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Yeah the no physical bssically made me bail on switxh 2. This will derfinitly be a pass for me.

11 days... While we wait A incomplete list of fics i plan to review (My catagories) New blood ( goal: 3 new writers) https://forums.thousandroads.net/threads/a-blinding-reunion-oneshot.1985/ https://forums.thousandroads.net/threads/pok%C3%A9mon-flames-roses.1969/ Returning favorites...

Looks like we are nearing that magical tine of the year. Its blitz tine... well on 12/21 but same diff. So think of this as a public resource to post your todo lists, goals, plans, and aspirations for this years blitz! 17 days to go and counting!

(Its okay radiance.. i've converted a secrion of our abode to exercise/outdoor simukation and purloined a section of land labeled private fornout use. And for brownie points ive corrupted you fully into a gamer/introvert type... we will survive all those bug haters! Ruffles fluffy floofy...

I'm availabke to offer review rewards max of 6 this reay

chapter 5 complete! I see snarky narriator is still snarking... So did pika get close, or the tusseling mob boil over him and his freinds? as a glance is a quick look i'd rec dropping rapid. Feels redundant. ? The mob saw pika+co and charged? He thunderwaved all thier butts in one...

Chapter 4 i.p. chapter 4 review i.p. I wound up bolding my comments/suggestions because for some reason I cant get the spoiler box to divide up like normal. Your text is in mormal btw. And things deolve into a mad house... and there's only 2 chapers to calm the mad masses... this'll be...

chapter 3 review complete Sorry had to use my phone and cold weather murders my typing.. so youll have to bare w more typos than standard Well he's better at scavenging than pika, figures. Natiator and narrstion feels a bit squishy here. We are swapping from meowths pov, to anime esk...

Chapter 2 review Complete happy holiday! So clarity concern.. the same forest as the might' and zu's planned schenanigans or the same woods as in... jjm and ash and co are cohabiting in the forest as each other, hence why the rival mons are getting a bonding day? Laughs at first line. I...

I'll ease up on the analysis then, unless i see sonethibg confusing lije the mold section... or i spot another 30er, then i figure its fair game! I'll pop chapter 2 up when tine pernits.

Prologue complete Alright, so I shamelessly picked the shortest section to see if an old issue (sentence length) was still present. Before I start poking at the plot/setting/characters, let's see how a more modern work holds up to an old concern? (Alright, I'm halfway in... and it's a...

al in all it sounds interesting. I hope you wrestle your writers block down soon it ll be a fun read.

Out of curiosity was the vicinti's name either peppy or hare? (Keeps reading) nevermind, guess its mood swinger... If we are swinging the duel life bit... you could pull it as alexander being a maladaptive dreamer perhaos? Hes got this little world in his head that gets realer and realer...

It alsonties into the duality of the ninja thing. Between him hiding in plain sight, being support in his r.l. life in a way, ect.

Basically the take away is the human body sleeps (and is very vulnerable) and the spirit/mind takes becomes a wolf (well mon in this case) and does its own thing until the person wakes up.