Recent content by tomatorade

Curious. Veeery curious. Read the prologue and the first two chapters for this. It reminds me of some more oldschool fanfic I remember from back in the day. Mostly for the poke-POV in the human world thing, which doesn't seem as popular now as it used to be. idk. Prologue If I have one...

Back yet again, I'm such a hassle. I've read a bit past 19 but this review will be for 17-19. Structural Notes My perception of a lot of the story before this is that it's very stop/start in its structure. Regardless of my complaints on tone or content or execution, the core idea of how this...

Uh oh I'm back again. I did a little skimming to patch up some old memories but I like to think I have the mind of a fortress so hopefully that shouldn't hinder anything. I read chapters 14-16 for this one. Lizard POV And so we get a generous helping of Dalton lore. I can't tell whether it's...

Good morrow, I've received your summons for catnip. I'm reviewing Typecast, as requested. Finally, a fic where I can leverage my terrible french and say I understand that reference. I've read some old fables of the loup-garou and they're all very funny because unlike other werewolves, they're...

Chapter Seventeen, Part Two Roll Called “I’d like to talk to you,” King said. Unbelievable. Isaac and King had formed something of a relationship over the shockingly little time they’d known each other but it still wasn’t like the bisharp to ever ask to do anything. And in the middle of the...

Chapter Seventeen, Part One Roll Call Hilda hadn’t caught darkrai. That’s all that really mattered. She stood across the desk from Kloe. Kloe, who looked up at her with big, watery, squinting eyes and waited until she asked. “Did you— what? Did you catch it?,” Kloe asked. She looked worse now...

Chapter Sixteen Interrogations Well. Hiudix did not know what to expect from Soleiro’s dungeon joint, but that was certainly something. He looked back. Back to the cave mouth he just exited. A faint sting lingered on his back and he shook his head mournfully for the handful of broken quills he...

What if I reviewed something of yours that was old? Haha, unless... Anyway, I did want to review this because it's been particularly relevant for me. I've never been a fan of N but I still like seeing how people tackle him and Hilda's whole deal. Especially when the games keep her mute so every...

veeeeeeery interesting. This feels like something I'd see as an example in a short story class or something. It hooked me pretty immediately. Within three paragraphs we get to the premise and the ball starts rolling. And while I could see potential arcs, the final 'reveal', if you could call it...

Kyeugh distracting me by duckposting, for shame. Unga Bunga duckies make fire. This was very cute :3 A perfect little taste of duck life. I like the style of it especially, I can imagine this being a scene in a play or something. Which is reflected mostly in the way Kikori talks and acts--he's...

Here for blitz/catnip. Serif fonts are based. I do remember reading part of one of these a while back, though I don't know if it was the OG or rewrite so this will be a refresher for me. Read the prologue and first two chapters. Prologue Well, I don't remember the prologue so perhaps it...

heyo! here for catnip/blitz/live/laugh/love. rambling on to the end of time. Only did the prologue and first chapter because am still sleepy :[ but I enjoyed this enough that I hope to return sometime this week. Also for those juicy, juicy points of course. Prologue Horny? In this christian...

Blitzomania I don't know if I've read a mewtwo origin story from mew's perspective before. Despite that plot being a strong focus for fanfic in general. In any case, I do think it was a worthwhile perspective to tell the story in. Mew is the strong point of the story. Which is good because...

Still on the Christmas high for blitz, so I thought I'd stop by something short. Ah, Morphic. I'm going to cast my aging beam by telling you this was a gateway fic for me in high school. Unfortunately, this also means that I don't remember a lot of it. I do remember the general happenings, plus...

Chapter Sixteen Musical Cliques Aeimlou may even be overwhelmed. A hard feeling to wrap his head around, but after having the back of the human nest opened for them and being ushered inside, and many minutes of sitting between outspoken emotions, and listening to words that travelled too fast...