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Name: Nicolette/"Nikki" Age: "What are you, my mom?"19 Gender: Female Species: Toxtricity Misc: Third-year Horizon Academy student from the city of Blightsmuth. Attends on scholarship. Known for her thuggish choice in leather jackets and disciplinary record. Moonlights as a guitarist in a metal...

Chapter 24: Disorder in the Court The conversation with Rayquaza had Yuna prepared to pop out from the Qliphoth in midair. She was therefore caught off guard when she floated into a spacious, square room with brown, oaken walls draped by maroon tapestries with silver justice scales stitched...

30 -Wouldn’t firing ice attacks toward the tree have frozen it and/or broken it and caused everything to be for naught? -“Brutal and savage creatures.” I mean… [gestures to the messed up stuff Lance and Brian have done during the fic] the good guys are pretty edgy here. -Oh, does this fic...

Chapter 23: Troublesome Testimonies The aftermath of the fight with Baptiste was surprisingly quiet for Yuna. After over a week with Reshiram's presence focused on her in some capacity, he was now occupied with getting Rayquaza up to speed on Team Bastion's… situation? Journey? Quest...

Chapter 22: Courting Disaster The Crowne Court had one main chamber and two accessory chambers. Naturally, given the high-profile nature of the trial, the main chamber was chosen, with its high-arched ceilings and stained-glass murals at the back of the room depicting Queen Calliope flanked by...

Chapter 21: Astonishing Goons Drawn Quick Nikki jumped back, looking at Blipbug Cid like he was pure anathema. "Oh-ho no. No, no, no, no, no!" She hastily rounded the corner. "I like to think I was keeping a pretty level head through the freaking people trapped in poison cocoons, but a laser...

13 -Don’t think you need to describe a lucario when both brothers would know what one looks like. -I don’t remember if Shiron’s popped up before now, but this is not the capacity I was expecting. He also seems a bit more of a goofball than his blacklight incarnation. Also is Shiron actually...

Chapter 20: The Wrong Kind of Networking Silence. The kind that one could hear a pin drop in. And Yuna didn't blame anyone. She couldn't find the words to express her sheer confusion at the cocoons hanging over the team. The pokémon inside appeared to be asleep. But there was no chest or belly...

Chapter 19: Rolling Out the Unwelcome Wagon Noctum was plenty familiar with pain. Headaches, hunger pains, belly aches, and broken bones, to name a few. However, none of his past experiences could help him describe what was going on with his belly when he woke up. It just felt… off. Was it the...

Chapter 9: Note that your chapter title cannot be seen on the forum's darker themes. I really do recommend not colorizing your chapter titles for us colorblind peeps. Was? That kind of implies the place doesn't exist anymore. 😅 As opposed to, y'know, annoying the people waiting for them by...

Chapter 18: The Devil in the Details Yuna couldn't take her eyes off Bahamut's picture. It didn't make sense. Either there were other light dragons roaming around the cosmos with much more malicious attitudes or… or… No. That had to be it. Bahamut was the Luminous Creator! He preached...

So, I'm going to preface this by saying that adaptations and novelizations are, broadly speaking, not my forté unless the author is taking steps right out of the gate to make it clear things are going to be very different. And you do have the second scene in chapter 1 introducing some...

Chapter 17: Give Me Shelter Come nightfall, some pokémon hit the pubs. Others curled up by the fire with a good book. A certain black-scaled charizard, however, had a different evening pastime: a glass of warm milk. Now made exponentially more effective thanks to the magical hot box machine...

Chapter 16: The Red Planet Compared to the fortress-like Crowne Court, the nearby rail station Yuna floated back and forth in front of was… underwhelming. Heck, calling it a proper station wasn't right. There were no ticket kiosks or fences to keep people away from the tracks. Not even a...

Chapter 15: In Case of Emergency Radiant Palace's throne room was silent enough to hear a pin drop on the velvet carpet running from the crystalline double doors to the raised, marble platform holding two thrones. Having passed along everything Yuna had told him, Seifer now stared at the...

I have a golden doodle named Molly. She's a rescue.

Chapter 14: Sing a Hollow Song The servant quarters were in a square building made of gray bricks with small, arched windows. Unimpressive compared to the vibrant colors and ornate statues of Horizon's main campus. There was one redeeming factor for Noctum, however. It was positioned closest to...

Chapter 13: Bad News Travels Fast Baraz was the one to escort Yuna to her classes the next morning. The dracozolt told her Noctum had to take things easy, but could gradually resume his usual activities if he felt okay. He didn't have any updates about her teammates, however, other than one of...

I warned you I’d be back. >:3 Anyway, I’m going to avoid repeating anything from the last review; mainly the grammatical stuff. Just focusing on the actual plot. Part 6: 72 Hours Remain -[Thanks to the wonders of technology] THE POWER OF SCIENCE IS AMAZING! -That watchog selling the Sun Ribbon...

Chapter 12: Brought Up to Extreme Speed Yuna used the train ride back to Horizon Academy to stumble through an explanation of what happened... sans the stuff with Reshiram. What made it hard for her was the dazed look in Noctum's eyes. He mentioned a blow to the head and the welt between his...