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"Killed? Pffft. Like I'd ever kill someone!" Darkwhite twirled around, absentmindedly thinking. "At least, I don't think so. But you definitely ignored those last never have I evers. How come you aren't shaking your candles away, huh?"

"They all came flooding back when I saw my Grass form," Owen said. "It was so freaky that it reminded me of when the same thing happened to me back home. And from there it kind of all just..." Owen made a vague, exploding gesture with his hands, then sighed. Typhlosion was trying to contort his...

"It's called a nickname? Duh! Get it right!" Darkwhite pointed an accusatory finger at Jesse. "You shake your thing and lose already! Both of those totally applied to you because you spilled Brisa's emotional blood or whatever! Also you just said you beat up a Legend so that totally counts."

Darkwhite lunged forward. "Never have I ever swore in a dumb accent like Jesse's!"

Another one, taking on all the fics that I've been meaning to get to for Blacklight purposes... this time The Makings of a Hero, chapter 1! This one is >350. Once again, 1+1

Heya Fuse, this is a review of the first chapter! I think your first few paragraphs did well in establishing the central conflict of what appears to be a short story. Good start, because it means you didn’t dabble with too much backstory than necessary, and you can probably sprinkle in those...

Darkwhite rolled her eyes and shook her remote unceremoniously. "Really? I'm Mew. I've seen, like, everyone."

Turn 3: Shield set up a Status Aegis this time around, so it looks like getting rid of that high speed on Rayquaza is off the table for now. Brace for impact or deal a lot of damage, whatever may work! Actions: 4: Astrid 3: Brisa [negative stamina], Cabot, Celeste, Curio, Dave, Nip, Starr...

"Betrayed a friend?" Darkwhite asked, frowning. She glared at the game, wondering just how far it would go to suggest what a betrayal counted. "I guess I might have. Who knows with how this thing judges things?! If there's only one cookie left on the plate and your best friend was going to get...

With Aegis up and blocking their physical attacks, it seemed that the team knew to fall back and keep their defenses in line. Brisa, however, was going to take Rayquaza on directly with Owen in an effort to cage him completely. That way, Rayquaza couldn't take advantage of their pause...

"And I never even created that fusion thing! I get in that guy's way because he's annoying!" Darkwhite huffed, but then drifted back and stared at Jesse. She wasn't going to lose. "Okay, well, never have I ever been a human!" She smirked. "How about that, huh?"

Darkwhite frowned. "I didn't even do anything for those guys!" she glared at the machine, wondering the best way to dismantle it and the Porygon inside. But she also didn't like losing, so she shook.

Darkwhite seemed confused. "You better work on your notes, Porygon-in-a-box! Just because I look kinda like a Mewtwo doesn't mean I am one! Or whoever that big light dragon is supposed to be. I was just having a good time!" She huffed, turning around. "This game's broken."

"Well, I don't have a kid, so I definitely haven't! And I'm definitely not bothering with world destruction! In fact, I'm saving a world back where I'm from!" Darkwhite giggled, floating back. "Just because I look scary doesn't mean I'm a bad guy! I just like having fun is all!"

Review for Out of Hand chapter 1, >300 words, so 1+1 points!

[Chapter 1] Hey Neb! This is my review for Out of Hand’s first chapter (as I don’t have a whole lot of time to review more than that) but I’d like to say, this was a very strong opening chapter despite not having any actual action or critical stakes in it. I would argue that this is how you...

"Brisa!" Owen shouted. "Try that thing you did last fight! I'll cover you!" Owen conjured a few Protects and tried to spread them as far as he could to cover Brisa's position; meanwhile, Wishkeeper kept an eye around them. It seemed that for this fight, he and Brisa were going to be partnering up.

"Hey, so," Darkwhite said, curling her arms around Jesse's neck--due to her size, she barely made it around. She whispered into his ear, "What's your idea of a date, huh? Skydiving? Hiking? Calamities? I haven't been on a date before." She was still looking at Jesse's hands, occasionally making...

Turn 2 summary: Owen: Guardian II - Evasion on Brisa Celeste: Psych Up Speed and Evasion Cabot: Shadow Accelerate Starr, two Violent Seeds Vix: Calm Mind, Shadow Wick Shiron: Restore Seed Nip: Psych Up attack, evasion, cautious seed and Quick Seed Astrid: Recurve Psych Up, Recurve Iceberg...

Darkwhite was busy trying to size Jesse up, making odd comparisons about his fur thickness and limbs and eye shape. "Hmmm, if you're going to try to date that Scyther, that means you're probably going to have to figure out how to dice food for cooking better, and that's just not going to cut...