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Hey there, here for my Catnip review! Since there are only two chapters so far, I figured I'd look at everything you've published here so far. Based on the content warnings at the beginning, I was expecting this to be a somewhat darker, sort of apocalyptic fantasy story, but so far it's been...

omg, I SPECIFICALLY left out M2^2, it's not stealing, it's completely original!!!! quietly crosses out the bit where Mewtwo² shows up in Chapter 50

Starlight was close! We do have Mew and Mew2, M and M2. Here we have N8, or N2^3. And, as previously revealed, N is M but missing one... or someone. Surely there must be a reason Nate keeps running into our protagonist, after all. Perhaps some aspect of its powers will be able to restore him to...

Sup cynsh. I said I'd take a look at this a while back, so here are my thoughts on what you've posted so far. Like I think pretty much everyone else who's commented has said, I really love the premise here! It's always fun to see a fic that doesn't fit neatly into one of pokéfic's typical...

Just wondering, would you mind if I put one of your stories in for this week's Catnip Circle? You wouldn't have to do anything, it just means you would get a review from the event. If you're interested, let me know what story you'd prefer to get the review for!

Returning to this topic at long last! My impression is that most people think that writers giving an indication of what kind of feedback they'd like would be helpful. People seem more split on having some kind of codified system (e.g. "critique levels") or total freeform would be better...

Ohhh, got it! I was kind of hung up on "but most trees don't live thousands of years?", haha. But that doesn't matter for tree rings, of course... Neat idea!

Oof. Love how you imply so much in the short space you have here, which is of course one of the things that makes for a great drabble. You do a lovely job of capturing that sort of vicious, destructive (and self-destructive) act of someone determined that someone else will take nothing more from...

This is an awesome thread! Thanks for posting it. Love me some character questions. I've bothered the usual suspects enough, I think. Time to dig into some unknowns. Q: What is your biggest regret? My biggest regret? Oh, I don't know, how about DYING? If I hadn't gone and done that, I'd have...

An intriguing analysis... Clearly the number 18 has great significance in the envy of eden. I take issue with your conclusion, though. After all, the number 18 is deeply important to the Pokémon franchise as a whole, being the number of known pokémon types. And considering what you know of...

Oof. Classic fandom. :( Sorry that happened to you, and I hope you don't have to deal with more of that kind of nonsense in the future!

Real fun, angsty little story here! It's depressingly true that no matter how different Ash's female traveling companions might be, they're always in his shadow, and for many people defined by their relationship to him more than anything. Being a star trainer who everybody knew and loved who's...

Aaa, totally managed to miss this earlier! Hello again! It's pretty cool that you're already posting in two different languages so soon after starting in on fanfic at all. Seems like you've been settling in pretty well--it's a pleasure having you around. Sup, welcome! AAML is my era, too...

Nice way to start off this thread! Always here for a good battle scene. I like how you showed Koa considering his tactics and making more calculated plays than his opponent. You do a nice job of contrasting their styles and indicating A couple times I got tripped up by pronouns, since Koa and...

Sans Undertale was Sans Salvage all along? It sounds like a brilliant idea! After all, who could resist that alliteration? I was excited to see kintsugi at work in this post. Would she be able to crack the code? Would she reveal the story's deepest secrets at last? It looked like she was...

Sup, back to look at chapters three and four! But first, I know you went back over the earlier chapters to try and make the POV consistent, and I think you got a good start on it! There were a few places where you missed some third-person language, though, like here: Should be "what I was...

Hey, Anthony! I saw you posted this earlier, but didn't get a chance to check it out until recently. The PMD2 ending is a great choice to focus on for a one-shot; it's a really emotionally-charged sequence, and there's a lot you can do to expand it by focusing on the characters' thoughts and...

Hey, what's up! Figured I would check this story out, since I always enjoy a good trainerfic. I like the mix of classic elements (I mean, we're starting with the good ol' "getting a starter" deal) and your own takes on things--like the way we end up getting that starter, heh. This review covers...

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