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Look, it's me, actually reading beyond chapter one! Miracle! I enjoy this - suggests he's studied this specific thing a bit, which makes sense for where his interests lie. Also enjoy the worldbuilding in here. Same with Machop outright challenging him, and it being customary to accept a...

"What's overpowered naturally mean here? Like, that's... that's not what happened to Soda, right?" Couldn't be, right? Then he'd have looked like S'more to Breaker, flat, not shattered. "As in, the parasite itself overpowers them?"

He heard yelling behind him and-- oh, for crying out loud. Had Nate fucking followed him here? How the fuck was this any of his-- He glanced back at the stammering Chip. Whatever. So long as they got any kind of actionable fucking information. He had better things to do than dignify that little...

Dave gritted his teeth. "Okay, that's great, but no, I mean the fucking parasites. You said you'd get Buffet and Xernatus and so on. Anything come from that, other than the bit about them being like Substitutes? Or did you just waste everyone's time, again?"

Dave threw a glare at the parasites before marching up to Chip. What the fuck was he working on and why did he have the strongest suspicion it had nothing to do with the impending Sodapocalypse. "Hey. Chip. You get those results you talked about? Anything new?"

The strategy meeting had suggested the parasites were pieces of the Eternatus that'd gotten mixed up with Maple, that they functioned like Substitutes. Cool. Great. Info they really could have used before Diyem had killed the parasite that was in Eien, thus sending all that power over to make...

Thanks for all the lovely reviews, everyone! Responding to a couple of things that warrant comment/prompted rambling, but I loved reading all your thoughts and commentary~ Ahaha, I didn't mean to but then this was all my first ideas for the row of prompts I picked. I was going to do some actual...

Also betaed chapter 4 of Different Eyes. Also, worked on writing for some probably ~3 hours since last time?

Chapter six time! Prepare to be introduced to Rick...'s junior trainers. Chapter 6: The Mammal, the Monster and the Mental Change Mark walked silently with his Pokémon towards the city. He was still afraid of what he held in his Pokéball, attached to his own belt. This Gyarados was...

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Hey there! I'm here for Catnip, reviewing chapter one. First, some live reactions/line comments: Minor thing, but the past tense of lie is lay. laid is the past tense of to lay, i.e. to lay something else somewhere. I'm pretty sure you want "fell closed"? Intriguing opening! It definitely...

"Oh, cool, you're sure. Of course you are." A cloying scent sent an unnatural feeling of calm through him, and Dave struggled against its pull. He wanted to tell them they were fucking naïve. But what else to expect? They were a literal goddamn kid. "Look, stay away from him when we go up there...

Dave was silent, a taste of bile in his mouth. He glanced at his badge for a response for the umpteenth time, but there was nothing. Whatever Chip had by now back at the lab had better be good. He was going to fucking strangle him if this turned out to be another waste of time.

"Yeah, I fucking know we're not going to magically fix him with friendship and hope," Dave snapped. He was back to staring at the sky, at the pieces of the moon rearranging themselves. Soda had the power to just do that. No big deal. Did he have to rebuild the cannon, or would that be back too...

Dave looked at Bahamut. “Great. Yeah, we were all waiting for your expert opinion. Local genocide god murder advocate has opinions on the sanity of a guy he’s never fucking talked to. What could go wrong.”

[Scotch > SodaG]: Look, he was in the process of firing the world-ending ca [Scotch > SodaG]: Hold on, it’s pulling itself back together. What the fuck. Dave stared up at the moon. So Prime was still up there. Tenacious fucker. Had the blast even put a dent in him? Maybe he was weakened enough...

Dave stared up at the shattered moon. The whole thing, just… blown to pieces. He clenched his jaw and exhaled, looking away. Wasn’t like there would’ve been anything left of Soda to salvage anyway. Died trying to end the fucking world. Good riddance. (If he was even dead. Wasn’t he some kind of...

No answer before the moon was— shit. He rushed forward, gritting his teeth. “Soda, wait!” Why the fuck would he hear him? He was on the fucking moon. If there was no kind of response or sign immediately he was hightailing it through that portal.

The sight of the moon, even closer than earlier, made Dave's skin crawl. Soda was up there, right now, deteriorating. What did the moon moving closer mean? Was Soda getting impatient, wondering what the holdup was? Had he been watching their fight, somehow? Bahamut was suggesting they have Eien...

Of course Diyem just destroyed the goddamn parasite. Good thing they had two of them already back at the lab. Owen was falling, and Dave sprinted towards where he was hurtling down, calling forth Radiance to shield him and cushion his fall. Maybe. Probably his weight would crush the barriers...