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Going to throw in a couple of recs here for some completed short chapterfics that are eligible for week three and need some love: Foregone Conclusion by elyvorg Do you, like me, like to have your heart torn out by fiction? Then do yourself a favor and read this story about how an ancient...

Title: White Swan, Black Swan Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-51952 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: no

All right, I'm back for chapter one! I know sacrilege is a drug in this fic but "lethal amounts of sacrilege in his system" still sounds pretty hilarious :P No comma before when. But also, I thiiink you want to phrase this differently? I believe what you mean is she began to shake her head and...

Title: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-hands-of-creation.22/post-51920 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: no

Chapter 1 I enjoy this sentiment of darkness being a foreign concept. The phrasing of this feels a little contradictory. It says Amia is an exception to the population (presumably by not being a Fire-type), but also that she could deal with heat like any other Fire could, and the other implies...

Title: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-hands-of-creation.22/post-51894 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: no

Hey, Namo! I'd written down partial reviews for the prologue and chapter one ages ago, so I think it's about time I actually got around to at the very least posting those. For now I reread the prologue and finished what I'd written before; should be able to get to chapter one tomorrow...

Chapter 44! Another legendary battle? Another legendary battle. Chapter 44: Polaryu It was early morning when Mark and May stood in front of the cave, looking in. The entrance was a humongous diagonal crack that widened on the way down, splitting the impenetrable wall of rock in two and...

Title: Salvage Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/salvage.187/post-51830 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: no

Interesting! I'm going to try to give some insight into why I interpreted the story the way I did, and why I think other readers had similar takes: When this is the paragraph you use to introduce the 'cheating', and the events they describe from there have a humorously exaggerated quality to...

Aaaand chapter 43 is here. In which one new character arrives, another departs, and there's a whole lot of painful awkwardness in between. Chapter 43: To Champion Island Alan will fill him in, huh? The start of their journey across the calm sea was none too interesting, and it was all...

Title: Of Sand and Shadows Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-51624 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: no

<3 Wes needs to learn to say no to his bratty Pokémon (only nah, this is cute) Of course that's the first thing you want to spend your finite money on. Huh. Psychically sensing Rui in there? Sure seemed to enjoy Alden's company as a kid, though, eh? I imagine horrible things happened and Wes...

This was a delight, love Nate and Mightyena protecting each other and Rats and Leonard being the main powerplayers and the child just immediately crowing about how it killed Mewtwo hahahaha and trying to impersonate Nate as GREAT NATHANIEL MORGAN (also doctors wear blue) But also Titan is so...

Thank you all very much for the feedback so far! I'm glad it seems to have broadly landed and really appreciate all the insightful commentary on how the story came across and how you felt about it. Some brief remarks where I had something more specific to say: The most major changes in that...

Title: A Confession Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/a-confession.868/post-51540 Number of chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes

Hey! I skimmed part of this a while back when you posted it and then saw it back on the first page and figured why not properly check it out and drop a review. I think you do a nice job with the monologue implying what's going on in the opening. We get a sense of Nida feeling weak, wanting this...

Title: Delivery Deferred Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/delivery-deferred.983/post-51534 Number of chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes

Already betaed this, so this'll be a more compact review with more overall thoughts rather than line-by-lines, apart from: Got some extra line breaks in there for whatever reason. I think this story does a nice job with understated worldbuilding that doesn't get in the way. It's a PMD world...