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It sounds like a stretch, but the idea is that, from the point of Red putting on the mask, Joanna gained the ability to give Red hallucinations (which ghosts have kind of semi-control over, being able to prompt them and then the host's mind coloring in the blanks save for the parts the ghost...

Very late to Chapter 6 because my brain has been empty regarding it, but let me try my best: Porygon is adorable. A bona fide scrunkly. I would die for Porygon. Also, really :eyes:-ing at Porygon's code being old meaning that it's more like a Gen I Pokemon in both appearance and moveset and...

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Hey! Here for Catnip. I've read the story and here are my thoughts. ...What does "it" refer to here? The second fledger? Is this colon meant to be here? typo It doesn't feel like N would be "bemused" here, since that means "confused". Did you mean "amusement"? Took me a while to parse the...

Thanks for the review, @Spiteful Murkrow ! Well, my intent was that Joanna assumes that Michi didn't see her and that she could have only known she was there through a different sense, but thinking about it more now, this isn't very well communicated. I may revise this. HHverse has different...

Hey all, here's the fifth and penultimate part of the story as scheduled. Content warning for gun violence, character death in flashback, police brutality and ambiguous Pokémon death. Enjoy! --- Part Five --- Like before, Mr Fortin was waiting for Clarisse once she arrived at the facility...

Thanks so much for the review! I can explain this. "Sunlight filtered through their evergreen branches" is not meant to be a complete sentence with "filtered" as a predicate - rather, "filtered" is a participal adjective here. If it were a complete sentence, it would be "There is sunlight...

Hey there! Was on the prowl for oneshots for Blitz and I saw these in the self-promo thread. Since I greatly enjoyed Hunting Game, I figured why not! I read the first five, and here are my thoughts. Quote comments: This sentence seems to be missing a period. red akai is that you?? Typo? I...

Hey everyone! I'm back again for Week 3 to announce that I've uploaded a brand new oneshot that could be good for Blitz points: 🎭 VICTIM 🎭 In this oneshot, a newly-born yamask unable to recall her past life wanders the woods and meets a friend. Wordcount is about 5 200 words. If you're not...

Hey! Let's get to it. (looks outside, where it is currenly -17C with moderate wind) i got you beat i think This chapter (well, this chapter and that one Exquisite Corpse entry of yours) really taught me you know your stuff when it comes to comp. I can't say much more about it, though...

Hey! Returning to this for Week 2 of the Blitz. Read Dumb Luck and Fire Safety. Here are my thoughts. I gotta apologize to Jason or whoever named Rabies. Rabies is absolutely a fitting name for this guy. krissy has anyone ever told you you have the energy of an npc whose dialogue people mash A...

Hey all! I'm here with a new oneshot. This oneshot is an exercise I wanted to do to finally get something to write after a longer drought (and sorta not wanting to write The Bringer too much right now since it's being a downer). It's a story that covers an existing scene from Hunter, Haunted...

Hey all. Time for Part Four. We're two thirds of the way through. Content warning for more Pokémon cruelty and discussion of questionable parenting. --- Part Four --- After four uneasy days, Tuesday came. Clarisse showed up at the Fourrage Pokémon Rehabilitation Facility and was taken to...

Hi all. This one was another chapter that I let sit for longer, but I think I'm pretty okay with it after all, so I'm posting it now. As for where my writing progress is currently, I just finished the first draft of Chapter 19, and I think the chapter after that is going to be the final one...

Hey there! I'm back for Catnip. Read Chapters 11 and 12, here are my thoughts. You guys didn't have anything in common other than card games? I'm not so sure this Nikki girl's really the one. Yeah, this is about how it goes sometimes. And you know better now, right? (slowly shakes head)...

Thank you so much for checking out all three parts up so far! This kind of surprised me - if anything, I thought I'd hammered it in too much how scared she is of government types and how shy she has become around them when other people would act a lot more normal. From the website of the...

Hey there! Here to post the third part of the story, bringing us to the halfway point. Content warning for mind control and Pokémon cruelty. Enjoy! --- Part Three --- Muffin the Snubbull sniffed at the kibble. Clarisse monitored him closely. She'd made her case, and now the rest was up to...

Hey hey hey! I'd been meaning to check out some more writing of yours for a while, and the Blitz was the perfect excuse. So, here are my thoughts on Chapters 1 and 2. r/malelivingspace a kid would SO fuckin name a dog rabies. peak child it was just one of those days... when you dont wanna...

The scheduled time has come for the second part of this story! Content warning for discussion of mind control and one attempt at it. Enjoy! --- Part Two --- 'I see you're hiding behind that device again. I should expect no less from someone so weak.' That had been the only thing Kraken had...

Hey there! We've certainly existed near each other for a longer time (I remember you from Bulbagarden years ago), but I'm not sure if I've ever given you a review. It looks like I haven't done so on here, at least, so this is a good opportunity to dive into this fic while also gaining a Blitz...