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Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. -I like the machine in the head (RKS System?) explanation for Null’s (presumably) increased cognitive abilities, while at the same time being sheltered and inexperienced enough that they do things...

This is an old one-shot that was written in late 2017 for a contest on Serebii focusing on platonic relationships. If you're reading this for the blitz, please know that I don't consider this representative of my current writing abilities. Nevertheless, I hope you enjoy! XxX I stumble through...

oh boy raffles; the things i never win Weekly ref: @SparklingEspeon 's Crashing Fate I like legends being portrayed as more than just big kaiju that roar and stomp around angrily, so a story that seems to be all about them (and their possibly poor, conspiracy-related management of the world)...

Places We Call Home Lonk: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/places-we-call-home.104/post-51236 Chapters: 6 Words: 1572 Theme: Week 1 Fortune Favors the Bold Lonk: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-fortune-favors-the-bold.845/post-51245...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. 1 -Launcher Golem is definitely a cooler alternative to Mustache Golem for the Alolan form. That said, this “mountain pass” could do with more description. Colors? Smells? Other terrain beyond...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. I am here for vengeance. And eggscapdes. I know these earlier chapters are from around two years ago, so maybe some of this won’t apply anymore. 1 -So, if I’m reading that prologue right, we have...

PMD: Liberators of Fate Lonk: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pok%C3%A9mon-mystery-dungeon-liberators-of-fate.505/post-51133 Chapters: 6 Words: 1532 Theme: N/A PMD: Weaversong Lonk: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/weaversong.937/post-51137 Chapters: 1...

Merry Blitzmas Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. -I approve of this punny chapter title. It’s beautiful. Chef’s kiss. -I’m not personally sure if I’d describe a sneasel as having paws. Their claws are basically the entirety of their hands, kind of...

Merry Blitzmas Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. I guess it’s time for Lance’s descent into Necrozmafied villainy. 32 -I don’t remember if we’ve seen Scar using fire moves before, but giving him green fire for that whole ghostly vibe thing is...

PMD: Rebirth Lonk: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pok%C3%A9mon-mystery-dungeon-rebirth.402/post-51081 Chapters: 5 (none are on TR yet, but will be eeveentually) Words: 1340 Theme: N/A

Merry Blitzmas Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. Also, the review’s in spoilers, since you haven’t posted these chapters to TR yet. :V

At this point I’ll take anything. Probably going to need to spend my points to make it happen. @_@

Just a Normal Day Lonk: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/just-a-normal-day.943/post-50966 Chapters: 2 Words: 722 Theme: Week 1 Stray Lonk: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/stray.962/post-50977 Chapters 5 Words: 1366 Theme: Week 1

Merry Blitzmas Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. 1 -Very vivid imagery to start things off and give a bleak, oppressive atmosphere. I do think you could at least make an attempt to give some more description to the shadows, unless you intend to...

Merry Blitzmas Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. 1 -Not going to lie, while I also used to label locations at the start of scenes, I’ve soured on the practice. You should establish the setting and time within the narration itself. -Similarly...

Crashing Fate Faces of Evil: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/crashing-fate.870/post-50888 Parts: 4 (prologue & 3 chapters) Words: 1146 Theme: Week 1

Merry Blitzmas Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will. Prologue -Arceus here to offer Espy riches if she just gives him her credit card details and social security number. Totes not a scam. Will say that, given the fic’s subject matter, I think calling...