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Beautiful work, Pano! Thanks for putting these all together.

Ah, sorry, I should have been more clear. wrt Victory Road, I wasn't talking about the part where the trainer ultimately decides to leave Butterfree behind--I agree with you that that's important and should be included. Rather, these were the specific paragraphs I thought might be cuttable...

Ah, sorry for the confusion! I meant that it's a common setup for narrative fiction, not that it's something I've experienced myself. Yet! ;)

Aaaaa, this is delightful! I hope you had a lot of fun writing this, because it's definitely loads of fun to read. He really would be a shit doctor. :P This is the SWEETEST thing, though. Imagine if these two had been given opposite alignments. :P Of COURSE the child tried to get out of...

Title: Broken Things Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/broken-things.57/post-51593 Chapters: 4 Theme: No Title: Luceat Lux Vestra Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/luceat-lux-vestra.977/post-51592 Chapters: 3 Theme: No Title: Burner Link...

Edit: Sorry, I missed the note about revisions on this one. Apologies if this wasn't the sort of feedback you were looking for; let me know if you'd prefer for me to delete this or otherwise change things. Glad to see this one posted up on the forums. Really need to respond to more of last...

Back at last! Always up in the air how much I'll get through, but for now at least I can clear out the last of "Electric." Seems like I kind of left off in an awkward place last time; ended on a big "Kekoa NO" moment, while these chapters are much quieter and focused on the group as individuals...

Hey, silurica! Glad to see you posting your story. It's a classic setup here, the arrogant deity who requires a mortal's help to restore their full power. I'm sure it'll be fun to watch these two clash on their journey, and I'm sure they have a lot to learn from each other as well! I like that...

...holy shit. I never expected someone to piece all the clues together so quickly! I mean, what are you even going to do for the next 65 chapters now? You already know how this ends! And I thought I was so clever, using second person for that final "u"...

Title: A Confession Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/a-confession.868/post-51446 Chapters: 1 Weekly Theme: Yes Title: Butterfree Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/butterfree-one-shot-v3.973/post-51459 Chapters: 1 Weekly Theme: Yes

Damn, this is different. And way better for it, I'd say! I think I may not have actually reviewed this at all in the past? That's kind of wild. But this revision does feel like a big step up, and what better time, eh? I loved getting to see more of the narrator's other pokémon here and get a...

Sup, Walrein. Hoping to catch up on some of your recent work this week! I figured I'd start with this one, since my impression was it was a bit different than your usual work, and I'm always excited to check out stories where you aren't doing straight humor; I think they're some of your most...

This is a little one-shot I wrote a while back but never posted over here. It's a slice of life focusing on a woman and her monstrous roommates and how they all try to cope with a big change in their lives--not the kind of thing I often publish! I hope you enjoy. Content Warnings: None Summary...

Fic Title: Path of Valor Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pok%C3%A9mon-mystery-dungeon-path-of-valor.370/post-51242 Chapters: 3 Weekly theme: No Fic Title: Crashing Fate Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/crashing-fate.870/post-51317 Chapters: 3...

Hey, Espy! Since I'm rather drastically behind your main fic's progression, I'm glad you've posted this one that I can try to catch pretty much from the beginning. "Legendaries are positions, not people" is a great line and also a great concept to work with! I've seen a number of...

Hey, Ambyssin. Been a while, but as Blitz rolls around again, I thought I'd return for Chapters 6-8! I enjoyed that there was a bit more focus on the school side of things in these chapters; those parts continue to be what I enjoy most about the story. And I think Vegna's windowless classroom...

Happy birthday! Hope things look up for you.

Fic: The Legendarian Chronicles Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-51010 Number of Chapters: 2 Weekly Theme: No Fic: Abandoned Link to Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/abandoned.933/ Number of Chapters: 1...

Hey, Wesley! I thought I'd return and take a look at some of these little side stories you posted. They seemed like a nice way to get into your story without needing to commit to another full chapterfic right away! A quick note before we get started--your paragraphs got kind of squashed together...

Never too late to say hello! Glad you caught the writing bug--hope you're having fun with Just a Normal Day! Based on your username, I have to wonder whether any kaiju will be featuring. :P Feel free to pop in when you're feeling it and take a break when you don't. Always glad to have you...