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Got through chapters 3-5 on Of Sand and Shadows!

Hi hi hi Yellow! Back for more reviewing! I'm aiming to get entirely caught up with this fic this week so I chunked through a lot today! BOY there was a lot packed into these chapters. I know in your review exchange post you said you were mostly just looking for grammatical and technical...

I’m jumping in! I’d like my theme to center around friendship hijinks.

Hey hey Yodakage, here for Catnip! I read chapter 1 to start! So this is actually the first time I've read a sort of Pokemon Isekai story, and I was pretty surprised by what I got here. I was expecting a sort of human in a Pokemon-Human world being transferred to a sort of PMD world where...

Ohhhhhh yes! I vibe with this!

Sooooo idk how “quick and easy” this would be, but I had a wild and ridiculous idea for a fanfic crossover one-shot contest? Where authors could team up and write a short one-shot of their fics/characters mashed together 👀 Granted, again, that’s probably not something that could/would be quick...

HEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WILDBOOTS, BACK FOR MORE REVIEWING! Got two chapters out of the way, and wow, just as I thought, everything went to shit very fast! Chapter 3 was an absolute wild ride, and I loved it a lot. Chaotic scenes like that are my lifeblood. Enjoy some line-by-lines! I'll be back!

White Swan, Black Swan is more or less a title that’s meant to “make fun” of the fact the main character’s name is Odette. I have “make fun” in quotes because there is quite a little bit of stupid ironic name/theme play happening too that I personally find like 25% clever 😂 But in the end it is...

Hey SGM! Thank you so much for your kind and honest review! A lot of what you said both made me really happy, and really made me think! I ended up rewriting chapter 1 and parts of chapter 2 after reading this review, because you really lit a fire under my butt. Once again, thank you! Not gonna...

Hi Canis!! I've been caught up for a while but finally had the time to get my review in! Boy what a fucking doozy. I have a ton of questions that I know/hope will be answered at some point, but I am still wildly asking them. What's gonna happen now that Red put on the mask? What was that...

This really depends on the mood/scene I'm writing. For more intense scenes, I'm listening to Hiroyuki Sawano anime tracks, chugging Evanescence guitars, and grungy Three Days Grace rifts. Softer angst scenes have me more toward gothic country songs and softer acoustic guitar and piano tunes...

LOL missed some because I'm dumb!!!

Oh boy, late as FUCK review responses!!! Here we go!!

Chapter 3: A Bad, Bad Run-In Special thanks to @kintsugi for beta reading this for me! Odette’s forehead hovered centimeters over the floor as she pointed her toes. She exhaled deeply, feeling the effects of her straddle wash over her. The knot in her lower back began to loosen, and her glutes...

She took into account how shaken Dusk looked, and decided to keep things simple for it. She didn't want to be responsible for any added stress. "What's your favorite hobby?" Uh oh. Had she struck a nerve? "Like...humans...and Pokemon? They work together? And...get stronger while doing that?"...

Huh. A better response than she was expecting. Though, Meggie commenting on how she barely remembered being a human before...that threw her for a loop. She had to keep reminding herself that worlds had literally collided here—some of these mon weren’t humans to begin with, some were, and some...

Hey Umbra! Here for catnip! I don't know how to budget my time so I only had the chance to read chapter one. I know you mentioned what you wanted feedback on, so I'm going to do my best to mainly focus on those things. However, the critiques I have go hand-in-hand with one another. So, I...

Oh. That was reasonably tame. She knew most truth or dare games usually really got down to the nitty gritty, but that was...somewhat easy to put an answer together for. She could keep it simple, not reveal too much... She sucked her teeth. Thoughtfully. “Mm, well...monotonous.” She scratched...

She sighed in relief. She felt like she’d lost brain cells from having to comb through the two languages in her head, trying to think of adequate responses to everyone. All it did was make her tired. And she was already in exhausted from watching Brian do his strip tease. “Thanks gods,” she...

“I dare you...to give somebody a strip tease.” She paused, hunting for the right word. “Please.”