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Chapter 3: A Bad, Bad Run-In Special thanks to @kintsugi for beta reading this for me! Odette’s forehead hovered centimeters over the floor as she pointed her toes. She exhaled deeply, feeling the effects of her straddle wash over her. The knot in her lower back began to loosen, and her glutes...

Hey Umbra! Here for catnip! I don't know how to budget my time so I only had the chance to read chapter one. I know you mentioned what you wanted feedback on, so I'm going to do my best to mainly focus on those things. However, the critiques I have go hand-in-hand with one another. So, I...

Hey hey, here for Catnip! I'm glad to have been able to read a story of yours. I wasn't sure what to expect going into this--stories based directly off of game/anime events aren't TYPICALLY my cup of tea, buuuuuuuuuuuut I really really enjoyed this one-shot!! I went on a wild ride of mild...

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy OSJ! Here for Catnip! I decided to take up your suggestion to read this instead of Spring, and while I do still have my sights set on Spring, I'm already really enjoying what's going on. I've only read one chapter, and I already feel a sense of looming dread. With the story...

I wouldn’t be opposed to an extension

Hi hi! Here for Catnip! I'm glad I was finally able to get around to reading this, it's been on my list, because this sort of thing is right up my alley. I love a good horror/gore fest and you really delivered! It's more of a treat because this is Red we're talking about here...this might be...

"This is your fault," Clovis said flatly. "I have no goddamn idea what you're talking about," Odette replied with the same level of flatness. They both stood in the doorway of the pantry, watching as all fourteen rehabilitated Grubbin wreaked havoc on the inventory. Piles of foodstuffs...

I finally jumped on the bandwagon and I CRACK MYSELF UP LMFAO

Chapter 2: The Audacity... Special thanks to Pen and Flyg0n for beta reading this for me! Odette had never wanted to trade her motorcycle in for a flying-type pokemon. Noel, when he wasn’t going on and on about how his braviary partner Elton didn’t listen to him, always claimed flying was a...

Alright alright alright! Got around to chapter 2, and I can say with full certainty I know what Colress' plan was now! I will say, I'm a huge "show, don't tell" fiend, so I'm not normally a huge fan of prose that doesn't have a lot or even any dialogue at all. However, I really really really...

782 Words for Chapter 1 of Home is Where the Hoenn is. +1 for Chapter, +1 for theme. I think that has me at 9 points? Edit: Also did a review for Chapter 2 of Only the Truth. 436 words, 1 chapter, so 1 point. That should bring me to 10, I think?

Hey hey! I'm finally getting around to reading this and returning the favor for your kind review! I really love how this story is starting. My hopeless romantic butt is always reading romantic relationship fics, so I don't normally get around to reading trainer/pokemon bond fics. That being...

Name: Sinderella/Sind/Sin Interests: OC-Centric, OC x Canon, fakemon, neat lore and world-building, angst/comfort, fluff, pokecentric, realism, journeys, crack/humor...I'll consider reading most things, if I'm honest! Restrictions: None. I will literally intake anything that's legal. However...

Hey canisaries. Thanks for your honest review of the prologue. I'm really sorry you didn't enjoy it, but I appreciate you taking time to review anyway. I wanted to get back to you on some of your points, though, as I had a couple of points of my own. I will be putting Spoilers on some of them...

Reviewed Chapters 1 and 2 of Of Sand and Shadows! 700+ words, 2 chapters, and theme...so +3!

Hey HelloYellow17! After seeing all the banter about OSAS on Discord, I finally was able to get to starting it...and now I understand why everyone calls it "Of Sand and Bacon" :ROFLMAO: I read through Chapters 1 and 2, and got halfway through 3 before my eyes started to hurt from staring at my...

Hey there Flaze! I really appreciate your review, and some of the things you pointed out to me that I didn't think of before. So right now, that was my intention. My goal was for you to be more scared of Venira and Gulattive than you are of Team Enigma, because my aim is for the threat of Team...