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This is a copy of the PMed review for chapter one of "Death is Lonley", it's a line by line done over several weeks and posted on the main site with permission from the author. Appologies with the formating Word hates me when I transfer things from it to here... Review chapter one, section A...

I did a review of "Touch my Tail" Here's the link, The LINK Word counter was at 300 words.

I.. am hearing this in my head in the fashion of Stupendium's "Crazy red" a la "rouge's gallery"and... Yeah I'm sharing the sound/song... Here's a link to the song, sorta pg 13 rating here. Crazy Redd song I'm not in a place here laughing out loud would be good/considerate, so I'm not...

Perhaps a poll would better answer than tossing it back and forth here? That way anyone writing/reading can voice their opinion. If it helps I wouldn't mind joining a non-PMD book club. It's rare I read one I like and am willing to go through to the end. I find the conflict of human/pokemon...

Since theres a strong divide between fandom interest in PMD and non-PMD fics why not just host two clubs? One for PMD and one for everything else? Then the participants can "jump" from club to club when they want a taste of something different or if a proposed read from the other camp catches...

This is one of two scenes I'm seeking help with. An action scene, non battle related, form the work "Two paths" that I'm editing the heck out of. I trimmed it a bit but it still clocks a 780 words... Sorry there wasn't much I felt safe to cull and hold all the trouble parts so it overshot a...

new review So I was busy and here we go, results! Review for room 813 by persephone word count 890

“Code Gray in Wing 2C!” The flashlight ignited in one fluid motion, I like how this feels so like a hospital announcement/code word. However in regards to the flashlight unless the lot’s being set on fire, or a traditional lamp with oil to catch, I’d recommend swapping ignite for something...

Just tossed up a review of "Do psychic types dream of electric sheep"'s prologue. the review It ran for 1400 words per the counter.

Electric sheep review Well this is one way to be dropped into a mystery dungeon setting. Without Mew, or whatever Legend is there to soften the transition/landing between expected and no… It does show the horror of what is basically child abduction, mind wiping, and the like. Thanks for sharing...

Honestly I just wrote this to write it... (After Pens grand sweep of thirty fics in one shot... yeah... I'm not winning top spot and more than content just to play to play and get some quality reading in) As thanks for borrowing one of my bit characters and using him so well I reviewed...

A wonderful fic of familiar warped by outre... I never thought I'd read a mix match of pokemon, misc pop-culture and Alice in Wonderland in my life... but here we are. The whole was a wonderful light-hearted romp that I enjoyed from start to finish. While I was not too familiar with the 'mon...

Just finished my review of continental divides chapter one... my review Too... tired.... to mature adult.... and.... word count... also it qualifies for this weeks bonus

review/analysis/whatever of chapter one.... Still there. Somewhere. I’d rec “They were still there, somewhere” While I get the idea is to show Nat’s disjointed, panicked thought process a hair of clarity is lost. It also can be dropped, no damage done to comprehension either way. She had...

Thanks for taking the time. And I apologize in advanced for the readability issues. I’m working on re-doing a number of my fic (and acquiring a beta) since it’s been drawn to my attention how bad some of the structural/clarity problems are. I had not realized they were compromising readability...

Luminary, review... Yes I copped out at page eight... but it's a review and going further is going to require input from the author on if they want me to do so with what.. So I cut it off so they could decide, if they want to, and left the lot open ended. It's still a detailed break down of...

A/N: Alright, as a heads up I copy and pasted this story into my word doc so I could work on it off line. For the sake of total transparency I'm letting you know I did this and I promise to delete it as soon as I'm done. I got up to page eight, saw I was repeating myself, and decided to stop...

Finished a review last night. Word counter pegged it at 2600 words despite all the stars- review for the fic by fashion queen That should put me at 5.

Part reaction by read part summery, my review of your first chapter. Alright while we open up with the scenario, it seems more event and character centric, wheeling through facts of what’s going on, and the character’s name/profession before branching out to talk about kid-piolet program of the...