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A shining light descended from the sky and the glow faded, revealing Diancie - except even different looking than before, gilded in shining gems. She gazed scornfully upon Orzo. "You are a poor excuse for royalty. You call yourself a king yet there are none who would serve you willingly. If...

Just before Nine's feathered body turned completely to stone, a surge of electricity from Hazel charged him, and Merian used the last of his strength to lend his own energy to the electric type. CRACK! The thunderclap was deafening, consuming the birds in white hot electricity. The scent of...

What a stunning opening line! It perfectly sets up the character, time and circumstance. It also frames everything very well through Cyru's viewpoints and is basically perfection. Love it. Love the detail here that he refers to emotion as disgraceful. Love all the little moments of Cyrus...

Powerful wind surged from behind the team, giving unexpected speed to their movements and attacks. And as a unit, they struck as hard as they could. A shining cannonball, launched by a precise sound blast, hurtled through the air and crashed right through the shield enveloping Yveltal. Aggron...

A shining sphere of light formed in front of Wallace and a shimmering form of Manaphy appeared. Time seemed to slow. She lowered her head and pressed it lightly against Wallace's for a moment. "I hear your prayers, Wallace. And I shall answer them." She floated up and turned to face Orzo. Her...

"B̸̫͐e̴̯̼͑͊h̸͇͊͒ŏ̸̫l̴̝̈̃d̶̢̬̿ ̸̹̎̀ȳ̷̡̰̀ơ̴͇͋ư̶̮̲̓r̴̹͒̚ ̸͇̐K̶̼͎̓͠ȋ̶̊͜n̵̩̐͆g̶͙̿" Burning, golden light faded to reveal a massive figure that towered over all. Five rings, blazing with power, and two beings emerging from them, thrashing madly under Orzo's control. "Prepare yourselves!"...

Orzo's horrible, grating laugh filled the air. "V̴e̸r̷y̸ ̶w̴e̵l̸l̶.̷ ̸I̴f̸ ̵y̷o̴u̷ ̸w̶i̴l̷l̴ ̴n̴o̷t̴ ̵k̷n̸e̴e̴l̶,̶ ̷t̵h̵e̶n̷ ̵y̴o̶u̵ ̶w̴i̷l̸l̷ ̷p̶e̸r̴i̴s̵h̶.̸" A shadow slid from Xavian's body and he fell limp before vanishing, as if teleported. The darkness oozed up the wall and coalesced...

Hello! Here for roulette, and I'll be covering chapters 1 & 2. As you know, I mentioned that I find your revised version of chapter 1 to be much more palatable. The change in language makes gym battles feel less like lethal death matches (or at least, matches where death was a distinct...

Inch by inch, all pressed forward. Each step seemed to grow heavier, the air denser and an overwhelming pressure on all sides. And finally, despite the sense that the land itself was trying all it could to hold them back, they stood before the shadowy throne. And it was... unimpressive. Broken...

They arrived both slowly and all once. A dark, broken castle looming over them, casting an endless shadow. Crumbling parapets, shattered windows and decayed semblances of what might have been trees clawing their way from the earth. A semblance of courtyard lay around them, though it was only...

Sand. Flygon stumbled and looked around. Before him lay a vast expanse of desert, a cloudless blue sky above and barely a wind stirring the air. Home? But then... he looked down, then all around. No sign of his hat or apron or any of his things. A tiny knot formed in his stomach. Swallowing it...

Darkrai cast an even look on Odile, then back on the land around them. He seemed to pick up on Odile's frustration. "There is no joy to be found in this kind of suffering," he said softly, though mostly to himself. "I suspect you would feel differently were it a friend of your own suffering."...

"This is not a paradise." Darkrai said, his tone dense with bitterness. He fixed his gaze on Odile, gaze both stern and pained. "Do you not see? This is decay. An abomination, a distortion. It was not designed this way, created this way." Darkrai reached down and picked up a chunk of broken...