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Chapter 150 – Into Thirds “. . . and with that, we’ll be heading to the Abyssal Sea now.” “Wonderful. Good luck, Team Alloy.” Dialga nodded firmly and looked at Palkia. “Well, it seems that Team Alloy is making good time. They’re about two days ahead of schedule. Darkrai’s nightmares weren’t...

Thanks for the review, Vray! You had some good advice here, though I'd like to note that the chapter you just read was written five years ago and had only been revised two years ago. You may be treading a lot of old ground trying to nitpick delivery syntax, and it would probably be much easier...

Chapter 149 – Nightmare Hot Spot went from calm to chaos in seconds, because seconds were all they had left. If Alexander got to South Null Village as quickly as Manny said he would, then there was a risk their Waypoints—precarious as they were—would be destroyed. And while they could...

I replied to you on United but I'm glad you enjoyed yourself here, Fobbie! Yep, you've reached the point in the story where the plot has finally kicked off. The ride fully begins now! Yeah, I do a bit of this early on and I'd probably write it a bit differently had I gone a different style...

Thanks for the review, Arukona! I'm glad that despite the relatively slow beginnings, things are picking up for you and even the lulls and breaths between plot points can behave as something interesting to look over. I'm particularly glad for the character interactions being so appealing to you...

Chapter 147 – Spirit Lineage The last thing Owen was expecting to throw several plans into question was a child hatching. It had slipped his mind completely, that egg. But now, he was balancing a little Charmander between his horns while sitting at the table of the conference room. Zena tended...

Chapter 146 – Four Teams It was deep into winter. The world had nearly ended during the harvest season, and there was a massive shortage of supplies for all the refugees. Emily, the Shadow Lugia, was still blindly rampaging throughout the world, but due to her complete aimlessness, she was...

Total points: 43.75 Level of prize: Sprite Companion ~ Final! Type of Prize: Misc Preferred method of contact: Discord Marowak! (15 points) -- Level of Prize: Level 1 (20 points) Type of prize: Review Preferred method of contact: Discord Hands of Creation!

Congratulations, Owen! You've leveled up! You have gained a new feat: Crippling Trust Issues. Good luck! Turns out Arceus can actually be a god when the other god is out of commission. He's just one of those people who isn't good working with others at his level. Still a little full of it...

All caught up! Happy V-Wheel from United! I read chapters 3 and 4 for this. Overall, I'd say that these were two solid chapters for buildup, but upon entering chapter 5 or 6 I'd hope for some kind of shoe to finally drop. So far we're sort of just making our way through the story and not a lot...

I think this is the second-to-latest chapter, "Susana," that I'll be reviewing here! Happy catnip! I think, overall, while the prose was good and the pacing was nice, the actual logistics and narrative framing of this chapter struck me as a little strange, especially since this seems to be...

This'll be a review for the first chapter! Happy Catnip! I'd like to open by saying that overall this was a nice way to open into something that's from a nonstandard perspective. It helped situate me very nicely and despite being a "villain" team, it does give the vibe of why they believe...

Special Episode 11 – Dark Radiance Every night, as he drew nearer and nearer to evolution, Alex dreamed of the strange blade made from dragon scales and spells. It was the one destined to cut through his neck. Each time, in that dim haze of a nightmare, his other half would grasp the blade in...

The funny part is I didn't actually view any Jojo related material until years after that chapter was published! I sort of unintentionally took on several anime tropes since that's just the sort of thing I enjoy, and turned it into reading material. Ah, this is an error on my part with clumsy...

Weekly fic rec, week 3: I'd like to recommend I'm a Marionette for a somewhat more unique reason. First, I'd like to preface this by saying that it's a very heavy story and quite divorced from what we'd expect of the characters involved canonically. However, if you can move past that and read...

Yes and no. The whole thing about water going into a river too hot after being used for server cooling is very real, though, and it got a company in trouble and they had to stop and find other ways to fix it (because it was messing with the fish population.) Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed...

Half of this is theorizing and I'm all for it! I'll clarify a few things just so it doesn't send you too far off the beaten path, but in general I'm loving the speculation that's going on here, This is the biggest one, and frankly it's my fault for following the "Southern Tradition" for...

Thanks for the review, Fobbie! I replied to you elsewhere for all of these, but I may as well briefly state that I'm very happy that you were interested in the plot more now that you're getting into chapter 5 or so. That's usually when it picks up, and I do wish I could have made it pick up...

This is an interesting start, opening with an explosion that was only in their head, so to speak. But at the same time there's talk about it being normal and just some kind of thing that someone has. Maybe it's because of all the other stories I've read that deal in mental health lately, but I...