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BLITZ BOMB TIME Chapter 6 Lol, Wes is NOT gonna get rid of Rui that easily. Especially when Neo and Novo are as attached as they are. I sincerely love when stories constantly have a “what now” feeling and OSAS seems to fit that dynamic perfectly. Phenac lockdown time! I bet it’s gonna go...

Alright! So, I’m here for the catnip Blitz! Full disclosure, I’ve read this fic before on FFN. I’ve told you before that this fic is actually one of my inspirations in fanfic. So, it’s a shame that I’ve never reviewed it before (I blame the crippling anxiety). On to the review! Chapter 1 I...

BLITZ exchange time! Prologue: Barry and Marley as the king and queen of a Galar Empire? Like... the Barry and Marley from DPPt? And the SwSh PC is their son? I think? Either way he’s a well trained, but untested warrior who is being sent to quell some sort of “barbarian” raids along with...

Catnip BLITZ I am not usually a PMD reader, but I’m a sucker for detective stories and the atmosphere of this one seems so light and easy. I love the casual banter between Oscar and Beningo as they work through the opening stages of the case. Speaking of, this almost felt like something ripped...

Roulette Time!!! A very ominous opening. I haven’t read enough of your works. This is very atmospheric and very much my kind of vibe. Oh shit that seems like a LOT of fire. That’s very NOT good and I’m wondering what could possibly be behind it. This is a very effective and affecting way of...

A Guarding Dragon Oh? A flapple short? I love the concept of this collection already. Such an underused mon, yet there’s so much there to be expanded upon. A flapple as a guardian of an orchard? I’ve seen you describe some of your stuff on discord and the forum before, but conceptually it’s...

It’s been a while since my last review for this, so I’ll recap my stream of thoughts as I read through the first 5 chapters! Recap thoughts: A new prologue? That or I only read the old one… either way, I really like them as a complement to each other. Sets up Florent as some clear kind of big...

Alright everyone! I’m off vacation, I’m caught upon my catnips and ready to shill! All my stories linked here should be considered rated M for Violence. Some elements of body horror are present in the main story. Journey is my massive interconnected series that’s currently building towards a...

Alright! It’s delayed and long overdue, but your double destinies catnip is finally here! I really do like the opening argument. It was a little tricky to figure out who was speaking and what they were, but once I did I found the character dynamics to be really solid (And I loved the inhuman...

Nightmare The night was black. That was not unusual. The night was always black in Alamos Town. Nestled atop an isolated mesa to the north of the Oreburgh Valley, it was shielded from the radiant light of Jubilife and Hearthome by the small peaks of the Ravaged Path in the west and by the...

Holy hell, I knew from the title alone (and experience with some of your other works) that this would hit the feels. It definitely reads like a solid gut punch. From the moment you introduce her, it’s clear that Kari cares deeply for her pokemon. Her bond with her dragonite is so evident. Makes...

Catnip time! I’m not a huge PMD guy but I’ll refrain from mentioning it during your review. As well, I’m available on discord if you’d like to discuss anything further. This almost seems like it’s from an Omnipotent being’s perspective here. Unsure if that’s intentional or a traditional start...

Alright! It’s late, but I’m here! I mentioned it in a DM to you, but I feel like this does serve as an effective prologue. It hits the right beats, it introduces a central mystery, and it makes me want to know more. I do feel like there are a few clunky places, but they really don’t detract and...

Some tips I see here for my own reviews in the future lol. My favourite way to tell you things is environmental clues! I love doing it, glad it got picked up on! As far as I know, it’s meagre. Although I do tend to use Uk/Canadian spelling rather than the American. There might be a few errant...

I figured I’d start checking out the Contest shots and here I am! On a roll today and I figured I’d read this too! It can even count as the Reddit contest review! Larvitar is an inspired choice. I also do remember a shadow tyranitar late in Colo, so I can see where this one is heading. I...

Gym battles do sort of become these big massive spectacles later in the fic, but then they promptly lose all their significance as the plot spirals out of control from there. The whole “Marcus is poor” thing kinda gets abandoned once he gets his feet under him, but it’s not completely gone...

Chapter 3-5 time! Wes and Rui have a pretty good dynamic. What with Wes being a broody, edgy bastard and Rui being a ball of unbridled joy and enthusiasm. It’s also a hilarious touch to have the narrative itself be lampooning Rui’s height. Barely 2 chapters into her appearance and Rui has...

What We Do For Our Children, my entry to the contest has been edited and posted to TR Final Version