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Chapter 11 Interesting that we're opening this one from Acacia's POV. We've heard a bit about how Saltriv had an uncle who was a hero, so it's good to get a little bit of his perspective on things. He's the most sensible link between the protagonists and the World-Savers' Council. I like how...

Fic: Making It Big Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/making-it-big.902/post-52473 Number of Chapters: 2 Weekly theme: Already claimed Fic: Hunter Haunted Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/hunter-haunted.371/page-5#post-52500 Number of...

chapter 5 is finallyyyy heeerrrrreee I appreciate how many characterful moments were jam-packed into this! I know that stitching all this material together was a real pain in the ass, but it all flows smoothly from one scene to the next, with threads linking one to the other, so none of the...

help I just keep coming back I really like the image of Lena staying up late with Champ, discussing the pros and cons of fighting Elesa. Constant reminders that these two are a team and they face things as a team. And they really did hold their own against Elesa! Despite Lena's nervousness...

Chapter 9 hoooo boy this chapter I've often said that the reason I like whump is because characters show you who they truly are when they're at their most vulnerable. When the fronts, the masks, the defense mechanisms all get peeled away, what's left behind? This chapter is basically "Red...

Chapters 10-11 Worth it to get interviewed solely for the pastries and pecha juice. :coolbat: Nah, but in actuality, the interview went a lot better than I was expecting! Stel was understanding, sympathetic, and informative--three things that Lena sorely needed at this stage of her journey...

IT'S BEEN 3000 YEARS BUT THE FLASHBACKS ARE HERE For those not in the know, the #1 most-requested feature from readers over the years has been more scenes with Jade, Ajia, and Starr being friends in school before Starr moved away. The issue was that I didn't know how to include that content...

Fic Title: Making It Big Link to Review: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/making-it-big.902/post-52268 Number of Chapters Read: 1 Weekly Theme: Yes Fic Title: The 1K Words Oneshots (Last Mon Standing) Link to Review...

o heck this is cute Going into this, I was expecting adorable heartwarming fluff, and there was of course plenty of that, but along with it there's a lot of surprisingly poignant stuff! Also, a lot of genuinely pretty imagery. I thiiink my favorite one so far is actually the Arceus one...

Hey there, I'd been curious to check this out for a while! Challenging oneself to tell a self-contained story within a very small wordcount is a good exercise in narrative efficiency and prose brevity, and I think you pulled off both here. I'd be really curious to see you do more one-shots in...

He absolutely does. Hey there, back for chapter 9! I like how Champ continues to be the who pushes Lena to finally take the plunge when she's stalling at something, first with Nurse Joy, then with the gym. Interesting that gyms don't allow spectators, but I suppose it makes sense with what we...

Name: Ajia Pronouns: she/her Age: 16 Species: Human Appearance: [Pretty much just a normal Delcatty] Blurb: The paragon of optimism and encouragement who can't let a problem go unsolved (regardless of whether or not anyone wants it solved shhh). With a sharp strategic mind and a knack for...

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Chapter 8 Dang, her dad only makes 2000 poke a week? With the prices for everything being vaguely yen-like, as in canon, that's only around 20 bucks. Maybe large chunks of his would-be pay get automatically deducted for bills. (Aaand now I'm thinking of those mining jobs that funneled all pay...

Gonna just go ahead and echo Pen that I had to scroll down one line at a time while reading chapter 8 lmao. The sheer level of tension throughout was thick enough to cut a knife. With each lie out of Red's mouth, I'd be right there with him like "right, yeah, that seems logical enough" only for...

Alrighty, time for some Blitz review replies. I'll be rounding up reviews about once a week. Next update should hopefully be the flashback extras!

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Brisa! :D :D :D I finally get to see where it all began for Brisa after more than a year of interacting with her in Blacklight. It's pretty amazing how much of her was here, right from the very start! She may have gotten two cubic tons of development in BLC, but the core of who she was hasn't...

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