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couple more for the day... seiren base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 little god base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 total: 139 might come back and do a few more before the day is up.

been a while since i took this one on! not sure why i fell behind tbh... but now's as good a time as ever! i'm just going to be taking on chapter three for the time being, but i'll come back to it to wrap up later for sure. before i get started, some thoughts on chapter two: your portrayal of...

it's been longer than i thought since i've left a review here, so now seems like the time! a lot has kind of happened, which is nice since i remember feeling like the plot wasn't going anywhere fast for a while. coming fresh off of a whelp, this is a very different situation for red to be in...

wandersword's title came before the fic itself, and i sort of built the premise around it. utter malarkey really. mongrels in castelia, which is the fic i failed to take anywhere from the serebii forum, is a pretty lazy name that mostly arose out of my failure to think of anything better. the...

few more for the day. reflections from the past to the future base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 played it for you: pokémon sword and shield base: +3 theme: +4 words: +2 subtotal: +9 (nooooooooo!) soul dissonance base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 total: 119

hey, you finally posted it! nice. i've already gone over some nitpicky stuff with you on this, so i'm gonna keep this review down to the broader strokes. overall, this is an interesting fic. as someone who never really got into sun/moon and hasn't watched the anime or read the manga, i'm...

once again i run into the issue of resolving to review one of your fics, only to be overwhelmed by the urge to quote every single line separately because they're all so damn good. i promise i'll try and keep it down to just a few. i love this line because it honest to god feels like something...

i'm glad i read your one-shot first, because i feel like it lent me some insight while reading this... just little things, like your particular characterizations of hop and alira, as well as the background of the sword/shield relic stuff. you mention the uncanny sense of familiarity that alira...

aaaaaaaaand a few more to close out the night. the curious and the shiny base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 (yet again, so close) subtotal: +10 the legendarian chronicles base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 total: 90

oof, as with tcats, i've sort of fallen off my review train here, but here's to keeping it up from here on out! it's truly amazing that you've managed to drop so many bombshells these past couple chapters, and i'm kind of wondering if you'll even be able to keep it up, but even if it tones down...

ohhhhh, shit! real talk, i'm a bit behind here, but i'm gonna review where i'm at for now. sorry i've sort of fallen off the wagon! i'm a sucker for opening hooks like the storybook one you've done here, and this one is particularly engaging. it would be cool enough as a reading of the...

couple more before the portal closes: in beta base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 (oh, so close to the next tier up) subtotal: +10 a little after hours base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 total: 70

i read this quite a while ago and meant to review it, but somehow never got around to it... but now seems as good at time as any, right? i'm going to reread this now so i can give you a better review for it, but some thoughts real quick before i jump in: i remember being very impressed with...

i bumped into this one-shot while crawling through the fanfiction forum in search of something new to review for the event, and was pretty surprised to find that no one had gotten to this yet! it seems totally up my alley, so i figured i'd give it a shot. from the get-go, we're put into the...

few more. reflections of the past base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 hands of creation base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 whelp base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 running total: 50

man, so many thoughts about this. i know you’ve expressed doubt about the execution of this one-shot in the discord before, so whatever it’s worth, i think you’ve done a bang-up job. it’s really interesting going into this already knowing the frightening, tongue-collecting, corpse-defiling red...

well, i wanted to get a bit further before leaving a review, but Now’s The Time For Reviewing, and maybe leaving one will encourage me to keep up on this fic. i’m only up through chapter two at the moment, and my reading thus far has been kind of all over the place, so i’m not going to write...

hey there! welcome to thousand roads. it’s always great to see new faces and writing around. i haven’t seen much in the way of sword/shield fanfic yet, so it’s great to see some here. to start with, i’ll say that i was left scratching my head at some points with regard to the identities of...

couple reviews here: salvage base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 handfuls of dust base: +3 theme: +4 words: +3 subtotal: +10 total: 20

dang, i thought i’d left a review here, but i guess we just talked about it on discord, huh? well, all the better for the review event i guess, bwahaha. anyway, since it’s been a while since i read the first three chapters, i’m only going to go in-depth on the fourth, but i’ll leave some...