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Chapter 4 review Avren has a case of denail i think. the ai is all but family. I mean if you think about it he was built avren's father from the ground up... Turo just skipped the "mom" step. Granted avren could skip over that revelation and focus on the complexity of sounds like... Acts...

Chapter 3 response I am trying to poke through the bulk of your fics... Time to write on the phones a bit touch and go so i am a bit slow and definitly grammer challenged these days but i am hoping to get through everything before novembers holidays kick up and kick me in the tail as a result...

Chapter 2 response I dunno lights on after time travel seems really really important. As in we arent alone anymore... But then this is a mon protag so some featherheadedness is anticipated. (Though not ash levels) Snorts... Love how celebis partner is literally backseat driving timetravel...

Chapter 1 response Lobely how avern is admiting to being a hair unhinged here. Granted globe trotting to get a mon screams ambition or desperation and i suspect this isnt a common mon here... Hm small and floating sonpossibly psychic type... and per setting (scarlet/violet) and avern having to...

I can wait for you to finish then hunt down the comic for a compare contrast after the fact...

Review chapter 7 Yeah i think telling cyrus how to do anything much less slapping down on his sore spots is a good way to be offed later down the line. The fact that cyrus is still twitching hours later definitlt spells bad things for charons continued life span once he gets his head on...

Chapter 6 review/reply I got some odd looks cackling at my phone in public. Thanks for those saturn vs fish images. In which cyrus aquires captian obvious as his new title and says... Yep charons on a killing path and guess who he's aiming at. Poor saturn having to wrestle with it all day...

Also wrong franchize i know but i keep seeing this in my head

Chapter 5 review So kaisei is the luckiest idiot ever... Nice... While it makes saturns job easier i can see a few ways it could be made harder. Not knowing the target (i havent had the pleasure to read the manga) i am going to guess they might have some tie to heatran but thats a shot in the...

Chapter 4 review reaction Lovely title drop there between cyrus and saturn. I think his only escape hatch now is to play everyone against everyone... So keeping a link to cyrus isnt quite so illogical crush fanboy activity it might seem at firat glance. Still you really can grasp here how...

Chapter 3 reaction Well cyrus perfectionism and purity obsession does leave him a few vulnerabilites... Granted generic bottled waters an amgle i wouldnt have figured on... Of course what saturn doesnt hear he doesnt have to report... Smart of him... Well knowing charon i suspect he's got...

Its fine. If you want to elaborate in pm to avoid spoiling others go ahead. If not no worries.

Sight review. Alright candidily i havent played any of the switch mon games so expect some questions as we go i guess? So area zeros basically antartica except its stuck in sunny mode all year long and doesnt get a half year break. Fun. Turos clearly is a shade of workaholoc with slices of...

Hi blackjack figure i'd tackle another fic. Going adter the classic black white "what if" piece today. Inhave to wonder how "n" won here. Where coersion met charisma and seemingly got him out ahead... Also what happened to the losers of thier conflict... (And team plasmas mon honestly) but...

looking forward to it then... Will bring explosive friendly gear then.

This is an interesting piece. Tackling volos maddness and canon shift from the perspectice of one of his few friends. Poor akari.. Between this mad adventure and its attendent temporal displacment(assuming shes the pc), seeing one of her friends lose it, and be rejected in trying to save him...

I'm a little surprised how long it took to set up Veronica's find and incorperate it into a showing. Granted, them setting it up to corrispond with a sporting event (the league?) Gaurentees more traffic. so its smart... Laughs. I get jir's kneejerk disdain havong been the nerdy kid at a jock...

Review reply (appologies this is going to be done on cell phone so expect a slew of typos) No worries on how long it took. Lifes been exciting a lot on my end so i definitly get not being able to be prompt on anything... Thanks for going a bit deeper in then most of my readers. Well i am...

I have to admit last few blitzs i lost a lot of review time due to said timing of the events. So i can definitly second the time crunch complaint.

May i have a fearow please?