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Update to my earlier post, in regards to week 3 theme: Chapters 15 and beyond are free game for Legendary Adventures Chapter 4 & 5 for Home is Where the Hoenn Is are eligible

Aight time to do a blitz review, hehe. This will be some pretty quick thoughts as I was reading. First thing is first, banger art. I think it really captures the mood. Just had to say that. So I'll start with a quick thing that surprised me about this. When I first read the description, in...

I've had a mind to check this out for a long time now, especially since it features the best pokemon. I'm glad I finally did! I'm mainly evaluating this from a casual reader perspective, so I probably won't give a lot of in-depth crit. Normally, I find second-person one of the hardest tenses...

Holy smokes Q pop off huh? This is an impulse review on my phone so uh. I hope there's no typos. Anyways this had me cackling, it was short, punchy and humorous. I'm not a laugh out loud person but a lot of the parts of this story make me do that snort laugh, and one particular part literally...

I have been meaning to drop a review on this for ages, figured now is a good a time as any! I have to say, I really enjoyed this! A Dodrio MC is completely unique as far as I'm aware, and you did a great job. I love the idea of each of the heads different outlooks and personalities, and I think...

Takin a read of chapters 1 & 2, since I'd actually had it in the back of my mind to read this for some time. The first chapter starts pretty tame, and subverts the usual PMD tropes. Instead of a character waking up with amnesia and trying to figure out whats going on, we have two established...

Very excited to check out the project you've been talking about for so long! Congrats on starting it. I'll be mixing some thoughts with quotes and such, and some of my personal opinion, but feel free to ignore if it doesn't match what you're seeking. I like the opening, I agree that starting...

Chapter 5: To Rise Again “Raga. Raga.” The Flygon stubbornly kept her back to Hana. Holding back a sigh, Hana sat down. Ten long minutes had passed since the Alakazam had teleported her to a quiet corner of Mossdeep City, thankfully free from Steven’s gaze, which she couldn’t meet, and...

Chapter 4: Cadence Until now, Hana had never appreciated plain, regular wind. But after her three-day long excursion through the desert, and feeling nothing but the sting of sand against every uncovered speck of her body, it felt blissful. She basked in it as her two pokemon, Cosmo and Pi...

Hello everyone! Might as well throw my hat in the ring. My main work: Legendary Adventures Summary: 6 years after the fall of Galactic, Koamaru sets out on his trainer journey with a singular goal - be the first to catch a legendary pokemon. The right way. And he's got the Perfect Plan to do...

- What kind of prize(s) would you like to offer? I can handle doing probably reviews! I was thinking of offering to basically read up to 5 chapters/20k words or so of a work (exact stopping point to the author's discretion, within reason) and offering a more substantial review and trying to...

I wonder if you used the words 'narrow' victory and 'shameful' losses on purpose. It's interesting, since you could have said 'victories and losses' or even 'hard fought' victories, but you instead use narrow and shameful, which to me says that Kari is very hard on losses and minimizes her own...

What a stunning opening line! It perfectly sets up the character, time and circumstance. It also frames everything very well through Cyru's viewpoints and is basically perfection. Love it. Love the detail here that he refers to emotion as disgraceful. Love all the little moments of Cyrus...

Hello! Here for roulette, and I'll be covering chapters 1 & 2. As you know, I mentioned that I find your revised version of chapter 1 to be much more palatable. The change in language makes gym battles feel less like lethal death matches (or at least, matches where death was a distinct...

Sand. Flygon stumbled and looked around. Before him lay a vast expanse of desert, a cloudless blue sky above and barely a wind stirring the air. Home? But then... he looked down, then all around. No sign of his hat or apron or any of his things. A tiny knot formed in his stomach. Swallowing it...

Fry gave a furious hiss, jaws open wide and backing away. Why were they all turning on him? He'd wanted to find the real bad guy but... No! That crazy lady. She knew the truth. She knew what he was! He had to stop her. [[first of all what the heck?! Second all what? Third!! ... HAH! Not...

:coolbat: For starters, I enjoyed the piece overall. I was quite brutal but also felt very grave and very sudden. Dramatic. Things start ordinary, just a random trainer and his team hanging out, and suddenly everything hits the fan. The idea of a trainer verse pokemon 'dying' and getting...

[[AAAAAAA NOOOOOOOOO but also whats the frick!?!?! I feel like I've seen so many D1 town kills I can't believe it. dadgum jackie, luck of the draw. bless u Also apologies, that particular night I never had a chance to come back and reevaluate but things turned out ok so thats good. Okay so...

Fry considered everything carefully for some time. He still didn't agree with eliminating so early... But maybe there was some information to be gleaned. [[in the interest of being speedy im going ooc for this First... to be clear the 'all the time' is more flavor than purely accurate...

[[Ugh, meant to try to post earlier, kept getting distracted]] Fry waved a paw. This was a respectable example of the human species, he decided. Unlike some of the others here, especially those who might be 'scum' or such. And that creepy blonde lady. He made a vague clicking noise that was...