Travant
Bug Catcher
- Pronouns
- He/him
Claus Haller and Barry Goodman are excited to start their gym challenge and befriend Pokemon partners. They don't know that Sinnoh is a massive chessboard, where the main players on both sides have started to execute meticulously planned gambits with deadly consequences everywhere.
But even a mere pawn can become a queen.
Hello and welcome to Prisoner's Dance!
This is a Pokemon fanfiction forum, y'all know the drill. I don't own Pokemon. If I did, then Galvantula, Araquanid, and Ariados would have eight legs each. I only own my own ideas and original characters.
A BIG thank you to slamdunkrai for reading and giving me advice on my work. A great person and friend, and this story would definitely be worse without the help. Check out their stuff as well!
(This intro was pretty much raw copy/pasted from Ao3, but this is TR. You guys know Jeff, lol.)
A note before you get into the fic: The setting of Prisoner's Dance is Sinnoh, and it's inspired by the games, of course. However, I've added a ton of worldbuilding, and will gleefully add to and/or disregard canon where it does not fit my purposes, so there's that.
Note that constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome if you are willing to offer it! (As long as you're not, like, needlessly rude.) Thank you!
Without further ado, here is the prologue.
ROUTE 206, 13:04
Appearances could be deceiving.
So thought a young man as he stood before Wayward Cave. The cave looked outwardly friendly, the shade of the Cycling Road above a welcome respite from the blistering heat. And sure enough, Wayward Cave was a popular destination for the more adventurous residents of Sinnoh. It was common to see spelunkers and their Pokemon inside, nestled into one of the cave’s many winding paths with the flickering light of a flame lantern casting a friendly glow over their campsites.
Despite all this, the man standing at the entrance was nervous. He recalled the vision that he had received about a day ago...
A cave, shrouded in murky gloom. An inhuman shriek, like the tearing of metal, from within the innermost recesses of the cave. A flash of a sickly green light, and then a dull, heavy thud.
It had been short, disjointed, and utterly mystifying. But he’d recognized the setting, and he had figured that it would be worth his time to assuage his fears, even if nothing came of it. On the other hand, if he did find something there that was dangerous, he could alert others to it, and they could take action.
And, hell. This was Wayward Cave. He wasn’t about to turn down an adventure, and he could use the practice before his gym challenge. The man’s face flashed with a youthful, excited grin as he stepped closer to the cave, his misgivings tempered by the promise of excitement.
Before proceeding any further, the young man bent to pick up a rock from the floor, about the size of his fist. His face relaxed as he concentrated, focusing on the feeling of complete and utter tranquility. Something clicked, and he smiled. The rock outwardly appeared the same as before, but now it was charged with an emotion: the same tranquility that he had focused on. The man left the stone on the floor and stepped away from it into the cave, satisfied that he would be able to find his way back if his sense of direction failed him within the cave. It was but a matter of reaching out with his mind, and he’d know the way back to the rock in no time.
He smirked. Psychics thought they were so superior, with their flashy telekinesis and whatnot, but the fey had tricks up their sleeves, too.
He had not taken three steps into the cave before he was halted by a rush of sensation. It wasn’t a sound or a smell or any other of the five basic senses. He closed off his empathy, the location of the rock he had marked now hidden from him, but he could still sense whatever this was. It was a presence, lurking in the cave, and it thrummed with power.
Cautiously, he took a step towards the source of the power, whatever it was. The sensations did not stop, but they didn’t intensify either, so he gritted his teeth and persevered onwards. He wondered if everyone currently in the cave had experienced this same feeling, whatever it was.
His question was answered soon enough when he encountered a trainer past a turn in the cave, setting up camp with her Vanillish floating silently nearby. She seemed completely at ease, which meant that either she was good at hiding her distress or that she didn’t feel whatever this was. The young man passed the trainer with little more than a nod of acknowledgement. He had Pokemon of his own, but they probably weren’t yet strong enough to take on an experienced trainer with an evolved Pokemon, and he didn’t want to battle right now anyways.
The young man continued to wander. It could have been mistaken for purely random exploration, but the source of the power, whatever it was, directed the man’s steps closer to it, bringing him deeper and deeper into the belly of the cave. The mysterious presence grew stronger as the man approached, but the longer he walked in search of it, the less he was bothered by the feeling.
It suddenly occurred to the man that the lack of encounters with wild Pokemon was odd. There was not even the stirring of a Zubat or a Geodude in the cave for the whole time he had walked, let alone a more hostile or dangerous encounter. The adventure that he had come expecting seemed to be completely absent.
The instant he thought this, he turned a corner and was confronted by two pairs of large, unblinking white eyes. Startled, the man backed up, his hand immediately going to his belt where his Pokeballs were stored.
Then the eyes moved, and the tension he felt relaxed somewhat. The light of the man’s lantern revealed the owners of the eyes to be nothing more than a group of four Unown, floating in midair at around chest level. Upon closer inspection, it became clear that the Unown were all the same shape. The half-lidded eyes and curved protrusion made them look like a question mark.
The man stepped back slightly. The source of the power must have been extremely close, because the feeling was stronger than ever here. But the only Pokemon he’d seen was the Unown, and Unown weren’t known for being extremely powerful.
But then, the darkness around him twisted, and he stumbled and nearly fell. When he looked up, he saw that he was in a massive chamber that looked eerily similar to the location he was in before, except that it was illuminated by a dim green light that seemed to come from the roof of the cavern.
With a start, the man remembered the vision that had brought him here. The green light had made an appearance there, too, but the other things--
As if someone had read his thoughts, there was a sound like the shriek of tearing metal, and something fell from the ceiling with a dull thud. The young man’s heartbeat picked up. Was this some trainer’s idea of a funny prank, or something? It was certainly doable. A practiced Psychic could have easily created a vision like that one, not to mention many Pokemon. He scanned the cavern as he thought and found no exits.
The thing that had fallen from the ceiling was easier to see now that the dust had settled somewhat. It was big, probably about ten feet high, and roughly spherical. But it seemed to be melting, shrinking down into a different shape…
The young man’s breath caught in his throat as the shape became more recognizable. As he fell to his knees, he couldn’t help but wonder if such an elaborate setup was needed for this, somewhere within the other tumultuous emotions whirling within him.
The shape had separated into six separate parts now, one large one and five smaller ones. The smaller ones took the shape of a canine Pokemon, green and black, about as high as his shoulder. The canines took positions around the larger mass, like some sort of bodyguards, and bared their teeth in perfect sync as the larger shape-- the mass of cells, the young man realized belatedly-- coalesced into a serpentine body, with the same green and black colors as the canines. Five large frills unfurled above its head as its massive body coiled up. The serpent’s geometric eyes seemed to bore a hole right through the young man as it hissed its words at him.
Welcome, Enforcer.
Appearances could be deceiving.
So thought a young man as he stood before Wayward Cave. The cave looked outwardly friendly, the shade of the Cycling Road above a welcome respite from the blistering heat. And sure enough, Wayward Cave was a popular destination for the more adventurous residents of Sinnoh. It was common to see spelunkers and their Pokemon inside, nestled into one of the cave’s many winding paths with the flickering light of a flame lantern casting a friendly glow over their campsites.
Despite all this, the man standing at the entrance was nervous. He recalled the vision that he had received about a day ago...
A cave, shrouded in murky gloom. An inhuman shriek, like the tearing of metal, from within the innermost recesses of the cave. A flash of a sickly green light, and then a dull, heavy thud.
It had been short, disjointed, and utterly mystifying. But he’d recognized the setting, and he had figured that it would be worth his time to assuage his fears, even if nothing came of it. On the other hand, if he did find something there that was dangerous, he could alert others to it, and they could take action.
And, hell. This was Wayward Cave. He wasn’t about to turn down an adventure, and he could use the practice before his gym challenge. The man’s face flashed with a youthful, excited grin as he stepped closer to the cave, his misgivings tempered by the promise of excitement.
Before proceeding any further, the young man bent to pick up a rock from the floor, about the size of his fist. His face relaxed as he concentrated, focusing on the feeling of complete and utter tranquility. Something clicked, and he smiled. The rock outwardly appeared the same as before, but now it was charged with an emotion: the same tranquility that he had focused on. The man left the stone on the floor and stepped away from it into the cave, satisfied that he would be able to find his way back if his sense of direction failed him within the cave. It was but a matter of reaching out with his mind, and he’d know the way back to the rock in no time.
He smirked. Psychics thought they were so superior, with their flashy telekinesis and whatnot, but the fey had tricks up their sleeves, too.
He had not taken three steps into the cave before he was halted by a rush of sensation. It wasn’t a sound or a smell or any other of the five basic senses. He closed off his empathy, the location of the rock he had marked now hidden from him, but he could still sense whatever this was. It was a presence, lurking in the cave, and it thrummed with power.
Cautiously, he took a step towards the source of the power, whatever it was. The sensations did not stop, but they didn’t intensify either, so he gritted his teeth and persevered onwards. He wondered if everyone currently in the cave had experienced this same feeling, whatever it was.
His question was answered soon enough when he encountered a trainer past a turn in the cave, setting up camp with her Vanillish floating silently nearby. She seemed completely at ease, which meant that either she was good at hiding her distress or that she didn’t feel whatever this was. The young man passed the trainer with little more than a nod of acknowledgement. He had Pokemon of his own, but they probably weren’t yet strong enough to take on an experienced trainer with an evolved Pokemon, and he didn’t want to battle right now anyways.
The young man continued to wander. It could have been mistaken for purely random exploration, but the source of the power, whatever it was, directed the man’s steps closer to it, bringing him deeper and deeper into the belly of the cave. The mysterious presence grew stronger as the man approached, but the longer he walked in search of it, the less he was bothered by the feeling.
It suddenly occurred to the man that the lack of encounters with wild Pokemon was odd. There was not even the stirring of a Zubat or a Geodude in the cave for the whole time he had walked, let alone a more hostile or dangerous encounter. The adventure that he had come expecting seemed to be completely absent.
The instant he thought this, he turned a corner and was confronted by two pairs of large, unblinking white eyes. Startled, the man backed up, his hand immediately going to his belt where his Pokeballs were stored.
Then the eyes moved, and the tension he felt relaxed somewhat. The light of the man’s lantern revealed the owners of the eyes to be nothing more than a group of four Unown, floating in midair at around chest level. Upon closer inspection, it became clear that the Unown were all the same shape. The half-lidded eyes and curved protrusion made them look like a question mark.
The man stepped back slightly. The source of the power must have been extremely close, because the feeling was stronger than ever here. But the only Pokemon he’d seen was the Unown, and Unown weren’t known for being extremely powerful.
But then, the darkness around him twisted, and he stumbled and nearly fell. When he looked up, he saw that he was in a massive chamber that looked eerily similar to the location he was in before, except that it was illuminated by a dim green light that seemed to come from the roof of the cavern.
With a start, the man remembered the vision that had brought him here. The green light had made an appearance there, too, but the other things--
As if someone had read his thoughts, there was a sound like the shriek of tearing metal, and something fell from the ceiling with a dull thud. The young man’s heartbeat picked up. Was this some trainer’s idea of a funny prank, or something? It was certainly doable. A practiced Psychic could have easily created a vision like that one, not to mention many Pokemon. He scanned the cavern as he thought and found no exits.
The thing that had fallen from the ceiling was easier to see now that the dust had settled somewhat. It was big, probably about ten feet high, and roughly spherical. But it seemed to be melting, shrinking down into a different shape…
The young man’s breath caught in his throat as the shape became more recognizable. As he fell to his knees, he couldn’t help but wonder if such an elaborate setup was needed for this, somewhere within the other tumultuous emotions whirling within him.
The shape had separated into six separate parts now, one large one and five smaller ones. The smaller ones took the shape of a canine Pokemon, green and black, about as high as his shoulder. The canines took positions around the larger mass, like some sort of bodyguards, and bared their teeth in perfect sync as the larger shape-- the mass of cells, the young man realized belatedly-- coalesced into a serpentine body, with the same green and black colors as the canines. Five large frills unfurled above its head as its massive body coiled up. The serpent’s geometric eyes seemed to bore a hole right through the young man as it hissed its words at him.
Welcome, Enforcer.
Who could this mysterious young man be? Hmm...
The young man having a fey affinity (fairy) is our first glimpse at affinities. The people in the Pokemon world get access to the power of a certain Pokemon type, which is unlocked at around the age of 16-17 (just before the gym challenge, for most people). This is because I have a very hard time believing that humans were able to make it to where they are currently in a world where there are magical wild animals with psychic powers competing with you. More about these affinities will be revealed later in the story, but for now, you can have this glimpse of it.
Didn't expect Zygarde in a Sinnoh fic did ya? ha ha got ur nose
Note that Zygarde splits into five 10% formes and one 50% forme. That's a total of 100% and it made me feel way more clever than it should've
Finally, we can call the "young man" an Enforcer, instead of "the young man!"
The young man having a fey affinity (fairy) is our first glimpse at affinities. The people in the Pokemon world get access to the power of a certain Pokemon type, which is unlocked at around the age of 16-17 (just before the gym challenge, for most people). This is because I have a very hard time believing that humans were able to make it to where they are currently in a world where there are magical wild animals with psychic powers competing with you. More about these affinities will be revealed later in the story, but for now, you can have this glimpse of it.
Didn't expect Zygarde in a Sinnoh fic did ya? ha ha got ur nose
Note that Zygarde splits into five 10% formes and one 50% forme. That's a total of 100% and it made me feel way more clever than it should've
Finally, we can call the "young man" an Enforcer, instead of "the young man!"
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