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Chapter 14 The Last Fight But One Nina bared her teeth as Shuranabi sized the group of four up. Aega had stopped channeling energy into the Passage of Time, and Nina spotted Robin brandishing a blast wand. “Hmph. You remain as naive as ever, Lifis.” Shuranabi’s eye stared hard at him, before...

Hello Zion! Coming in as part of V-Wheel over at United to review your new fic for the first time. I do like the setting of where this fic takes place, in the open green grassland town known as Cottonshire, and we already get a glimpse of a few myths and tales from this chapter alone. From the...

Hi, Amby! Here to do another slew of Path of Valor chapters in my quest to be caught up before the finale rolls in, and the Diner Review Event is the perfect opportunity to do just that. Last time proved to be a little unfortunate for our heroes in terms of Paradox gaining the advantage and...

Hello there! Another Review Event, another opportunity to get stuck back into this fic and chip away at it some more. Looking at the threadmark numbers, I do appear to be halfway caught up between where the story currently is, at least in terms of numbers. But although I had fun with the...

Chapter 38 Mothim to Flame In another ruined part of Mirionydd, a flash of black smoke suddenly appeared, and when it dissipated, Malvolio and Sabrina appeared, along with the defeated Riolu that lay crumpled on the ground. Once the dark vapour had disappeared around them, Malvolio suddenly...

Chapter 13 Final Recollections The last few floors of Dusk Forest went by smoothly. A bit too smoothly, the more Nina thought it over. The wild Pokémon didn’t provide too great of a challenge, and once Aega announced the final floor before the plateau, and even the fact that one of their team...

Hello again! Back for yet another V-Wheel (back-to-back, huh?), and back for more Team Traveller shenanigans on the Horizon Continent. Let's see what our heroes get up to as strangers in a strange land: Bonus Chapter: Turbulent Roadtrip, Part 2 What a shame that even in this world, Pleo can't...

Chapter 12 Celebi Remembers It had been such a fraught moment at the peak of Dark Ice Mountain that Nina hadn’t even thought about where the Teleport Gem would send them. In that moment, all she cared about was getting away from Primal Dialga, not caring where she ended up. All this time, for...

Hello, hello! Hopping back in for V-Wheel to get a bit further into this fic. Seeing that the next part is a Guiding Light crossover, I expect this next arc might prove to be rather interesting. :eyes: Bonus Chapter: Turbulent Roadtrip, Part 1 Must be one hell of a whiplash going from desert...

Chapter 11 Primal Dialga Countless charred corpses lay before Nina, in a chunk of land that had been carved through by a powerful beam. They were a ragtag militia. They had amassed a small following and vowed to take down Primal Dialga’s tyrannical reign, to hopefully restore the world to the...

Chapter 10 The Voice of Life “My name is Skathi,” the Froslass spoke. “And I am the Voice of Life.” Of all the things Nina was expecting to encounter out in this frozen wasteland, she didn’t expect this stranger to introduce herself with that title of all things. The Voice of Life? She...

Hello, Kiba! Back to this fic again as part of my Diner P-Wheel obligations, and so back in I dive to review Chapter 7. Chapter 7, Part 1 I wonder if this A--- Village place will end up having its name revealed in a shock twist in a short bit. That does make me wonder whenabouts in the fic...

Chapter 9 Words We Wished We'd Said Cold. Bitter, biting cold. She was used to being in cold darkness since the collapse of time, but nothing like this. This frigid air was far beyond anything she was comfortable with. It added to the cold and isolated feeling that clung to this dark...

Gonna make a more consistent effort to stay caught up from now until fic's end. 🙏 Starting now. Chapter 137 He'll probably have a sixth by the time our heroes catch up to him. Maybe even more. :mewlulz: Really showing the menacing side of Paradox here in spite of his humorous demeanour thus...

Chapter 8 Ascending Dark Ice Mountain The first thing that greeted Robin, Lifis and Nina when they reappeared after the Teleport Gem’s long-range teleport was the sheer cold of their surroundings, as they landed in a snowy valley with icy mountain peaks towering over them. Robin certainly...

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Hi, Amby! I said I'd be back to read the rest of Path of Valor for Review Blitz, and so here I am to do the rest. Left on a bit of an emotional note last time with Nova's sacrifice, and somehow I get the feeling the feels won't stop just there. Climactic stuff will no doubt come to be in this...

Chapter 7 Dusknoir Believes After Robin, Lifis and Nina had disappeared through the Teleport Gem, Pellehan had worked up his last gasps of strength to lay against a nearby rock. And so there he lay, awaiting death to claim him. He wasn’t sure how long he remained there. Fifteen minutes...

Hello, Espy! Since Review Blitz is up and running, it's a good opportunity to leap back into this fic which I haven't gotten to for a good while. We're still in the early days in the school arc in this PSMD rewrite, and I'm curious to see how else this arc does things differently from the game...

Chapter 6 The Keeper of the Flame The Dungeon they entered afterwards was a breeze. Barren Pass, as Abundant Pass had come to be called in these desolate times, was a hill of petrified trees, begone of leaves, blackened rock, and dry soil. Mercifully, the place was bereft of Pokémon inside…...