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Chapters 8.5 Reaction Laughs that’s one way to have a dream be interrupted. A small fuzzy ferret nudging a lolly towards your face… or rather a wrapped candy. Wait, it was still in the wrapper and not say.. pulled out of the mouth and offered like say how squirrels shuffle their food about…...

Hi here to review chapter one as the neglected premiss... What do the elite trainers do when no being challenged? Sounds like fun. Ah but which elites? And what were they watching? Love how it esculates from "indoor day" to outage just like that. Really Glacia just might as well call herself...

I wonder how long that poor gene's been trapped in the loop of awake, realize, then be deleted. I like how you show the contrast of organic being to non organic. How gene' sort of remembers, has a grasp as to what functions were gone and where they would be.... But its one step removed...

Chapter 2 Feeling out a moveset RD: need to smooth out some sentences but ran through Grammarly. “That’s a sandshrew all right, you’ll have to keep him out for a few hours, show he’s tamed, that sort of thing, but the guy seems pretty placid so no problems.” Thus not-Moon’s first catch was...

We got a new one! Pokemon Soul link

For those who have Arceus Legends and want to trade... well here you go, a post to do so.

And done. linkity. fledgling chapter 2 "Training" Can I get a review on "Training" chapter one... I've added a new intro as I'm trying to get some accessibility issues licked. Feel free to comment on the art too, but those should be directed to the artist, helloyellow17. Please, and...

Alright, preferences noted. Here we go then.... Fledglings chapter 2, fo the review tag progression... I like how you thread the storm which was the main action of the last chapter, beyond intros/some setting establishment, so neatly in the beginning of the chapter. torm, muddy paths...

MICRO UPDATE, lookie what I got! Courtesy of the phenomenally talented HelloYellow17, may I introduce Rollie in a state of "I don't wanna?" Regardless, here he is. (I'm presently working on chapter 2, I just couldn't resist sharing this first.)

I'll update the progress tracker post when the new res post goes up....

Level of prize: 1 Type of prize: sketch art Contact. D.m. via thousand road forums please....

Um so I finished nothing long fic wise... But life happened for like 4 months and I did no writing in that span so sorta understandable... I did clear out a ton of old files/folders though. Had one of those 3x3 cubby for crafts filled wwith folders and got it down to two boxes filled with...

Aw, this was a cute little one-shot. I will say you've gotten better with managing descriptions and characters at once... and I'm lazy enough not to do a compare contrast right now. If you want one let me know and maybe in a week or two... Anywho I like how they manage to move on a little...

Well, thank you for writing... and helping run things and all that.

Here for the blitz, my last run for the season... I mean not that I'm going to disappear after (at least I hope not) but it's my last planned fic review so here we go. chapters 5-8 (so three in total) theme: yes, I mean you're basically running a huge chunk of the blitz plus participating so I...

Here for the blitz, my last run for the season... I mean not that I'm going to disappear after (at least I hope not) but it's my last planned fic review so here we go. chapters 5-8 (so three in total) theme: yes, I mean you're basically running a huge chunk of the blitz plus participating so I...

Luck wished indeed. Were you aiming to get a certian prize via points? I doubt I will get up to 40 so any points after 20 i dont mind donating if you want a specific prize but vant earn up to life being life and what not. Granted if point donating is allowed....

Thats fine. Sorry about the miss count and complication and thanks for taking the time.

I'm sorry this one's going to be complicated. And since I don't have time to actually finish my 10 chap review chunk before days up I thought I'd post what I had 100 percent done and try to get the rest polished and sent before the 22nd. 26 years, essay and review part one chapters 1-4 Theme...

Hi, here for the blitz, mainly picked this fic because I meant to do a review cover to cover for it... I doubt I'll get it totally done before the blitz winds down but my goal is to chapter 10 before the 22nd. Let's see how it goes part 1: tutorial section on the matters you were concerned...