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Nori waved to the two people standing in front of the doors into the Kannagi Shrine. Maiden Kaede gave a friendly wave back. Acolyte Jirou crossed his arms and harrumphed. “Hey, I’m here to see Prema,” he said. “She’s right in the back waiting,” Kaede told him, pointing over her shoulder with...

A murky darkness had descended upon the land. It swallowed sound as well as sight. A feeling of enormous pressure enveloped him as he looked upon what towered in front. The torii stood more imposing than ever before. In a way, it was that which separated the outside from the world of the gods...

The night after the battle, Nori had the best night’s sleep he had since early July. He thought he might have a nightmare about the pool, but it simply didn’t happen. Saturday was a day for relaxing. For Nori, that meant going out for a walk around town, just like old times. Everywhere he went...

The battle had concluded in a way that had satisfied very few people. Chad and his teammates were, for the most part, left unsure of what to make of what transpired. The sole exception was the one who had been the most invested in this battle. Emi left without a saying word. It was the first...

Being inside of her orb was comforting. Even though the sea around her was artificial, it still felt like she was damp. No, it’s better to say she could only be calm while being in her orb these days. Almost every moment outside of it was one she lived in fear of what that Nori person or his...

@StolenMadWolf Okay, let's get around to replying to this. Well, you're going to get the chance to look at the enhanced version coming soonish (I'm one chapter away from having it fully drafted, though dunno when I'll start posting) and contrast it with this one! - So a bit of a spoiler on the...

Nori marched through a beautiful snowy field that had a single tree standing tall in the middle of it. He was dressed for the weather: thick gray jacket, black boots, and his least-ripped pair of blue jeans. The harsh air prickled his exposed hands and face, but it was nothing that anyone native...

@StolenMadWolf Should probably get to replying here. :P Sorry if my thoughts are scattered, I was trying to push through before work toight. Well, a fair warning on Official In-Training: it's a longfic. Like, 340k words. I was still finding my groove there (found it partway) and it suffered...

Prema knocked on the door to her father’s office. In spite of, or maybe because of the situation, she wore a faint smile. It was finally time. This would not be the first time they would be observing a battle that involved Nori together. The first was his initial test with the Demon Nidorina...

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Want something lower key today for blitzing purposes. I guess I'll jump back into this one out of all the ones the fit the theme today. We'll just have to see if I can read and write enough for it, heh. 4 - If you did have an evolution that early into your journey, you're probably training a...

I really ought to continue reading more of this instead of working on my own stuff, motivated as I am. It's not going anywhere but the Blitz is. With that being the case, I think I will continue forward with reading this one. 4 - I do have to wonder what constitutes more tiring than usual. My...

Like I said above, always got to fire those shots first thing as a failsafe. ;) Except in the prologue to the rewrite of the first fic, but I sidestep it and fire them on the second. There are references to real world locations in this series, so hybrid world I guess. Maybe still the same world...

What I wanted to do today was blitz through the rest of this after going shopping and finally picking up my friend a belated Christmas present now that I know what game to get. But I woke up too late, so I guess I'm just going to skip to the first part and figure out what I can do after. 14 - I...