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Hello new blood, i'm here for the blitz and to welcome you to the forum. Yesh not a fun way to greet the dawn. Between the term room and wal of trees i'm guessing this is a mystery dungeon? Yeah. Red flag for Vaporeon advertizing thier murderous impulses and a red flag for "them" still...

Hi, tango reced your story so here we are. Happy blitz Gotta admit Serena's gof a point. The video sounds as non-sensial as those old animal crossing "come to our island" blurbs they had back in the day... The youtuber is going to be stoked.. until they realize it was one viewer and then...

Hi, welcome aboard to the forums. I'm here for blitzing, lets see how this entry goes! Arceus nervous, never that. I guess being a god-mon his heart can go a little bit faster than nervy teen waiting on thier prom date... but only a little bit. Snorts. Dia and Palk sound like avoident...

Hi Arbee, figured i'd catch you during blitz. Snagging you as a new face week, hope you dont mind. Huh so our p.o.v, cind' is a trainers partner. Interesting. Wonder whats behind the alarm/volume of thir wake up? Well cind' is quite enthusiastic. Perhaps holding the early bird trait...

Author's note/Salutation: Welcome to the edited version of my Villiantine's prompts. As it says on the tin, there be editing... as well as some dividing. My frantic note storage made the O.G version a nightmare to read, so I'm splicing them up into standalone pieces and re-releasing so anyone...

Yeah the no physical bssically made me bail on switxh 2. This will derfinitly be a pass for me.

11 days... While we wait A incomplete list of fics i plan to review (My catagories) New blood ( goal: 3 new writers) https://forums.thousandroads.net/threads/a-blinding-reunion-oneshot.1985/ https://forums.thousandroads.net/threads/pok%C3%A9mon-flames-roses.1969/ Returning favorites...

Looks like we are nearing that magical tine of the year. Its blitz tine... well on 12/21 but same diff. So think of this as a public resource to post your todo lists, goals, plans, and aspirations for this years blitz! 17 days to go and counting!

(Its okay radiance.. i've converted a secrion of our abode to exercise/outdoor simukation and purloined a section of land labeled private fornout use. And for brownie points ive corrupted you fully into a gamer/introvert type... we will survive all those bug haters! Ruffles fluffy floofy...

I'm availabke to offer review rewards max of 6 this reay

chapter 5 complete! I see snarky narriator is still snarking... So did pika get close, or the tusseling mob boil over him and his freinds? as a glance is a quick look i'd rec dropping rapid. Feels redundant. ? The mob saw pika+co and charged? He thunderwaved all thier butts in one...

Chapter 4 i.p. chapter 4 review i.p. I wound up bolding my comments/suggestions because for some reason I cant get the spoiler box to divide up like normal. Your text is in mormal btw. And things deolve into a mad house... and there's only 2 chapers to calm the mad masses... this'll be...

chapter 3 review complete Sorry had to use my phone and cold weather murders my typing.. so youll have to bare w more typos than standard Well he's better at scavenging than pika, figures. Natiator and narrstion feels a bit squishy here. We are swapping from meowths pov, to anime esk...

Chapter 2 review Complete happy holiday! So clarity concern.. the same forest as the might' and zu's planned schenanigans or the same woods as in... jjm and ash and co are cohabiting in the forest as each other, hence why the rival mons are getting a bonding day? Laughs at first line. I...

I'll ease up on the analysis then, unless i see sonethibg confusing lije the mold section... or i spot another 30er, then i figure its fair game! I'll pop chapter 2 up when tine pernits.

Prologue complete Alright, so I shamelessly picked the shortest section to see if an old issue (sentence length) was still present. Before I start poking at the plot/setting/characters, let's see how a more modern work holds up to an old concern? (Alright, I'm halfway in... and it's a...

al in all it sounds interesting. I hope you wrestle your writers block down soon it ll be a fun read.

Out of curiosity was the vicinti's name either peppy or hare? (Keeps reading) nevermind, guess its mood swinger... If we are swinging the duel life bit... you could pull it as alexander being a maladaptive dreamer perhaos? Hes got this little world in his head that gets realer and realer...

It alsonties into the duality of the ninja thing. Between him hiding in plain sight, being support in his r.l. life in a way, ect.

Basically the take away is the human body sleeps (and is very vulnerable) and the spirit/mind takes becomes a wolf (well mon in this case) and does its own thing until the person wakes up.