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!!!! Another chapter? Yes, please!! I really enjoy the themes that are already making themselves known in this story—largely, ones of redemption, forgiveness and loving yourself, etc. Kotone is a lovely little ray of sunshine, she is simply too pure for this world—and she’s exactly what Silver...

!!! @OldschoolJohto one of your companions is a FREAKING MOKA POT hkjhkhhsjd You’re amazing. 😂

Hmm, question! If I write a one-shot and then later use it in my long-fic, is that considered “cheating?” Would it no longer be considered a one-shot if I’m writing with the possible intention of including it in my long-fic later? I’m also potentially interested in being a judge! 👀

Chapter 15: Reunion They were being followed. Wes had suspected it for a few days now; he could have sworn he'd felt an unwelcome pair of eyes boring into him from the shadows as he and Rui spent the days combing the streets for more trainers to battle, and was almost certain he'd glimpsed...

Name: HelloYellow/Yellow Interests: Mostly trainer fic, but I’m not against PMD! OC-centric, fluff, hurt/comfort, morally grey characters, found family, friendship, romance, trainers bonding with their Pokémon Restrictions: Can tolerate minimal gore/horror, but nothing much beyond that...

Did I drop everything when I got the notification that a new chapter was posted? Uh. Maybe. Y-you can’t prove anything! *sweats* Anyway, here we go:

LAST MINUTE AIR STRIKE I AM SORRY KINT One chapter of Legendary Adventures, 253 words. Plus one for the theme: 2 points!

Here for two things! Last minute review blitz because WHY NOT, and to begin my end of our review swap! I gotta say, I’m already really enjoying the story so far. Koa has a distinct, if somewhat cocky, personality, and I love that you’ve built up his *lofty* expectations because we all know...

HERE IT IS: Reviewed 10 chapters of The envy of eden (Chapters 0-6, 8-10). (Edit: forgot to add my word count because my brain is fried. 2805 words!) Plus one for the theme: 11 points!

Another MEGA REVIEW, let’s do this! I’ve left my general thoughts on this fic as a whole a while back, before I really knew how to actually dive deep into a review and put my thoughts into words. I’ll just restate a few of the things I’ve said before: Your prose? GORGEOUS. I haven’t read your...

Here we go!! I’m finally all caught up, and oh boy, things are getting interesting, aren’t they? I have so many questions!

Reviewed chapters 1-2 of The Meaning of Power, 517 words. Plus one for the theme for 3 points! Chapters 6-8 of Eternal Shadows, 789 words, 3 points.

I’ve had this on my list for a while, and then you went and uploaded a new chapter, so I thought—let’s do this! Overall, your prose is very nice and flows pretty well. I do think you could probably trim down on a lot of extra details to help with the pacing—it feels like there’s a handful of...

Back for MORE. *roars* Chapters 7-12 of Continental Divides, 1524 words. 6 points. Chapter 8 of The Suicune’s Choice, 297 words. 1 point.

Chapter 8, let’s do this! Oh, boy. Right away, the title has me very intrigued. “Raid” definitely implies a lot of things are going to go down this chapter. A solid chapter! And I was not expecting that twist at the end, at least, not so soon. I like that you didn’t fully reveal what it was...

hahaha am I trying to review 6 chapters in one fell swoop? Yep. Am I going to regret it? Maybe. Anyways—may I just say, I am SO invested in this story. The many different perspectives, the way you make us feel for and sympathize with each perspective even when they’re on total opposite sides of...

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Hi, I’m hopping aboard the crisis evolution hype train! I absolutely LOVE that stuff! Chibi’s take on it making things worse is also a good one. Maybe the evolved Pokémon fights more poorly than before because it’s not used to its new body? Or maybe it isn’t used to its new strength and...

back for more! Let’s do this! these next couple chapters had quite a few mind-bending moments, but in a good way! I found myself asking “what is going on!?” at the end of chapter 5, LOL. I’ll get to my specific thoughts on that below!

Reviewed Chapter 6 of The Suicune’s Choice, 314 words. Plus one point for friendly fire for two points! Edit: reviewed chapters 4-5 of Eternal Shadows, 563 words. extra point for theme is 3 points! total: 5 points