Dave took a chug from his glass. "How about you?" Mia frowned. "Today was pretty important. You shouldn't forget about it."

Apparently the rescue wasn't happening for a while. Dave needed a drink after all that; he headed straight for the X-Eye Cauldron. Mia asked about going and training in the meantime, and he reminded her that they had reason to think there might be people working for Giovanni in Destiny Village...

"She did that fucking intentionally, not just by being near them, and they weren't us, and like I said, she's obviously different from all of you and has been from the start," he snarled. "I'm coming," Mia said, in the same tone as always. "If you're on the mission too then are you going to not...

"Yes, draw out repressed thoughts, that's what I fucking meant," Dave snapped. "There's not a damn thing suggesting shades are getting corrupted by us. Just Sword being corrupted while having an Ultra Stone core, which might I remind you all is fucking different from all of your cores, and she...

The aftermath of the fight was chaos. People made profoundly unreasonable suggestions for dealing with Sword. The Mudkip was talking sense, even while dripping with Shadow influence, which, uh. Was a thing. Maple said she'd give Sword to somebody at random, only to carry her herself, which of...

For this turn: - Radiant Guard at Eterna Darkwhite - Assurance at Eterna Darkwhite x3

Mia looked at the band, intrigued. They didn't seem to know what was going on with it either. Arceus had done something? But they were going to leave, and it didn't sound like Nate knew very much about what Arceus had done either, anyway. That was fine. Maybe somebody else knew more. Nate...

Mia frowned at Nate's speech. She had already said it was for medical research, but sometimes people just didn't listen to what you said and then it was usually no use to bother trying to keep talking to them about it. Rocky was pretending to be in a hurry for some reason and ran out like he...

I think the event went great overall! Love the amount of reviewing that got done and the general enthusiasm, and I think you ran it all very smoothly. It might make sense to at least scale the minimum eligible word count with the length of the fic/chapter to some extent - it does seem a bit...

Reviewed chapter 36 of The Legendarian Chronicles.

Reviewed chapter 36 of The Legendarian Chronicles. +1 1201 words +1 theme

The opening here strikes me as a little long for a "frozen on the spot, barely able to think" moment - it kinda feels like Jade does get a lot of fairly calm-sounding, rational thinking in here, to a point where I start wondering why she isn't at least trying to run/hide/draw a...

Nate still seemed oddly upset about this for some reason. The way he talked reminded her of Dave when he was annoyed or being weird about something, but Dave wasn't annoyed or weird about science. "They picked a lot of different species," she said. "They were trying to show the viability of the...

Mia tilted her head. "That doesn't make any sense. Most people make kids but usually girlfriends are people who already exist. If you tried to make one it would take way too long before she grew up enough for it to be legal and it would be very impractical. Even if she grows up faster." She...

"Yes. It was his idea but they all worked on it." Mia looked searchingly at Nate. He was being sarcastic, implying he wasn't surprised. But people didn't say that when they actually knew, either. "Why?" Rocky seemed to be very confused and assuming a lot of strange things. Did he know some...

Dave will, according to plan: - Howl at Brisa, Astrid and Owen - Shining Burden at Cabot if Ho-Oh has been knocked out; otherwise, Assurance on Ho-Oh

Mia tilted her head. They were both weird about science for some reason. A lot of people were, of course, but usually not quite like this. "There were eight of us," she said. "Dave and the others made us, and they did it in a lab, but once we were born they just took us home, so I don't...

Dave had just about had a goddamn heart attack upon learning that during his absence in Spirit's Edge Mia had casually gone with Maple and others to explore some fucking hideout and had an encounter with the Giovanni-Mewtwo, just based on the promise that there might be fights. (He'd tried to...

Distributing stats in the following order, as usual: - maximize Stamina - maximize Attack - maximize HP - distribute any remaining points across Defense and Resistance so as to keep them roughly equal, favoring Defense I'm also buying a Reviver Seed. Finally, on turn 1 (unless the strategists...

'Sociopath.' That was a word people often used to describe Mia. Rocky didn't seem very much like what they meant by it at all, though. Maybe only the other him was, but then why would he not be the same? She frowned. The most likely explanation was Nate just didn't know what he was talking...