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Chapter 5: Stirring Shadows Wes couldn’t help but grumble a little once Phenac City came into view. Yesterday he had hoped to never have to lay eyes on this city again, and yet here he was, shielding his eyes from its brightness even with his shaded goggles on. He parked in his usual place...

Chapter 4: Questions Rui wasn't entirely sure this wasn't all just some sort of fever dream. In the span of just over a day, she'd seen a crazed Pokémon, been kidnapped, had nearly suffocated in a sack, was rescued by someone who acted for all the world as though he'd rather have left her...

Please pardon me while I’m doing a happy dance over here at your review! Seriously - thank you!! I love in depth reviews SO much! Your advice is super helpful, too, and I’ll need to make some edits to the chapter! I do have a tendency to repeat words without realizing it, so thanks for bringing...

Chapter 3: Change of Plans Sunlight streamed down on the whitewashed streets and sparkling fountains, and there was no respite from the blinding brightness and burning heat as Wes and his Pokémon walked with Rui to the mayor's home. The girl certainly noticed this, as she commented for what...

Chapter 2: Interference Wes was awakened the following morning by the sound of footsteps and chatter from the diner overhead. He sat up, stretched, and was slowly gathering his bearings when a familiar smell wafted to his nose... Bacon. He groaned. "Aw, hell—" "ESPI!" He was pushed flat on...

Oh my goodness THANK YOU for this review!! I have lots of exciting plans for this story so I’m so happy to have even one reader :) your constructive feedback is much appreciated! Lots of things that I didn’t pick up on and will pay attention to in later chapters. I may edit a few of the wording...

Summary: Desperate to escape the lawless region of Orre, an ex-criminal named Wes attempts to leave both the desert and his past behind for good. Not all goes to plan, however, and soon he is caught in the middle of a dark and sinister plan that stirs quietly from the shadows. Whispers of...