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Returning to this topic at long last! My impression is that most people think that writers giving an indication of what kind of feedback they'd like would be helpful. People seem more split on having some kind of codified system (e.g. "critique levels") or total freeform would be better...

Ohhh, got it! I was kind of hung up on "but most trees don't live thousands of years?", haha. But that doesn't matter for tree rings, of course... Neat idea!

Oof. Love how you imply so much in the short space you have here, which is of course one of the things that makes for a great drabble. You do a lovely job of capturing that sort of vicious, destructive (and self-destructive) act of someone determined that someone else will take nothing more from...

This is an awesome thread! Thanks for posting it. Love me some character questions. I've bothered the usual suspects enough, I think. Time to dig into some unknowns. Q: What is your biggest regret? My biggest regret? Oh, I don't know, how about DYING? If I hadn't gone and done that, I'd have...

An intriguing analysis... Clearly the number 18 has great significance in the envy of eden. I take issue with your conclusion, though. After all, the number 18 is deeply important to the Pokémon franchise as a whole, being the number of known pokémon types. And considering what you know of...

Oof. Classic fandom. :( Sorry that happened to you, and I hope you don't have to deal with more of that kind of nonsense in the future!

Real fun, angsty little story here! It's depressingly true that no matter how different Ash's female traveling companions might be, they're always in his shadow, and for many people defined by their relationship to him more than anything. Being a star trainer who everybody knew and loved who's...

Aaa, totally managed to miss this earlier! Hello again! It's pretty cool that you're already posting in two different languages so soon after starting in on fanfic at all. Seems like you've been settling in pretty well--it's a pleasure having you around. Sup, welcome! AAML is my era, too...

Nice way to start off this thread! Always here for a good battle scene. I like how you showed Koa considering his tactics and making more calculated plays than his opponent. You do a nice job of contrasting their styles and indicating A couple times I got tripped up by pronouns, since Koa and...

Sans Undertale was Sans Salvage all along? It sounds like a brilliant idea! After all, who could resist that alliteration? I was excited to see kintsugi at work in this post. Would she be able to crack the code? Would she reveal the story's deepest secrets at last? It looked like she was...

Sup, back to look at chapters three and four! But first, I know you went back over the earlier chapters to try and make the POV consistent, and I think you got a good start on it! There were a few places where you missed some third-person language, though, like here: Should be "what I was...

Hey, Anthony! I saw you posted this earlier, but didn't get a chance to check it out until recently. The PMD2 ending is a great choice to focus on for a one-shot; it's a really emotionally-charged sequence, and there's a lot you can do to expand it by focusing on the characters' thoughts and...

Hey, what's up! Figured I would check this story out, since I always enjoy a good trainerfic. I like the mix of classic elements (I mean, we're starting with the good ol' "getting a starter" deal) and your own takes on things--like the way we end up getting that starter, heh. This review covers...

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Dang. Hope I get to hear it someday, haha. I'm perhaps even more intrigued about how you got to Bench from Undertale!

Welcome! It's awesome that you only just got into PMD but are already inspired to start writing fic for it. I guess it must have just grabbed you, huh? Glad to see you here, and I'll try to check your story out! (So many new stories posted this month that I need to read! @_@) I feel like I...

It was a long time coming, but at last I can reveal the last of our exquisite corpses for 2020! It's the Anything Goes corpse, so anything can happen--even more so than in our other corpses. We had nine people writing for this corpse, including: The completed story appears below, and the...

Nice to meet you! Wasn't expecting you to show up here, but thanks for your reviews, too. I'm always up for a journey story, so I'll be sure to check yours out. Hoenn's my favorite region, so if it takes place there that'll be extra icing on the cake. ;) Hope you enjoy your stay here! Glad to...

Great to have you here! A ghostly story set in Sinnoh sounds like a lot of fun... that snowy atmosphere's goes well with the chill of the grave, plus you've got stuff like Eterna Forest and rotom to work with! Good luck with your writing, and I hope you find some fun stuff to read around here...