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Review reply! I forgot to put it in with the chapter proper whoops I'll see about adding some clarity in a future edit. But since it wasn't clear I'll just let you know that I'll keep this in mind. I've got an unpublished oneshot that's going to be used as an interlude chapter somewhere down...

Chapter 18: Underlying Tensions No…No! Muse jerked awake with a gasp, eyes wide with fear. She sprang to her feet, her claws enveloped with shadowy energy. Her gaze darted about the dark room, illuminated only by a sliver of moonlight. No one else was here. It was just her, her nightmares, and...

Title: Different Eyes Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/different-eyes.323/post-51197 Chapters: 2 Theme: no

Hi Jackie! Going to drop a short review over the first couple of chapters. It's been a while since I read the prologue so I gave it a quick skim and it's just as good as I remember, but let me talk about the content that's actually new to me. These first couple of chapters feel pretty...

Title: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Path of Valor Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pok%C3%A9mon-mystery-dungeon-path-of-valor.370/post-51179 Chapters: 3 Theme: No

Hi Amby, Just dropping a quick review on chapters 12 through 14! And, oh boy, these chapters introduced some juicy mysteries. We've got the mystery of why accounts of the darkest day by modern pokemon are so wildly different from what Reshiram claims. Related to that, there's the mystery of...

Title: Weaversong Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/weaversong.937/post-51175 Chapters: 1 Weekly Theme: Yes

Hi Adam! This is going to be a relatively quick review, since you only have one chapter at this time, but I hope you find it useful regardless! I love the use of all the senses in the opening paragraphs. You paint a very vivid picture of the forest, and it helps me feel grounded in the world. I...

Title: Once a Thief Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/once-a-thief.854/post-51144 Chapters: 4 Theme: yes

Hi Fobbie I figured it was about time I got around to Reading Once a Thief. I know I've owed you a review for a while after your beta read a chapter for me, so consider this the return for that. If at any point you feel like this review doesn't go into enough detail just advise such and I'll see...

Title: Crashing Fate Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/crashing-fate.870/post-51122 Chapters: 4 Weekly Theme: Yes

Hi Espy. I'm so glad to see this fic back up. I've mentioned this to you before, but I read the first couple of chapters initially the first time you posted it and was disappointed when I found out that you had deleted it. It reminds me a bit of a fic I read when I was younger so I am happy to...

Title: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Rebirth Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pok%C3%A9mon-mystery-dungeon-rebirth.402/post-51095 Chapters: 3 Theme?: Yes

Hey Shadow. I took a look at your first three chapters, and thought I’d drop a quick review with my impressions so far. I think you've done an excellent job of showing off your tone quickly, so that the reader kind of knows what to expect. Between actions that imply a world where it can be hard...

Title: Pokemon: Legendary Adventures (The Journey Begins) Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-legendary-adventures-the-journey-begins.501/post-51015 Chapters: 6 Theme: Yes

Every time KOA is mean to echo in the early chapters I get all We stan unusual starters in this house. Hi Tetra! I figured I would stop and drop a review now that I've read six chapters. I was planning to read up to chapter 5, but with that cliffhanger, it made sense to get through its...

Title: White Swan, Black Swan Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-50923 Chapters: 4 (Prologue +1-3) Weekly Theme: Yes The Long Road Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-long-road.641/post-50929 Chapters: 5 Weekly...

Hi pano! Just going to drop a quick impressions review for the first 5 parts. These are going to be pretty simple feedback things, but I hope it’s helpful regardless. Limits was interesting because I found it fun to see someone like Steven Stone at, well, his limit before he was as strong as he...

Hi Sind. this is going to be an impressions review covering the prologue and first 3 chapters. I'm going to cover general thoughts on the story thus far and on our main character, as well as a few other characters. The opening was delightfully creepy. You're quick to set up our greater threat...

Fic Title: Making it Big Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/making-it-big.902/post-50778 Number of Chapters: 5 Weekly Theme: Yes