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Alexander dreamt of cries and screams and wails, and he was happy. Struggle and strife was a reminder that the world continued to fight. But when his dark eyes flitted open, he realized that he was colder than usual, and he was not in his bed, and he was not around anyone or anything he knew. He...

Name: Alexander Species: Hydreigon Age: Probably Gender: Male Description: Looks like a standard Hydreigon with a noticeably dark shade to his scales and general aura. Light seems to dim around his general area. Smells like sour dust. General behavior: Carries himself with an air of...

Helloooo Navar! And now I am fully caught up with Liberators of Fate! And I’ll definitely say that the story picked up quite a bit for the last few chapters in particular. I think that’s the first thing I’d like to note down about what I read—how focused it seemed to be on an actual endgoal and...

Chapter 80 – Finding Stability Demitri was a lot heavier than Mispy remembered. The Haxorus lounged on her back, axes by his side, while he nestled his face against her. “Thanks for this, Mispy,” Demitri mumbled. The Meganium nodded silently, though she was more focused on her surroundings...

I'm not going to participate in this one (I have way too much on my writing plate to do even more writing) but I can volunteer as a judge if necessary!

Chapter 79 – A New Day They were like transparent pillars in a great, unholy palace. The dark gray plating on the floor and ceiling greatly contrasted the white tile that the rest of the facility displayed. Most of them were empty, but several of them bubbled ominously with lumps in varying...

Chapter 78 – Back to Basics He couldn’t find the words, so he just stumbled toward her. It felt like even longer than the walk through the plateaus, but he finally collapsed into her lap. The first sound she made—a weak, entertained laugh—nearly made him break down, sobbing. It had been too...

Thanks to everyone for your reviews. Always a pleasure as always! I've talked with you guys all about it and have enjoyed the feedback as usual. I've been neglecting updating this for a long while now as I don't really have anybody following it here specifically until it's caught up. I think...

I'd like to third, fourth, or whatever the number is now on a curved prize scale if giving out too many prizes is an issue due to strain and so on. My personal suggestion would be something like what was said before. Assuming the point scaling is the same... 5, 10, 20, 30, 50, 70, 100 . . ...

Finally wrapping this blitz up with one last review. Since it's for someone participating in this event, it'll also get the theme bonus! This one's for Navar's Liberators of Fate again. 5 chapters (4 through 8) at around 1300 words gives me 5+1 points, total 31, just past my goal for this event!

Hey Navar, this is going to be a review for chapters 4 through 8, beginning with our first two-parter, Thunderstruck! Very fast pacing in setting up this conflict. Due to the pacing, it seems to be telegraphed as somewhat of a small villain due to just the reader expectations. Perhaps this is...

[Chapter 6-8] Hey Bench! And now it’s time for me to read the final three chapters of what’s published so far. I’ll begin with some running commentary on the chapters themselves as I go along, and then top it off with some general thoughts on the direction things are going and what I’m...

Darkwhite absently massaged Jesse's back after transforming her arms into those of a Machoke. The rest of her body remained the same size. "Alright, alright, old man, you can vote how you want. But while you do that, I'm gonna look at the board!" Her neck became that if a Girafarig's, and when...

"You don't what now?"

Darkwhite floated over Lee's shoulder. "You haven't used it yet, right? Then let's try to plan out the best question to ask."

"That's what I've been saaaaaying!" Darkwhite pulled back, spinning and spinning. "And the one that is putting people in the clear column too much is Lee! He's only been clearing people for the FIRST murder! It could have been Mia! So we should assume that all the things that he's been seeing so...

"Monopoly? Oh right, I have to play that thing. I dunno the rules though. I dunno what a monopoly even is. Like, how can you be one thing and also many things? Oh wait, that's probably a philosophical question for Palkia to answer."

"What, you think we know? That turtle disappeared after like the first day! After that we got these instructions or whatever that we had to figure out who did it or something. I dunno. We already found one Naughty person responsible, that was that Scyther girl. But we're also down a Mewtwo and a...

"Oh? You read my file a lot? I like the sound of that..."

"Hey hey, I'm still keeping it safe for the kiddos! You should see the stuff I do offscreen."