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Dragon's Dance Chapter 2 +1 theme +1 chapter like 1.8k words or something idk the exact amount Death is Lonely chapters 2-4 +1 theme 1.2k words

Wow, haha. Imagine reading this months ago and never bothering to leave another comment. Couldn’t be me. Honestly, it was in part because I’ve had a hard time drawing up the energy to write reviews, but also partly because it was hard for me to think of anything to say beyond ‘good story pls...

Reviewed Chapter 1 of Path of Valor. +1 theme (reviewed the prologue in the past) 951 words

Henlo, Amby! I read chapter one a while back, but life made reviewing things tricky in general around that time. Glad I get to rectify the situation. :) Interesting that we mention Yuna’s use of sleep seeds to open the chapter. I could see that coming into play somehow down the line. She’s...

Reviewed Speckled Silver. Word Count: 687

This was such a cute short! I loved all the little character moments. I’ve always been a big fan of the partner in explorers. It makes me happy when their background is explored further. And the names coupled with all the cat pokemon totally gave me Warriors vibes. I’m always down for that. Do...

Thanks for the review! Perfectly understandable, so no worries. Yeah, I wanted to push myself outside my comfort zone by attempting 3rd omniscient, but as you can see, I... struggled. A very good learning experience, though. Kecleon was my favorite too, and he's the stealth main protagonist...

Reviewed Resting Place. +1 for theme 594 word Reviewed The Best Game. +1 for theme 415 words

Ah, thanks for sharing your thoughts! Always appreciated. You always manage to find the one paragraph that gave me the most trouble in my short stories, lol. I must've rewritten this segment like three or four times. I'll see what I can do to clarify it, and the other prose suggestions have...

I remember reading this oneshot months ago. I meant to leave a comment then, but didn’t. I have no excuse. Still! Better late than never. The thing that always stood out to me the most was the relationship between Poppy and Lavender. It takes such a sharp turn from so many partner-hero...

This popped up on the front page, and I decided to read it since it was short. Since it was old, I hadn't planned on saying anything, but then I was like, eh, why not. A lot of what I might've pointed out has already been noted, so I'll just stick to a couple brief observations: First, I like...

I took a pretty different tack with this review, myself. If I only focused on the story itself in a vacuum, I probably would've just gushed for 1k words haha. I had fun too! There's something innately enjoyable about sitting down and analyzing well-written stories, as well as pinpointing...

Reviewed the prologue of Spring. +1 for theme. Word total is 1136

First of all, curse you for your lovely banners. It’s not fair that other people have multiple artistic talents. I’m going to have to file a complaint over this. Second, when I started writing this review, my plan was to discuss both the prologue and chapter one, as that’s what I usually like...

Question, if you read and review multiple chapters, aren't you supposed to pick whichever gives you less points between word count and chapters read? Or did I misunderstand that? Anyway, prologue and chapter one of Double Edged reviewed. 1162 words.

Hey, Luker. Excited to check out your stuff. It’s pretty late and I’m a little loopy so hopefully this is coherent, lol. I always find stories based on roleplays fascinating. They tend to have a bit of a different rhythm to them, even when they’re rewritten for more of a traditional novel...

good criticism is: Specific. Actionable. Contextual.

Reviewed the first and second prologue of Stargazer Chronicles. +1 theme 911 words

Reviewed the prologue and first chapter of Ties of Fate. +1 for theme 1026 words.

Eh, what up, Fuse! Excited to hang with your characters here, since I never really had the chance to in Blacklight. I’ll be covering both the prologue and the first chapter. <3 So it looks like the prologue is our fairly standard ‘open with a quiz’ beginning. It does have a slight twist in that...