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Kohath glared back. "To cower just to be polite is the brainless action. A Helixian acts to get what he needs, and he will use force if necessary."

Kohath slammed his hand on the counter and leaned in. "I call you only what you are, lower-human. Now, explain. Or would you like me to beat it out of you?"

Kohath noticed one of the men look at him, and his look was not respectful. Kohath narrowed his eyes and walked up to him. "You, lower-human," he started. "You will explain this place to me."

Hi there! Here for Catnip, reviewing chapter 17. A note not specific to this chapter - I skimmed the previous chapter to recap and I like that you put in some small reminders of things, like mentioning Rui still thinks Wes was undercover in Snagem or that Duking doesn't trust Wes. It's been a...

a) I wanna write for the Deathly and Mary Sue corpses b) I should be able to write any time c) I'd rather not be the first in any corpse.

Kohath should have known there was something off about the letter he had received. He'd never have thought speaking out the word given to him would have actually resulted in anything happening, but now he was here, wherever 'here' was, and no longer at the palace. What was the meaning of this...

I don't know how much I'll participate, but I think I might wanna pop in. Name: Kohath I Age: Forty-something Appearance: Two meters tall, bronze skin, dark brown hair and beard, physique like a Greek statue, extensive body hair, piercing yellow eyes, enlarged canine teeth. Wears white robes...

August 1st Game Sign-ups open until Friday, August 4th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once your assignment is...

Hey all! This is that mystery dungeon -centric PMD oneshot I've been talking about. It's my first time writing an actual mystery dungeon, and I hope I did the concept justice. Special thanks to @GumPlum for betareading this! His insights were really valuable. A note on content - this story...

hi there! here we are with chapter two. it should be noted that the next one may take longer than a week to upload as i have not yet finished it. here's to hoping it isn't months. as a shock to everyone, this chapter has no specific content warnings. still going to rate it as teen, though, due...

hey everyone! just popping in to say the first chapter of the sequel story has been posted. have a good day!

Hey everyone! Here we finally are. This story's been in the works for a good five years, but I just haven't been able to plan it out... until now. For those unaware, this is the sequel to Hunter, Haunted, my main story. It will also be the final sequel and the end of Red's story. Length is kind...

Here for chapter 5! Since it's past of the past, you'd want "hadn't been a dream, none of that had been". Introducing him as hyperactive is kind of telling rather than showing, and since you do show it well later that he is hyperactive, this addendum could be omitted. I think it's unnecessary...

hi all! here i am with the extra i promised. this is the first thing i wrote from samson's perspective, so i had to go back and tweak it a little according to how i wrote samson in judgment. anyway, rated teen for some violent imagery. see you next week for the upload of the first chapter of...

Hey there! I've been reading more of this fic at work when it's slow. Here are my thoughts on chapters 3 and 4 for our exchange. This "it" is pretty far from the word it's referring to ("door"). It could be replaced with "the door" to read better. As a demonym, Unovan ought to be capitalized...

Hey! I read everything that's up so far for our exchange. Here are my thoughts. Shiny! Cool. I like this line. The "and yet" makes it seem like the thought that's to come is something motivating Chappie to go instead of stay, but then it's said that the thought terrified her. I was expecting...

ladies, gents, enbies, here we are. after two years, we have reached the end of the story. this is the final chapter of hunter, haunted. i will still be back next week to upload the extra chapter that's from samson's POV, but the main story ends here. though red's story will continue in the...

Hey! Here for Catnip. I read chapters 1-2. Here are my thoughts. The amount of written out stuttering is kind of excessive. This over-the-top slapstick is a bit weird after a scene where a Chimchar is gravely wounded. With no breaks between the dialogue, she comes off as psychotic, getting...

Red recoiled at the giant black sky-serpent arriving. "Fuck," left his mouth. He wondered why Rayquaza was black instead of green, but the human boy beat him to asking about it. The serpent didn't seem to pick up on the question being about color, so it must have been ordinary for her. Then...

"Boy, you're slow. Yes, you're not home anymore. If you're wondering how to get back, we're in the middle of figuring that out. Word is that the trick is somewhere in a storehouse, and we're on our way there."