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Okay you managed to stumble across an AU idea that combines two things I like and tickles me in just the right places and I am here for it. Let's get the bad out of the way first. I echo everything Negrek said about spelling, grammar, etc. and also your prose feels... disjointed. Like, it's not...

Heyoooooooooooo I wanted to do some newbie fic reviews and I figured I'd start with you since you're not as far along here. I love, love, LOVE your prologue. That sort of in-universe myth and legend shit is -chef's kiss- I like the term "wildeners" to describe non-civilized Pokemon - the...

This is a story set in one of my original settings, the Midnightverse, a post-apocalyptic post-human fantasy isekai story starring a human from a "normal" world getting yeeted to there as a weird chimera, plus a native human descendant and her dog. It is also a homage to Steamed Hams that is...

Oof, five months. Worldbuilding June and Artfight ambushed me and made me lose track of fic stuff. But I've got a chapter here anyway! Hope you enjoy: Chapter 7: Encounters Aaron had taken some time to himself to explore the monastery. Partially because he was bored, and partially because the...

Good to have you! There is... a lot of bullshit lore on that one I should go further into here sometime. (and ahahaha) he's just a tiny child noted, will Do That MEMES SON oh, will work on that you will see more on that later. hell you did judging from later in this review YEP...

Well. This is it. The end. This fic has come a long way in three years and while I'm glad it's over I'm gonna miss it. But! I'll save further thoughts for after the main attraction - though thank @Venia Silente for one of the many, many foreshadow-y cameos: Epilogue: New Game + Hoopa looked...

Welp. Here it is. The final chapter other than the epilogue I'm planning. It's quite the finale, I enjoyed putting it together, and I hope you enjoy reading it: Chapter 10: Endgame Palkia was in a huddle around a table with both her group and Lucina's group. Even Wuzzles was looking over the...

Okay! Here's Chapter 9! Do be warned this has what will probably be the goriest scene in the entire fic. Also some characters I was looking forward to introducing! Chapter 9: Teenage Wasteland It was dark. The clouds rarely let the sun through. It had been this way for years, as had the...

Surprise! You thought I was DONE with Fire Emblem crossovers after Rude Awakening?! Well think again! This fic is going in a whole new direction with more FE characters than Smash Bros, starting... Now! Bonus Chapter 2: Fire Emblem Heroes After All Polly was resting on a bench outside the...

Here's some fanart! Giratina's disguise by roule and Dialga's disguise by frilthy! Time for Chapter 8! Do note that this is the point where the fic gets... Noticeably less lighthearted and silly. It won't lose that entirely but... Don't say I didn't warn you. As for what that entails...

Boop, throwing my chapterfics into the mix

Heyo! This is a short short slice of life story commemorating our two most recent Super Smash Bros DLC characters. It would have been a bit longer but it ended up taking longer than expected, so I tried to get it out of the way. Regardless, I hope you find this to be an amusing little tale...

Done! I'd like a review on Heroes After All please.

Oh no, this poor Cosmog! Gen 7 gave us an intresting bit of lore in that some Legendaries can start off small and helpless, and you've captured this Cosmog's feelings pretty well here. I like that they're so utterly confused by the concept of human names. The main criticism I have... I'm kinda...

Yeah I know full well Auric Ash fics are kind of a semi-cliche on FFnet so my first step was to do the opposite of emulating them, including making my protagonist decidedly outclassed. :P I would say something either way about whether or not you're on to anything, but that is spoilers so I...

Ahaha glad this caught your eye! Things will definitely get wilder as you go along/once you get to the later chapters. Oh wow glad you thought that worked well, especially since I hadn't really thought about that. Thoughts. -- Yeah, commonly cited problem with my stuff- I tend to rush...

Rude Awakening (Chapter 6 Spoilers): Heroes After All: I (8M) am trying to make friends at school but literally no one likes me? Also I have no Pokemon and my superpowers keep exploding, which does not help. (Chapter 6 spoilers):

THE DEED IS DONE: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/a-series-of-conversations-one-shot.73/post-827 I'd like a review of Rude Awakening please. Preferably by someone who knows Fire Emblem, but it's not absolutely required. ^_^;

This was really cute! I like the perspective of the two Pokemon and their body language and their opinions of what was going on between both their trainers. The LOUDLY MAKING LOVE scene at the end with them trying to ignore it was funny. The only real criticism I have is that it's not entirely...

Here is a genuinely important-to-the-plot chapter. Not memey important like the last one. Chapter 6: Error Virion ran down the dim corridors of the barracks. He looked left, he looked right, he looked at his shoulders to make sure Kellam wasn't sitting there again, and he crept toward...