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I'm back, but I might be lurking between updates while I get myself sorted. I also plan to return to Catnips. Please bare with me =3

I'm really sorry for the long hiatus! It was meant to be last September, but I was really struggling to write. I'm feeling better now, and able to write again. I should be around more, too, as I vanished from TR for a while. Sorry about that =( I've finished Part 4, and I'm a few chapters into...

I am so late in replying to these! I'm so sorry! I'll reply here, and submit the next chapter in a new post. Thanks so much for reviewing! The next part is coming right up!

38 - A Cry for Help It had been a silent burial. No one could bring themselves to say anything, if they had anything to say. Mint watched Razorclaw cover Rio’s body with soil, and once he’d finished, she stepped forwards to place a small red flower on the mound. Tears pricked her eyes and her...

37 - Flygon Times Cleo was on tenterhooks as she gathered up their tent. Faith busied herself beside her, looking as refreshed and bright as she always did. Cleo rubbed at the bags beneath her eyes and finished tugging the iron thorns from the dry ground. She’d barely slept a wink. Camping in...

36 - Monster The lab was pitch black at night. Enigma had never feared the dark. He’d been that creature in the dark that pokemon feared for many years. However, the eerie sobs and whispers from the surrounding captives made the dark in the lab wildly unsettling. He sat huddled in the middle of...

35 - Milkwort Root It wasn’t easy to tell how late in the day it was. Through the sparse canopy, the sky was a murky grey. The sun tried its hardest to break through the heavy clouds, but could manage no more than a hazy glow. It had long since vanished beyond the trees, leaving Cleo with very...

34 - Falling into Place Starshine scurried along the office floor after Tad, flapping his fluffy wings to steady himself. His tiny talons scraped and skidded over Tinker’s discarded paperwork, throwing the little hatchling off balance. The odd word left Starshine’s beak, joined together with a...

Here for a Review Exchange! Chapter 1 The introduction reminds me of the original you wrote when they were thieving from a shop. I almost remember something similar when Kuki told the farmer that she couldn't see his name on the berry tree XD I also feel like Kuki is older in this write-up...

33 - Infected It was a somewhat gloomy morning. The sky was smattered with clouds, which the sun seemed insistent on remaining behind despite the vast smudges of blue between the grey. Cleo was grateful for it. It meant it would be likely to rain soon, bringing an end to the oddly dry cooling...

32 - Trouble Yurlik jolted awake as the entire tree shook, almost throwing him from his perch. He squawked and flailed his wings to regain his balance and fend off several murkrow as they bolted into the air in a flurry of feathers and alarmed caws. The honchkrow shook his head and leered at...

31 - The Watch Enigma had spent most of the night clambering through the branches, his mind elsewhere, not allowing him to take anything in. The forest was oddly silent, not so much as a murkrow’s raucous caw to shatter his thoughts. Harlequin… Enigma clenched his jaw so tight it hurt. He...

Chapter 30 - Priorities Faith flopped onto her back on the hay mattress. “Oh, this is a cozy little den!” “Yup! Nothing like a good sleep after a good meal!” Spark copied her, lying splayed out in a small nest beside Cleo. “I’m bushed! I could sleep for the entire Cold Season!” “Don’t...

Chapter 29 - Rio's Plan Tinker sat in silence, resting his head on his steepled paws as he took in everything Cleo and her friends had just told him. They all sat waiting for him to say something, the silence broken only by Spark munching on an apple. Mischief hadn’t said a word since they’d...

((I'm going to abstain from voting this day as I've got a lot of reading here to catch up on! I'll skim over it asap!))

Spark's whiskers twitched and she swished her tail as an uncontrollable rage boiled up inside her. "Little one?" Her eyes flashed with electricity. "Little one?! I'll show you 'little', tyrant!" Electricity flashed across the plain, engulfing the dragon and any unfortunate enough to get caught...

Spark stiffened and looked up at the large dragon. Her nose twitched and she narrowed her eyes into slits. "What does it look like?! I'm building a fort so I can work out some way to protect everyone here from YOU!" Her whiskers crackled dangerously, sending stray sparks flying across the...

Spark, seemingly oblivious to whatever was going on around her, stood at one end of the plane. All the fighting and scuffling was nothing more than noise as she worked away. Her tiny paws tugged at the malleable ground, dragging it up around her. It never stayed for long, springing back to a...

After hearing you talk about this, it was nice to get it for Catnip. The opening chapter is a good length, giving the reader a chance to get a feel for the various characters. The pokemon interactions are as cute as they'd be in the anime, and it's nice they have a real sense of their trainers'...

Back for Catnip! Chapters 6-9 It was interesting to see how Jiri bonded with Asaph. There were a few curious things I found myself wondering. Jiri's quietness and lack of attention to people talking about things that don't interest him was oddly relatable XD So far, I don't see him developing...