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So it seems a lot of significant changes have been made since last time I read! I basically reread the new prologue and chapters 1-8 to catchup to where I am now. The new prologue is completely different I see. I will admit, I am of two minds. I honestly enjoyed the first one a lot with the...

hello Amby! I'm doing your review of PoV, and I'll cover primarily chapters 2-4, since it looks like I read the prologue and 1 already. Since this is an in-depth review, I'll be doing a slightly different style. First I'll go chapter by chapter to give impressions. Then I'll try to analyze a...

Chapter 7

Looking for a short but deeply impactful fic to read? Pano's Final Gambit is a masterclass of a tale, a story that keeps punching and punching, and will draw you on an emotional ride from start to finish. It's tense, powerful and nail-biting. Hoenn's Elite Four and Champion Steven take front...

Chapter 2: My gosh Pano, starting with a banger and banger prose. 'In The Shadow of a God' is a great chapter title if you're into that kind of thing btw. You almost gave me a heart attack. I know you're not a cruel writer but boy for a second I sure was scared. Crunchy prose. I love it...

Oh my gosh what a chapter. This one, this one is my favorite yet I think. Everything about it pressed all my buttons. Self hating but determined protagonist who makes a choice to stand up do what the heck she wants and go on a journey, all the pokemon/human worldbuilding, the friendship and the...

Nyohohoh this was an amusing line. I love mixing the mundane with the fantastical. A fellow appreciator of spelling and grammar, I see! I had a good cackle at this line. Everyone said I'm a monster so I would prove them all wrong!!!.... by being a monster. Its always a really amusing thing to...

Update to my earlier post, in regards to week 3 theme: Chapters 15 and beyond are free game for Legendary Adventures Chapter 4 & 5 for Home is Where the Hoenn Is are eligible

Aight time to do a blitz review, hehe. This will be some pretty quick thoughts as I was reading. First thing is first, banger art. I think it really captures the mood. Just had to say that. So I'll start with a quick thing that surprised me about this. When I first read the description, in...

I've had a mind to check this out for a long time now, especially since it features the best pokemon. I'm glad I finally did! I'm mainly evaluating this from a casual reader perspective, so I probably won't give a lot of in-depth crit. Normally, I find second-person one of the hardest tenses...

Holy smokes Q pop off huh? This is an impulse review on my phone so uh. I hope there's no typos. Anyways this had me cackling, it was short, punchy and humorous. I'm not a laugh out loud person but a lot of the parts of this story make me do that snort laugh, and one particular part literally...

I have been meaning to drop a review on this for ages, figured now is a good a time as any! I have to say, I really enjoyed this! A Dodrio MC is completely unique as far as I'm aware, and you did a great job. I love the idea of each of the heads different outlooks and personalities, and I think...

Takin a read of chapters 1 & 2, since I'd actually had it in the back of my mind to read this for some time. The first chapter starts pretty tame, and subverts the usual PMD tropes. Instead of a character waking up with amnesia and trying to figure out whats going on, we have two established...

Very excited to check out the project you've been talking about for so long! Congrats on starting it. I'll be mixing some thoughts with quotes and such, and some of my personal opinion, but feel free to ignore if it doesn't match what you're seeking. I like the opening, I agree that starting...

Chapter 5: To Rise Again “Raga. Raga.” The Flygon stubbornly kept her back to Hana. Holding back a sigh, Hana sat down. Ten long minutes had passed since the Alakazam had teleported her to a quiet corner of Mossdeep City, thankfully free from Steven’s gaze, which she couldn’t meet, and...

Chapter 4: Cadence Until now, Hana had never appreciated plain, regular wind. But after her three-day long excursion through the desert, and feeling nothing but the sting of sand against every uncovered speck of her body, it felt blissful. She basked in it as her two pokemon, Cosmo and Pi...

Hello everyone! Might as well throw my hat in the ring. My main work: Legendary Adventures Summary: 6 years after the fall of Galactic, Koamaru sets out on his trainer journey with a singular goal - be the first to catch a legendary pokemon. The right way. And he's got the Perfect Plan to do...

- What kind of prize(s) would you like to offer? I can handle doing probably reviews! I was thinking of offering to basically read up to 5 chapters/20k words or so of a work (exact stopping point to the author's discretion, within reason) and offering a more substantial review and trying to...

RIP to my dreams of quitting my job to run pokemon RP's 😞 This is an excellent point, ty for sharing your insight! A lot of it was due to a few prime factors: Irl problems in the early stages, burnout in the final half, and sometimes overextending to try and make sure everyone had time to...