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    Pokémon Once a Thief

    Actually, I would argue that trying to go for this many epithets is already not good for the prose. I would much rather read a name and the Pokemon species over and over than have a character referred to by their type when their type has no relevance to the current conversation. For all of my...
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    Pokémon Once a Thief

    Hey, here for Catnip, and sorry for the lateness. Figured I'd continue with this story since I'd looked at it before in a previous round. Quote Comments Typo. It feels like you're using "bemused" to mean "amused" here, but that's a common mistake. "Bemused" means "puzzled, confused, or...
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    Pokémon Once a Thief

    Hey there, chose this story for Catnip. Read the prologue, and here are my thoughts. Something that becomes clear very quickly is that there is a lot of worldbuilding for this setting. While that is laudable, it does come on a bit too strong in a lot of places when the story seems to pause for...
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