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So, I read the prologue and the first chapter. I'm sure your writing's come a long way since then, so feel free to ignore whatever I have to say if it doesn't apply anymore. :P It was a bold strategy to go with a total absence of dialogue until Audino finds Espurr. I suppose it's about the...

Chapter 6: Dynaforced Into a Corner Noctum wished Vortex wasn't dragging him to some allegedly important meeting. He would love to have spent more time admiring Horizon Academy's central courtyard. So many colorful flowers he'd never seen before in the dreary crags of Drasbraznav. A bed of...

Aww, shucks. Thank you. :veelove: He would just tell you that he's but a mere omen, not answering your question at all. No. Just stripped of free will (i.e. brainwashed). Puhuhuhu... Only time will tell... It's much nicer starting out with more experienced pokémon and not having to write tackle...

Ah, this is gonna be one of those metafictional pieces isn't it? I feel this. 😔 Ben is a dick for not recycling. :^) Apparently Tron exists in the world of pokémon. Freaking Disney, man. Man, I hate it when I grab the can of spaghetti-o's instead of the cereal. START+9 START+9 START+9 "Everyone...

So, here's something memey for this topic... Describe your fic's cast in terms of their Among Us playstyles! Example: View: https://ask-the-guiding-light-cast.tumblr.com/post/630353316899094528/the-guiding-light-cast-but-its-the-type-of-among

XxX Chapter 5: Here Comes the Boomburst A small partition appeared in the dark, circular swirls of distortion, like an open flap from a pitched tent. From his position atop a pile of moss-covered rubble cobbled together to look like a seat, the Phantom watched a Mr. Rime stroll across the...

Chapter 4: Rules Not Made to be Broken Sighing, Vortex rested his head against his right hand and drummed his left fingers against his desk. "You're blowing this out of proportion," he said, gaze fixed on a blue, triangular gemstone. "This was nothing but an isolated incident. She probably...

And, for the most part, I'd say you did well. I do feel as though you stumbled out of the gate with Tiny Fang's "birth" and initial introduction into the world. Their "voice" (through the prose) is a bit too sophisticated and understands things a bit too clearly for a newborn, even by pokémon...

Chapter 3: Banquet While You're Ahead Yuna expected the dining hall to be the largest place on campus. Upon arrival, she quickly realized the gymnasium dwarfed it. She figured her parents could fit three— maybe even four of their throne room across the polished wooden floor. It sparkled under...

Pretty much. Though, if you couldn't tell, it's kind of like a house elf in Harry Potter. I think we might see them again sometime. :P I'm not gonna exclude my favorite species. Even if I'm going in a very different direction with this one. Hopefully I can satiate those interests for you...

Ayy, I managed to do something right. XP I don't want to say too much on this, but the premise is more about culture shock than actual school stuff. My bad. It was meant to be something only casually brought up since the Needles are important going forward... albeit not for reasons people might...

Allow me to preface this by saying I just do not have the energy for the big reviews of yesteryear 2018. And don't expect a bunch of mechanistic stuff from me. It's second-person and present tense and that's just too esoteric and above my skill level for me to comment on other than some of the...

XxX Chapter 1: Uh, It's My First Day It took far more of Yuna's strength than she cared to admit just to float down the hallway. Her gaze remained fixed on the marble floor and, every so often, she bobbed closer to it before jerking back up. "Apologies, Princess. Had I known you were going to...

Welcome to the world of... pokémon? When a dreepy princess, two classmates, and their servants are sucked into an alien world ruled by a tyrannical deoxys, they kickstart a disastrous chain of events stretching further than they can possibly imagine. Can they unravel the mysteries at their...

You... you literally gave your main character a charizard, though.

I am still baffled by your choice of ledian. XD

This was what the site spat out back when I did it; granted this was pre-SwSh, so I'm not sure what's changed. Still, almost all of these were in Guiding Light in some capacity. XD

Hiya. I'm Ambyssin or Amby for short. I, uh, wrote a very long PMD fic that wrapped up last year and am now moving onto a new fic that I'll... probably post here in the next couple of days or so. We'll see.