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Weekly fic rec: Flames & Roses by @Arbee This one is definitely on the grittier side of things, with Pokemon easily getting injured with some very graphic injuries, and also succumbing to them even within the first few chapters. However, the writing is very descriptive, especially in the...

Hey there Val! I'm here to review up to the interlude after looking through the chapter lengths. These tiny chapters will make it quite easy to review on a per chapter basis, so that's what I'm gonna go for here. They're also really dense with stuff happening thanks to the hybrid script format...

I REFUSE to fall behind on review replies again, so I'll be replying to these straightaway so I don't let them pile up. Hopefully. I like to think that I'm having every character's behavior be measured and relatable in some way, so that when the MC is slighted, it makes perfect sense and...

Hey Wind! Glad to see a catchup for the blitz year! Always a pleasure to have a returning reader despite how long the whole story is. Don't be afraid to prioritize reading and just casually enjoying and giving a review on overall stuff later, whatever suits your fancy, but this has been nice...

Welcome to TR, and here's some reviews for everything you've written so far. Onto the prologue... Starting right in the action! Very nice, and I liked a lot of the language going on. Some of the idioms and similes were a little awkward, though. One odd example that stood out to me as awkward...

And as for me... with it reaching its completion, I'd like to promote my finished longfic: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation Hands of Creation, or HoC, is my first longfic, very recently completed. I'm quite proud of it! And I hope that now that it's finished, others will be able to...

I'm gonna give a special promotion for Path of Valor by @Ambyssin this Blitz. It's near the final arcs now, and will likely be finished by the time next Blitz rolls around! Not only that, but it will likely be Amby's last foray into the longfic scene as life propels him into the depths of med...

I can throw my hat in for one or two "one big review that covers X chapters/words of the fic" high tier review prize so long as I have a month per.

Epilogue Beyond It was another beautiful spring afternoon. The last of the rain clung to blades of grass, which shimmered under the bright sun. A Charizard with a rainbow flame talked seemingly to nobody as he tended to rows upon rows of berry trees. “I see,” whispered an invisible presence...

Finale ~ Part 5 – Countless “Okay, you two. I think we’ve had enough tears.” “But… you’re the one crying.” “Yeah, well… I know how you feel, too. But, please… reach out to the Worldcore.” “Huh? What for?” “I’m going to seal your memories of this conversation. Just for a little while.”...

Finale ~ Part 4 – Thousand Arceus held Star’s tattered soul in his Hands. She twitched and whimpered, crying little apologies a thousand times. She didn’t know what to say to him. His warnings, from ages ago to now, had all come to pass. Now she could barely move, could barely look at him...

Finale ~ Part 3 – Hundred “That should do it,” Arceus whispered. A beautiful, nearly incomprehensible swirl of expanding lights ballooned out before them. Star whistled in wonder, leaning closer. “It won’t be the most glamorous reality. I think only a few scattered worlds, and only one will...

Finale ~ Part 2 – Ten “Wow, uh… that’s a new look you’ve got there, buddy.” A strange, four-legged, llama-thing stood before her. It had golden hooves, a strange, spiked ring around its torso, no mouth, and striking green-red eyes. “It’s Arceus. And… it appeals to me.” “So that’s what Arceus...

Finale ~ Part 1 -- One She tapped her chin with a pencil, nervously deciding on one option over another. Agonizing over every word, every single circumstance, all down to a simple multiple-choice test. God, she hated tests. She’d been telling herself that for months now. A gentle wind blew...

Finale ~ Prelude – Zero A girl stood in front of a large tree with a single flat stone at its base. Nervously, she sat down and read the very top of the thick stack of papers: Overseer Godhood Certification – Intermediate. All she had to do was take this test, pass, and she and her partner...

Chapter 203 – Countdown Diyem stared at the setting sun on the opposite side of the horizon, a frown plastered on his face. “…Even with the world saved, you’re here to sulk.” Treecko Mhynt had appeared next to the black-flamed Charizard, her arms crossed. “It’s in my nature,” Diyem replied...

Chapter 202 – Thirteenth Hour It hadn’t been more than a kilo—admittedly, with the sun’s speed, it was hard to tell—and the black abyss that had flooded Kilo Mountain was already halfway evaporated. In its most distilled form, the black ocean could not survive against the pure Radiance that...

Chapter 201 – Borrowed Time Dialga’s efforts had bought them time. Now, he was exhausted and resting at the top of the makeshift spire in the middle of Kilo Village. Owen thanked him with a silent nod. “And you want to Teleport us five to the Tree of Life,” Leph clarified. “The barrier’s down...

Chapter 200 – The Frozen Dusk Beep beep beep! “It’s alright,” Koraidon said. “We’re going faster.” “By how much?” “A factor of 100. Seems to be the standard Overworld limit. They bought themselves some time… quite an investment.” Miraidon’s pixilated eyes flashed with surprise. “They...

LONG overdue, sorry! But I hope this review blitz prize finds you well with some verrry deep chapters. Since I'm already so far along for Fledglings, I can give you some feedback for much more recent chapter. These were big chapters, and I wanted to spend some time polishing the review...