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Noticing their names feel very Bouba-like, as in Bouba vs. Kiki. Appropriate! Having some Amara feelings again. Huh, this seems unusually considerate for Hilda. Neat! Not an interpretation I've seen before but it's a fun one. Also, it's interesting she seemingly feels Amara's upcoming death...

One of those bits where there's a neat line but I'm not sure what it actually means, haha. (Also, shouldn't that be "by the"?) I like Sienna's frustration with human social hierarchies not working like Pokémon's do. Too relatable Intriguing! Still looking forward to more on Hilda's past...

Oof. I like how the guard sees her as a threat for trying to communicate in a language he doesn't understand, doesn't regard her as enough of a person to try to communicate back. Presumably, the actual reason Dusk thinks a morph should see someone like them when they wake up is Dusk herself...

Back for chapter three, finally! Sorry for the delay; I wanted to get to this before the end of the Blitz but didn't manage. For whatever reason I have a hard time parsing this bit properly. What exactly had Spark decided was a good idea? Oh, you innocent boy. "Breath" is the noun and...

Oh, just thought of one thing that was affecting me this Blitz-- The full extra bonus point for theme per review meant that it was always significantly better to review one chapter of a fic at a time - that meant the theme bonus effectively doubled the number of chapters I read, while doing...

Hmm, why? It's not very helpful to respond just saying "I don't like this" without elaboration - we can't discuss the issue and figure out something better if we don't know what's bothering you. By explaining your thoughts, we can work out improvements that everyone would be happier with...

I think the event went great overall! Love the amount of reviewing that got done and the general enthusiasm, and I think you ran it all very smoothly. It might make sense to at least scale the minimum eligible word count with the length of the fic/chapter to some extent - it does seem a bit...

Reviewed chapter 36 of The Legendarian Chronicles. +1 1201 words +1 theme

The opening here strikes me as a little long for a "frozen on the spot, barely able to think" moment - it kinda feels like Jade does get a lot of fairly calm-sounding, rational thinking in here, to a point where I start wondering why she isn't at least trying to run/hide/draw a...

Reviewed chapter 44 of Salvage. +1 471 words +1 theme

Well since everyone seems to just be posting their reviews for lategame chapters here even though they haven't been posted...

Reviewed chapters 1-4 of A Frozen World. +4 four chapters, 1523 words +1 theme

Reviewed Only the Truth. +2 two chapters, 1472 words +1 theme

Hey and welcome to Thousand Roads! I don't usually read a lot of shipping fic, and don't really ship much at all, but I saw this was a new fic with no reviews yet, so I figured I'd check it out anyway! Preemptive apologies for not being quite the target audience here, but I hope my thoughts are...

Reviewed chapter 35 of The Legendarian Chronicles. +1 540 words +1 theme (I believe only two reviews had included this chapter, unrepentantAuthor's and SparklingEspeon's)

I enjoy this bit of normal reaction to the level of bizarre things that are happening. This line ends in a comma rather than a period. Still kind of bonkers to think that Starr was the literal head of the combat unit at eighteen years old. Does this mean she's better than Raven and Ender? We...

Reviewed one chapter of The Legendarian Chronicles. +1 593 words +1 theme (previously reviewed 33 chapters on the Serebii.net forums)

I have arrived, to review... chapter 34, the first chapter I didn't properly review yet! Hoooopefully this is the start of me catching up on reviewing this on TR. The repetition of "It wasn't supposed to be this soon" feels awkward, possibly accidental? Technically it sounds like she's quoting...

Reviewed one chapter of The End: Rekindled. +1 810 words +1 theme