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I've had a mind to check this out for a long time now, especially since it features the best pokemon. I'm glad I finally did! I'm mainly evaluating this from a casual reader perspective, so I probably won't give a lot of in-depth crit. Normally, I find second-person one of the hardest tenses...

Holy smokes Q pop off huh? This is an impulse review on my phone so uh. I hope there's no typos. Anyways this had me cackling, it was short, punchy and humorous. I'm not a laugh out loud person but a lot of the parts of this story make me do that snort laugh, and one particular part literally...

I have been meaning to drop a review on this for ages, figured now is a good a time as any! I have to say, I really enjoyed this! A Dodrio MC is completely unique as far as I'm aware, and you did a great job. I love the idea of each of the heads different outlooks and personalities, and I think...

Takin a read of chapters 1 & 2, since I'd actually had it in the back of my mind to read this for some time. The first chapter starts pretty tame, and subverts the usual PMD tropes. Instead of a character waking up with amnesia and trying to figure out whats going on, we have two established...

Very excited to check out the project you've been talking about for so long! Congrats on starting it. I'll be mixing some thoughts with quotes and such, and some of my personal opinion, but feel free to ignore if it doesn't match what you're seeking. I like the opening, I agree that starting...

Chapter 5: To Rise Again “Raga. Raga.” The Flygon stubbornly kept her back to Hana. Holding back a sigh, Hana sat down. Ten long minutes had passed since the Alakazam had teleported her to a quiet corner of Mossdeep City, thankfully free from Steven’s gaze, which she couldn’t meet, and...

Chapter 4: Cadence Until now, Hana had never appreciated plain, regular wind. But after her three-day long excursion through the desert, and feeling nothing but the sting of sand against every uncovered speck of her body, it felt blissful. She basked in it as her two pokemon, Cosmo and Pi...

Hello everyone! Might as well throw my hat in the ring. My main work: Legendary Adventures Summary: 6 years after the fall of Galactic, Koamaru sets out on his trainer journey with a singular goal - be the first to catch a legendary pokemon. The right way. And he's got the Perfect Plan to do...

- What kind of prize(s) would you like to offer? I can handle doing probably reviews! I was thinking of offering to basically read up to 5 chapters/20k words or so of a work (exact stopping point to the author's discretion, within reason) and offering a more substantial review and trying to...

RIP to my dreams of quitting my job to run pokemon RP's 😞 This is an excellent point, ty for sharing your insight! A lot of it was due to a few prime factors: Irl problems in the early stages, burnout in the final half, and sometimes overextending to try and make sure everyone had time to...

Gotcha! Thank you for letting me know :quag:

Just to clarify, do you mean physically slow OOC or that the pacing of the 'story' felt slower?

Hello, and welcome to the part of AQ I’ve been looking forward to almost as much as the actual RP and ending itself. The retrospective! Where you get to roast me and point out every mistake I made (kidding, pls don’t lol). In all seriousness, for those unaware, a retrospective is basically a...

The earth shook as he landed, then his form rippled unnaturally. For a lingering moment, he remained still, a fallen titan. Then the air hummed and with no warning, a surge of energy exploded from his form. It struck, but with only enough force to perhaps stagger some, but cause little real...

Cries of triumph, determination, hope and love filled the air. And as the disparate group made their last stand against the face of evil, a light began to grow from them. Silver threads, between trainer and pokemon, pokemon and pokemon, and from human to human. From friend to friend, old and...

Shadow's flickered once more in Orzo's chest, and the rings pulsed in response. Somewhere in the mass of darkness pooling in his chest, there was something almost resembling a silhouette...The air grew cold, black tendrils dancing across the floor, swirling around Orzo's feet and curling around...

A gentle breeze blew through the void. It carried with it the scent of new grass, flowers, and spring. And then, a voice. Soft and sweet and full of hope. "I hear you, Steven Stone." Overhead, the sky grew lighter, soft colors rippling across the firmament. A single beam of light formed...

Eerie magenta light from Olivia’s Dazzling Gleam seared Dialga’s scales, staggering the great dragon. It fell to one knee, roaring in blind rage. Before it could gather its footing, Jack surged forward. The piercing light of his Leer cut through to the weakened dragon of time, giving Jack the...

A cold shock would run through Nate, ice through his veins and fire across his skin, and for a brief moment he would feel the pure empty hunger of the void, endless, all consuming. Hollow. Then the sensation of something grabbing at him, dragging him down, every horrible memory, every darkest...

Sigmin chuckled at Neo's antics as he listened to Wes and his partner. It was comforting, somehow, to hear someone else's story too. To remember he wasn't the only one who understood. Well, other than Nox, of course. "Orre huh?" The name was vaguely familiar, but then again, he'd never been...