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Congratulations, Owen! You've leveled up! You have gained a new feat: Crippling Trust Issues. Good luck! Turns out Arceus can actually be a god when the other god is out of commission. He's just one of those people who isn't good working with others at his level. Still a little full of it...

All caught up! Happy V-Wheel from United! I read chapters 3 and 4 for this. Overall, I'd say that these were two solid chapters for buildup, but upon entering chapter 5 or 6 I'd hope for some kind of shoe to finally drop. So far we're sort of just making our way through the story and not a lot...

I think this is the second-to-latest chapter, "Susana," that I'll be reviewing here! Happy catnip! I think, overall, while the prose was good and the pacing was nice, the actual logistics and narrative framing of this chapter struck me as a little strange, especially since this seems to be...

This'll be a review for the first chapter! Happy Catnip! I'd like to open by saying that overall this was a nice way to open into something that's from a nonstandard perspective. It helped situate me very nicely and despite being a "villain" team, it does give the vibe of why they believe...

Special Episode 11 – Dark Radiance Every night, as he drew nearer and nearer to evolution, Alex dreamed of the strange blade made from dragon scales and spells. It was the one destined to cut through his neck. Each time, in that dim haze of a nightmare, his other half would grasp the blade in...

The funny part is I didn't actually view any Jojo related material until years after that chapter was published! I sort of unintentionally took on several anime tropes since that's just the sort of thing I enjoy, and turned it into reading material. Ah, this is an error on my part with clumsy...

Weekly fic rec, week 3: I'd like to recommend I'm a Marionette for a somewhat more unique reason. First, I'd like to preface this by saying that it's a very heavy story and quite divorced from what we'd expect of the characters involved canonically. However, if you can move past that and read...

Yes and no. The whole thing about water going into a river too hot after being used for server cooling is very real, though, and it got a company in trouble and they had to stop and find other ways to fix it (because it was messing with the fish population.) Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed...

Half of this is theorizing and I'm all for it! I'll clarify a few things just so it doesn't send you too far off the beaten path, but in general I'm loving the speculation that's going on here, This is the biggest one, and frankly it's my fault for following the "Southern Tradition" for...

Thanks for the review, Fobbie! I replied to you elsewhere for all of these, but I may as well briefly state that I'm very happy that you were interested in the plot more now that you're getting into chapter 5 or so. That's usually when it picks up, and I do wish I could have made it pick up...

This is an interesting start, opening with an explosion that was only in their head, so to speak. But at the same time there's talk about it being normal and just some kind of thing that someone has. Maybe it's because of all the other stories I've read that deal in mental health lately, but I...

This'll be a bit of a stream of consciousness review, but overall thoughts will be near the bottom. The first big paragraph has a lot of word repetition and I don't think the effectiveness of it quite shapes up to anything worthwhile in terms of thematic use. Floor, tile, wood, in particular...

Thanks for the feedback, Zion! And yes, you certainly analyzed some of my tendencies when casting certain characters and plotlines for what I like to write when it comes to smaller stories. I hadn't even considered the care-justice dynamic. I oughta look into that because it definitely sounds...

This is an interesting sort of semi sci-fi existential horror sort of fic being written here. I don't really know how else to properly describe it, but it does have that typical Espy feel with messing with the interface while crafting the story. These are one of those kinds of works where...

I'm upset that I knew what this was going to be about within the first few paragraphs and the title. I suppose it also helps that I'm familiar with the authors sort of humor when it comes to this sort of story. All things considered I'd very easily recommend your work of this genre to people...

This was a fun one! The presentation, especially the opening paragraph, was very strong in establishing what kind of story we would be reading. I get the feeling it was inspired by, or is at least coincidentally similar to, SCP logs and things of that nature. "Found footage" documentary style...

Catnip for you too! This was a cute story! It was very predictable in terms of the beats that would happen if only for the meta reason of the story's length. Once there was a cry in the forest, I knew exactly what was going to happen by the beat. That doesn't mean the story was bad, though. In...

Catnip time! I really liked the transition from being so ignorant of what his situation was to eventually showing the relation of our perspective to humans and just following orders. But showing little hints now and then of exactly what happened by the time we got to the midway point...

Heya! This is gonna be a review of the prologue through chapter 4! Small note, you used the wrong "than" in your opening statement/legal disclosure. The opening prologue was a very far zoom out of the state of affairs for the world, very much like a cinematic prologue without dialogue. I...

Hey there! This will be a review for the prologue and first two chapters. This is a strong opening line. It's basic and doesn't describe too much, but it does start right in the action. Something I can appreciate in particular about this story is how it doesn't really idle around for much...