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Short, sharp reviews are the order of the day~! Further notes on ch15: Loved that Astrid called Jade a little shit lmfao The way you described Mewtwo's Pressure and how overwhelming his presence was one of my fave things about this chapter. Ch16

Hi Chibi! As requested, reviews for the time being will largely be in the form of abbreviated reactions. Ch13: Ch14: Teleport Extra: This was pretty cool! Surprised it's not threadmarked but you do you. Nice to learn a little more about it and its limits and why it's not a major logistics...

Hi kint! I read the first two entries, since the first was short and I've been dealing with the oneshot comp instead of reviewing this. Sorry for the wait. So, first up I love the introduction. It was so clear and so striking that I could practically see it in cinematic form, and it was a...

Day 1: a fic you liked when you were younger. I was actually gonna share No Antidote but @kintsugi beat me to it, and I don't feel I can say enough that she didn't already! So instead I'm sharing Pokémon Ultimatum, which is one of the first fics I can remember reading. It's been revised and...

Hi there, here's my review for chapter 2. Sorry for the delay — both in the sense that you were expecting this yesterday, and in that it's been literally a couple years since I read chapter one. I glanced at chapter one for a quick refresher, but being pressed for time I moved straight on...

Author's Note: Thanks for bearing with me while I got the next two updates ready. Now the story proper can begin, and hopefully continue at a faster rate. If you’re an older reader, this is a different opening chapter than you remember. If you were a reader way back in 2012, it’ll be more...

I don't pay enough attention to competitive stuff to hear about anything except "Landorus is OP" and "stealth rock is meta-defining". Such things don't inform the pokémon I like—I go off how good I think the design is and my personal degree of attachment.

Yes! Wonderful! I am thoroughly delighted! Make a contract with me and become a magical author! First off, since I beta-read this only recently I can see all the improvements you've made, either based on my commentary or otherwise, and they are all absolutely effective in improving the prose...

This is weirdly compelling. I don't even know what my emotional reaction is to it, it's so strange, but I think I'd read more in this vein.

Whoops, last minute save. Thanks for this, Johto! Day 3: Heatstroke! Share a fic featuring fire-type trainers or pokemon. My first recommendation is by one of our own, @canisaries! In Search of Haven is a PMD-esque oneshot with post-apocalyptic vibes. The protagonist, Annie, is a charmeleon in...

I love this kind of stuff! I've not taken the test on behalf of my characters (although it is the best test I've found) as I already know their colours, and indeed designed them with colours somewhat in mind! Here are the colours and some analysis for the four main protagonists of Different...

referenced from art by the estimable @canisaries

Aight, here's a double billing for chapters nine and ten! Alright, next chapter(s) concern a real mission and a legendary pokémon! I'm almost as excited as these rebels are! See you then!

There were two great big punchy successes of narrative in this chapter. I'll get to the second. Let's start with the phone scene. I spend half my life these days on my phone or computer, but reading Red's sustained anxiety and suffering as he tries to struggle through accepting his gift of a...

Triple review, motherfucker. Review policy at present is to make note of any scenes that leave a particular impression and comment on those. Looking forward to seeing how Midnight training goes! Great stuff so far, Chibi, hype for more.

Hi Chibi! I actually read chapters 5 and 5.5 a few weeks ago, but I got sidetracked before I could read on or review. Gonna drop my review now before the memory of them stops being fresh. Looking forward to reading more!

Hey Cani! This was a fantastic read, and I'm so pleased to have finally got around to it. As promised, I was highly invested in the main character duo, Annie and Patch. Patch's characterisation is spot-on throughout, with her anxieties being specific, justified, and shown. The way Annie does...