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Pokémon Gakutensoku--Safe Passage

Blackjack Gabbiani

Merely a collector
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/I want...to go back. You can help me with that, can't you?/

/I want to see him again. To tell him what I couldn't say before. Please, grant me that!/

/I know that I cannot return here. That does not matter to me. This era holds nothing else for me. Please.../

/...Thank you...Beyond anything, thank you!/



The crystalline glow faded, and the cavern was left silent. Only a whispered "thank you" to disrupt it, and it was inaudible to any but its speaker.










"Arven, please meet me at the lighthouse. A friend." The young man read the message again, still as clueless as ever as to who could have sent it. He laughed and patted the Mabosstiff at his side as they walked up the hill from Los Platos. "Do you know who this is? Haha, maybe it's Penny trying to be clandestine again."

The dog barked as if agreeing with Arven, smelling the air a moment later but coming up with no solutions.

"Though if it's at the lighthouse, it's gotta be someone trying to get information about dad..." Arven's step slowed a bit. "...I'll just tell 'em to get bent, right?" he added with a smile. "Yeah, and if they push, you'll just growl at 'em. That should be more than enough to scare off any nosy reporters or whatever."

With the lighthouse in view, Arven looked around for anyone, but nothing stood out. A few Hoppip drifted by. A Lechonk snuffled around the side of the building. The tree next to the door bore a few Tarountula. Everything seemed typical. Maybe the person wasn't there yet.

"Hello?" he called out, gripping Garganacl's ball just in case.

His phone beeped, the Rotom inside it bringing it up to eye level. /Arven,/ a new message read, /I am glad you came. I have wanted to speak with you for a very long time. You are free to dismiss me after this, but I ask only that you hear me out for a few minutes./

His grip tightened, and he gestured for Mabosstiff to remain on guard. "Where are you? What do you want?"

"I..." It was nearly inaudible, but it came from the southern side of the building, overlooking the cliff. "Arven. I am glad you came. I have wanted to speak with you for a very long time."

The voice was familiar, but nothing he could put his finger on just yet. It was so stiff, so deliberate, only repeating what the message had said, and made him think more of a machine.

"I am...aware that my appearance will upset you. That is why I am not approaching you just yet."

"Why wou--" The voice had finally said something new, but it was so oddly familiar, like a voice from an old answering machine. And that was all he needed. The unnatural manner, the low, smooth voice, imitating a long-gone man. Arven felt his knees buckle, and he reached out for Mabosstiff to steady himself. "It's not..."

"I must know that you will be all right with seeing my face before I emerge." Everything was so familiar, yet through a filter of the utterly unnatural. His father's voice, that machine that had taken on his guise...

Arven stammered, and fully fell to his knees. Mabosstiff nuzzled against him, prioritizing his safety above confronting the stranger. But Arven knew exactly who waited for him around the corner. "You're gone...you went through the machine! You're gone!" A dizziness spun around in his head, as if he was stuck on a wild roller coaster though he sat in place.

A hand clutched the corner of the building, just a bit tightly. "Arven. After this, after we speak here today, you are free to dismiss me. I will leave and never bother you again if you wish it. But I beg you, please let me speak to you now."

The young man sighed deeply, as much to center himself as to take his time and think. That thing, that damn machine that his egomaniac father had made in his image, that had tricked them into believing that Professor Turo was still...

With a glance up, he saw the hand hadn't moved, but still displayed tension in the gesture.

"...Yeah, sure. Just don't make me look at you."

The hand relaxed, and a moment later, the AI peeked around the corner with a gentle smile across the familiar features. "Arven..."

Arven was working his way to a standing position, the weakness in his knees still present, and at the sight of the AI he turned his head away sharply. Even the brief glimpse he had caught was more than enough.

And yet, there was a sudden grasp around his arm. The AI was pulling him to his feet with a firm but gentle touch.

"Get away from me," Arven murmured, aware that it would come out angrier than he actually was. "I'm fine on my own. I don't need..."

The AI took a step back, and Arven could see out of the corner of his eye that the robot had assumed a neutral posture.

Fully on his feet, the young man dusted himself off. "Has anyone else seen you?"

"That is impossible for me to tell. From Zero Gate to here, it is very likely that I was observed in some manner." The voice was still distinctly Turo's, but the delivery was stiff enough that Arven was able to maintain a mental distance. "You must have many questions. I believe we should go inside to talk."

"Yeah, sure, before someone sees you." Still averting his gaze, this time staring at the ground, Arven headed to the door. "Oh it's..."

"I unlocked it earlier, before I realized that it would be best to wait for you outside."

Of course his father's exact double would know the damn pass code. Of course he would. Arven pushed the heavy door open, pushing it full and hoping the AI would follow so he wouldn't have to hold it open.

The AI did follow, but paused in the entryway, looking around with a slow, stuttered turn of his head. "...It looks just as I remember it."

"You've never been here before," Arven reminded him. "For that matter, Juliana said that you couldn't leave. Uh..." He faltered for a moment, trying to remember what his friend had said. "I don't remember if it was the lab or Area Zero, but you couldn't leave the area because of the tera crystals."

"You wish to ask how I have returned, then? It ties in with how I am able to explore Paldea freely." The AI stepped into the main room, down the single step that divided the lab from the kitchen area, and continued to look around. Even a glance at the back of his head told Arven that the AI was likely smiling.

"Uh, sure. But first I'm going to ask you to wait here. You can take a seat if you want."

"Of course. I do not wish for you to be uncomfortable."

"Gotcha..." Arven murmured before heading off to the back hallway, pushing one of the bookshelves slightly out of the way to access it. He returned a minute later with a dusty old pillowcase, from a bedroom that hadn't been slept in in years. Eyes focused on the floor, he held it out. "Put this over your head."

The AI accepted it, running the fabric over his fingers for a moment before doing as instructed. "Is this sufficient?"

Arven looked up, taking in everything before him. The AI had decided to sit in the chair before the massive computer, the one where Turo had spent most of his time. Working, eating, sleeping there.

It was a good thing the lab coat was gone, but that weird body suit was still present. Such a distinctive garment that Arven couldn't imagine anyone else in it, so he still looked away. Plus, even though the pillowcase, he could see the AI's eyes for a moment. Sure, his father's eyes hadn't been blue, and they hadn't *glowed*, but a marked difference wasn't a comfort in this case.

"Yeah sure," Arven rushed as he flopped down on the couch. Mabosstiff climbed up beside him and rested his head in the young man's lap, and Arven in turn threaded his hand in the thick fur. "So you're...you're back, you're here outside the crater...just tell me all in one go."

The AI sat back as if he was taking a deep breath, though Arven doubted he was capable of such a thing. "...All right. I will begin from the beginning."

"No just...just give me the highlights."

"Oh..." The pillowcase tilted forward in a show of disappointment. "All right. Although I ask that you do not repeat what I speak of to you."

"Anything around Area Zero, I've kept to myself." Arven's hand knotted up in Mabosstiff's fur. "It's uh...it's not even public knowledge that dad's...gone. That's part of the reason I didn't want anyone to see you." He realized he was still breathing a bit heavier than usual, as if he was carrying something heavy, and tried to slow things down.

"All right. First, have you heard of a being known as Terapagos?"

Arven knew about it, all right. The weird glowing turtle that Juliana had taken with them to Kitakami. The younger trainer had been insistent on dragging Arven to the top of Oni Mountain, to a pond that smelled like rotten eggs, claiming that Terapagos was going to show him something amazing. Even after an hour, they had continued to prod the turtle with their foot, offering bribes and trying desperately to get it to do something very specific that they never elaborated on. By the time Arven told them to pack it in, Juliana had been on the verge of tears. "But it did it before..." they had insisted with a sniffle.

He never did figure out what his friend was talking about.

So he wouldn't mention any of that. "Yeah, it's a tiny turtle thing. Got something to do with terastalization."

The bag moved up and down with the AI's nods. "In this era, I believe there would be only one present in Area Zero, and it would be very young. In the future, however..." He shifted slightly and rested his hands on his legs. "More have navigated to that place, and their power is stronger. Even at this point in time, the tera energy in the depths of Area Zero is enough that prolonged exposure may rid a tera orb of the need to be recharged. I was not certain that it would work, but I suspected that it would do the same for me. It..." He shifted again, hands moving to the chair armrests.

Arven hadn't known that a robot could be *nervous*.

"...it granted me untold freedom. I was able to leave for the first time, able to truly be the free adventurer I desired to be..." His voice, though still as stilted as ever, was suddenly choked up.

Arven hadn't known that a robot could be *emotional*.

"I have been able to live my dream, *my* dream, and not that of my creator...for over three hundred years..." The AI paused, but Arven gave no reaction. "And after all that time, after existing for so long in a bold world as a free being," His voice wavered a bit more at that, and he brought a hand to his forehead, a familiar gesture to Arven. "I realized something. I was...lonely."

The young man drew back a breath. The robot's tone, his posturing, the fact that he was sitting in *that* chair, and then saying things like that. Even without seeing his face, or maybe amplified by that fact, Arven had the creeping sensation of a ghost before him, some lingering spirit of a man over three years dead. "T-take that thing off," he blurted out. "This is ridiculous."

"Oh? Very well." Though the AI's hand hesitated at first, he pulled away the pillowcase and set it aside. The dim room, lit only by the computer monitors, obscured his face, but even that was a familiar enough sight to Arven, who jolted uncomfortably before looking away. "Do you wish for me to continue?"

"...Yeah." Mabosstiff was pressed against Arven's chest, grounding and distracting him. "Yeah, go ahead."

The AI paused for a few seconds before speaking again. "As I am not an organic creature, I do not require company for my well-being. It would, theoretically, be possible for me to exist without others and continue to run at full capacity, with no ill effects to my functionality. However," he shook his head, a gesture Arven saw from the corner of his eye and turned a little further away to avoid, "I was unhappy. I was free, but solitude had taken its toll."

"I guess I...kinda figured that you'd end up in some sort of future megacity with a bunch of other robots or something," Arven muttered. He had also thought it highly possible that the AI would shut down immediately, but figured it best to keep that to himself.

Another pause, and when the AI spoke again, his voice seemed to carry a deep regret. "The future was...not what I had envisioned. But then, I could not envision freedom either."

Arven hugged Mabosstiff a little closer, prompting the dog to lick his cheek. "So, you got lonely and found a way to come back." He couldn't help but look towards the AI as he asked, and looked away immediately.

"Yes. I, again, did not know that it would work. But Terapagos has within it the ability to shift beings through time. A young one can do so for a few minutes, so I thought perhaps a much older one would be able to send me back permanently. It was not anything that I could test, so I am grateful that it worked."

"...You're staying then." Arven's hug got a little tighter. Mabosstiff stayed where he was.

"I am. Staying in this era, anyway. If you wish for me to leave this area, I will do so. Arven, I--"

Arven scoffed. "Look, it's great you're back. I'm...I'm even happy for you. I'm not gonna make you leave. But..." He shook his head. "I have to think about things. I don't come to the lighthouse much any more, so you can stay here. It's probably more yours than mine anyway."

The AI was silent for longer than Arven was comfortable with, but he didn't dare turn back around. Finally, after what seemed like forever but was closer to a single minute, he spoke. "Thank you. Thank you, deeply." And he paused again before adding "There is much I have wanted to say to you. I have...thought of this day for a very long time, although it was always as a hypothetical. I never believed that it could be possible for me to return until fairly recently, and even now I am in awe that it worked."

There was something in the robot's voice, something other than the stiffness or how much he sounded like the professor, that drew a sigh from Arven. For a machine, he sounded so genuine, so heartfelt, if the term could apply to an entity without an actual heart. And that was something that already set him apart from Turo. Turo had been passionate, and could speak intently for hours about whatever scientific endeavor was dominating his thoughts, but that never applied to matters like his own family. When he would speak to Arven, there was almost nothing there, nothing but the sensation that he would rather get back to whatever he had been doing before.

"Arven..." It was said so gently that Arven almost didn't register that it was directed at him. "If you decide that you want nothing to do with me, I understand. So I must tell you now that I will answer any questions you may have."

"Don't rush me!" the young man snapped out, but it was harsher than he wanted. "I'm sorry," he sighed. Rather than keep his head turned fully away, he drooped down to rest against Mabosstiff's thick fur. "This is just a lot to happen out of the blue, y'know? I just need some time to think. I don't know what I'll decide yet. So I can't do that right now and I don't know when I'll be able to give you an answer."

"I understand."

He sighed heavily before gently pushing Mabosstiff back and standing, stretching and shaking his head. "It must have been a hell of a day for you. I'll leave you alone for right now. So you know, sometimes some Scatterbugs get in here. I think there's a loose window or something. Also you'll want to lock the door. Juliana comes in here sometimes to read Dad's old magazines."

"Oh! How is she?" The AI's tone brightened at the mention of the young trainer.

"They. I guess that wouldn't have been in their school file back then, huh?" Arven smiled just a bit as he thought of his friend. "They're doing all right. Still have Miraidon."

"Ah, my apologies. I will update my databanks accordingly. I assume, then, that Miraidon is also doing well."

"Yeah, I guess. Likes to sleep in the garden a lot. Uh..." He turned towards the AI but kept his gaze averted. "The other Miraidon, the one that...the violent one. It's in the custody of Director Clavell right now."

He could see that the AI nodded in confirmation. "It did not mean to harm him."

"Yeah, that's what Juliana figured. You'd said it was an accident, that dad got in between them...I don't want to talk about that either, but that's what's what."

The AI stood as well, but stayed where he was. "How long has it been since I left?"

Arven groaned, thinking. "I don't know exactly. About two, two and a half years maybe. You said it was three *hundred* for you?"

"Yes. So you are now--"

"I'll be twenty this year. Uh...still at Uva. Got held back a bit for missing so much, so it's a good thing it's an all ages school. Nemona's already graduated; she's training to be the new Top Champion..." Arven counted off on his fingers though there wasn't a need to do so. "Juliana is seventeen, doing a whole lot of stuff. They'll be glad to see you. Penny's sixteen, she's still working with the league...oh wait, that happened after you left."

The AI chuckled, a warm sound. "It seems I have a lot to catch up on. If they all wish to speak with me as well."

"...yeah. They don't have the hesitation I do, so you'll probably be able to talk to them right away. Actually..." He took out his Rotom phone. "You'll probably need some sort of a disguise if you want to go outside. I can have them bring some stuff over."

"Oh! That would be wonderful!" Even with Arven's limited view, he could see that the AI had stood a little straighter and brought his hands together. "Yes, your father's celebrity would hamper my ability to move freely. Although it is much heavier here in this era..." He brought his left hand to his forehead, a familiar gesture of frustration. "The cities contain too much information for me to take in at once. It is difficult to deal with, and I will have to seek out someone to aid me in adjusting my programming to limit the scope of my analysis."

Arven had no idea what that meant. "If it's programming you need, Penny can probably help out with that. But uh...I'm...I'm gonna go. I've got a lot to think about."

A nod from the robot. "Thank you. Arven..." He took a step forward but seemed to remember to give the young man his distance. "If this is the last I see you, please know that I--"

But Arven raised a hand to silence him. "It won't be. If I decide not to have any further contact, I'll come here and tell you in person. You can talk to me then, when I'm better prepared for it."

"Yes, I suppose I did approach you suddenly..." That gesture again. "I am still limited in what I can do. My ability to contact you directly is hampered. That is why I could not do so before."

"But you can now?"

"In a...limited context." The AI seemed to take in a deep breath, an entirely artificial gesture. "I was only able to do so because of the uncertainty that it was still your contact number. If I had known for certain that it was, I would not have been able to send my message due to that barrier in my programming."

Arven sighed, unconsciously mirroring the AI's gesture. "Which is why you could only talk to me through Juliana."

"Yes."

"Mm..." The young man shook his head. "I really need to go. This is too much for me to think about." At his side, Mabosstiff barked, a protective sound without hostility. Or at least that was how Arven knew it to be. "You can probably just contact Juliana if you need anything. They live right nearby."

The AI didn't react to the harsh sound, staying where he was. "I understand. I have much to think of as well. But I would not want to meet with your friends without you present. I had expected that you would enter the lab at the same time."

But Arven was already headed to the door. "I'll make a list of things you'll probably need and I'll ask them to get stuff together. I'll send a message to the computer here to tell you when I'm coming by. Though I guess you can't respond to me if you know it's me..."

"Thank you." There was a warmth in the AI's voice that contrasted greatly with the mechanical tone. "Once you leave, I believe I will enter sleep mode for a while. I have to process what has happened, everything I have experienced even simply today! And especially meeting with you."

This time, Arven faced him. Fully, without looking away, and took in the sight of him. The exact image of his father, the piercing gaze, the body language from his stance to how he had brought a hand to his chin, the weird garment that looked like something from a television spaceship crew, the well-defined features that had landed the professor on so many magazine covers. But he was smiling, and gently so, something Turo rarely did.

The AI watched him, that smile not wavering, and said nothing.

So Arven smiled back. It was small, hesitant, accompanied with tight eyes and a puff of air that strongly resembled a scoff, but it was the biggest and brightest smile that he was capable of displaying at the time. "I'll talk to you later. I'm glad you're ok." Part of him was surprised that he meant it.







Next part-All Together Now
 
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Umbramatic

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Hi! Here for your Catnip! You were hyping this up to me so I'm excited to read it!

Ah, talking to crystals. I love Final Fantasy.

The idea of Arven thinking Pernny is clandestine is funny. Also Mabosstiff is a good boi.

Hi robot dad. Boy this is something for Arven here. I can't blame him not wanting to look at him.

The part about him knowing the passcode made me laugh harder than I probably should have.

I also laughed harder than I should have at Arven making his robot dad put a pillowcase over his head so he doesn't have to -patrick voice- LOOK AT HIM. Nice touch his eyes are still glowing through it.

Oh nooooooooooooo Juliana trying to show Arven the Terapagos time rift and it just not working, that hurts my poor heart.

Breaking News: Local Arven Befuddled By Robot Emotions

Awwwww I love Mabostiff pressing against Arven's chest and being a source of comfort. What a good doggo.

I love that Robot Dad yeeted himself back through time with Terapagos' help because he was lonely. But also aaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ah so in this universe Clavell has Mean Miraidon, interesting

Robot dad, in a disguise:

Awwwww, Arven and his Robot dad at the end.

This was realty nice! Awkward and emotional but also really sweet. Thanks for sharing!
 

Blackjack Gabbiani

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Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoy!

God I *should* write more FF. I wrote a 6 drabble a few months ago but before that it was like...2002 since my last one.

I figure the Guardian would be too much for Juliana to handle, even just emotionally. It was a wild animal that lashed out and it didn't *mean* to kill him, but knowing it *did* would be hard to bear. But it can't be left to roam around. And Clavell is patient and kind and a lot more schooled in the ways of the world, so I think he would be the best choice.
 

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Hey Blackljack! Reviewing this one for catnip!

Overall, I thought this was a very conflicting, wholesome-but-unsettling story, but in a good way. It was an interesting premise of Arven seeing his father again. Such a funny coincidence that I'm seeing another fic based around this story, but I guess that's the real hot topic right now.

Anyway, the first part that set up the tension was nice, although I think Arven falling to his knees happened slightly too quickly. Maybe an extra paragraph or a sharper lead into it would have been better. The rest of it seemed to flow pretty well, and I appreciated how the conversation flowed in a way that worked well narratively but was awkward in-universe. It has a sequel, and it definitely set up for a lot of potential, though I'm also curious about that supposed 300 years that passed in the future before he finally found a way into the past. There's a lot to go on there, in a way.

One thing I liked that wa shighlighted a few times, which was on my mind whenever I think about these premises, is how generally speaking, the real Turo was an antagonist, and the AI modeled after him was actually much more benevolent and kind, had it not been for the hard-wired programming for its mission. I liked that this was alluded to in a sort of double-edged sword for how it can be a relief to see Turo again, yet because this Turo is literally... nicer? it's also not really "him." That'd put anyone in therapy.

Anyway, it was a good story. I liked the cross-section of slice of life and science fantasy that the premise allowed. Thanks for the read!
 
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Blackjack Gabbiani

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Thank you for reading!

The AI accepting his own identity is going to be a big part of the ongoing story. He knows he's different from his creator, and he's had time to develop as an individual away from that initial starting point, but now he's with others and will have to navigate society and that's something he's never had to contend with before.

Another fic with this premise? Ooooh do tell!
 

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Heya, I got rolled All Together Now as part of Catnip, and noticed that the very first line of it indicated that reading this fic first would give a better experience for it. Well, this one looks fairly short and digestible, so sounded good enough to me as a reason to drop in and review it as an extra:

/I want...to go back. You can help me with that, can't you?/

/I want to see him again. To tell him what I couldn't say before. Please, grant me that!/

Okay, so I’m pretty sure that this is one of your Violet-based fics, but I’m a bit curious as to who’s speaking right now, since that format is definitely different from what I’m used to in your writing.

/I know that I cannot return here. That does not matter to me. This era holds nothing else for me. Please.../

/...Thank you...Beyond anything, thank you!/

Miraidon? Is that you?

The crystalline glow faded, and the cavern was left silent. Only a whispered "thank you" to disrupt it, and it was inaudible to any but its speaker.

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"Arven, please meet me at the lighthouse. A friend." The young man read the message again, still as clueless as ever as to who could have sent it. He laughed and patted the Mabosstiff at his side as they walked up the hill from Los Platos. "Do you know who this is? Haha, maybe it's Penny trying to be clandestine again."

Oh, so it’s been a while since the end of Violet by this point, huh? Since Arven definitely sounds like he’s noticeably older than he is in canon.

The dog barked as if agreeing with Arven, smelling the air a moment later but coming up with no solutions.

"Though if it's at the lighthouse, it's gotta be someone trying to get information about dad..." Arven's step slowed a bit. "...I'll just tell 'em to get bent, right?" he added with a smile. "Yeah, and if they push, you'll just growl at 'em. That should be more than enough to scare off any nosy reporters or whatever."

… That actually makes me wonder if this is set before or after the events of Violet now, since I’ve read some of your post-Violet campaign stories before and… yeah, this could honestly go either way right now.

With the lighthouse in view, Arven looked around for anyone, but nothing stood out. A few Hoppip drifted by. A Lechonk snuffled around the side of the building. The tree next to the door bore a few Tarountula. Everything seemed typical. Maybe the person wasn't there yet.

"Hello?" he called out, gripping Garganacl's ball just in case.

His phone beeped, the Rotom inside it bringing it up to eye level. /Arven,/ a new message read, /I am glad you came. I have wanted to speak with you for a very long time. You are free to dismiss me after this, but I ask only that you hear me out for a few minutes./

Whelp, I suppose we’ll find out whether this is a pre or post-campaign Violet fic really fast depending on whether or not Arven assumes that this is his dad messaging him.

His grip tightened, and he gestured for Mabosstiff to remain on guard. "Where are you? What do you want?"

"I..." It was nearly inaudible, but it came from the southern side of the building, overlooking the cliff. "Arven. I am glad you came. I have wanted to speak with you for a very long time."

It’s Turo, isn’t it?

The voice was familiar, but nothing he could put his finger on just yet. It was so stiff, so deliberate, only repeating what the message had said, and made him think more of a machine.

"I am...aware that my appearance will upset you. That is why I am not approaching you just yet."

Whelp, we’re about to get a definitive answer as to if this is a pre or post-game Violet fic in 3… 2…

"Why wou--" The voice had finally said something new, but it was so oddly familiar, like a voice from an old answering machine. And that was all he needed. The unnatural manner, the low, smooth voice, imitating a long-gone man. Arven felt his knees buckle, and he reached out for Mabosstiff to steady himself. "It's not..."

"I must know that you will be all right with seeing my face before I emerge." Everything was so familiar, yet through a filter of the utterly unnatural. His father's voice, that machine that had taken on his guise…

Whelp, postgame fic it is. Though I suppose it’s time to see what on earth went wrong after The Future Between Us with robodad going back to the present.

Arven stammered, and fully fell to his knees. Mabosstiff nuzzled against him, prioritizing his safety above confronting the stranger. But Arven knew exactly who waited for him around the corner. "You're gone...you went through the machine! You're gone!" A dizziness spun around in his head, as if he was stuck on a wild roller coaster though he sat in place.

A hand clutched the corner of the building, just a bit tightly. "Arven. After this, after we speak here today, you are free to dismiss me. I will leave and never bother you again if you wish it. But I beg you, please let me speak to you now."

I actually wonder if this story shares a continuity with The Future Between Us or not, since this is certainly different from how I remembered Arven’s dynamic with robodad being in that fic.

The young man sighed deeply, as much to center himself as to take his time and think. That thing, that damn machine that his egomaniac father had made in his image, that had tricked them into believing that Professor Turo was still...

With a glance up, he saw the hand hadn't moved, but still displayed tension in the gesture.

"...Yeah, sure. Just don't make me look at you."

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The hand relaxed, and a moment later, the AI peeked around the corner with a gentle smile across the familiar features. "Arven..."

Arven was working his way to a standing position, the weakness in his knees still present, and at the sight of the AI he turned his head away sharply. Even the brief glimpse he had caught was more than enough.

And yet, there was a sudden grasp around his arm. The AI was pulling him to his feet with a firm but gentle touch.

"Get away from me," Arven murmured, aware that it would come out angrier than he actually was. "I'm fine on my own. I don't need..."

Okay, so I’ve narrowed this down to this either being an AU to TFBU or else occurring sometime prior to it somehow. Probably. Maybe. I can’t rule out it being a direct followup, but it’s definitely different from what I was expecting if it is.

The AI took a step back, and Arven could see out of the corner of his eye that the robot had assumed a neutral posture.

Fully on his feet, the young man dusted himself off. "Has anyone else seen you?"

"That is impossible for me to tell. From Zero Gate to here, it is very likely that I was observed in some manner." The voice was still distinctly Turo's, but the delivery was stiff enough that Arven was able to maintain a mental distance. "You must have many questions. I believe we should go inside to talk."

Arven: “I just… how?!
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RoboTuro: “It’s a long story, so let’s just settle in for a bit.”

"Yeah, sure, before someone sees you." Still averting his gaze, this time staring at the ground, Arven headed to the door. "Oh it's..."

"I unlocked it earlier, before I realized that it would be best to wait for you outside."

Of course his father's exact double would know the damn pass code. Of course he would. Arven pushed the heavy door open, pushing it full and hoping the AI would follow so he wouldn't have to hold it open.

Damn, Turo really pulled out all the stops copying himself, huh? (Though I wonder what his relationship with the missus was like such that he didn’t make an AI of her canonically.)

The AI did follow, but paused in the entryway, looking around with a slow, stuttered turn of his head. "...It looks just as I remember it."

"You've never been here before," Arven reminded him. "For that matter, Juliana said that you couldn't leave. Uh..." He faltered for a moment, trying to remember what his friend had said. "I don't remember if it was the lab or Area Zero, but you couldn't leave the area because of the tera crystals."

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"You wish to ask how I have returned, then? It ties in with how I am able to explore Paldea freely." The AI stepped into the main room, down the single step that divided the lab from the kitchen area, and continued to look around. Even a glance at the back of his head told Arven that the AI was likely smiling.

Okay, so this is just straight-up a TFBU sequel. Duly noted, then. Though part of me wonders if there should be more of a reaction before Robodad starts getting into his “how I got here” story.

"Uh, sure. But first I'm going to ask you to wait here. You can take a seat if you want."

"Of course. I do not wish for you to be uncomfortable."

"Gotcha..." Arven murmured before heading off to the back hallway, pushing one of the bookshelves slightly out of the way to access it. He returned a minute later with a dusty old pillowcase, from a bedroom that hadn't been slept in in years. Eyes focused on the floor, he held it out. "Put this over your head."

… Isn’t this literally the Mr. X disguise from The Simpsons? I’m surprised that it would actually work in this setting. :V

The AI accepted it, running the fabric over his fingers for a moment before doing as instructed. "Is this sufficient?"

Arven looked up, taking in everything before him. The AI had decided to sit in the chair before the massive computer, the one where Turo had spent most of his time. Working, eating, sleeping there.

It was a good thing the lab coat was gone, but that weird body suit was still present. Such a distinctive garment that Arven couldn't imagine anyone else in it, so he still looked away. Plus, even though the pillowcase, he could see the AI's eyes for a moment. Sure, his father's eyes hadn't been blue, and they hadn't *glowed*, but a marked difference wasn't a comfort in this case.

I actually completely forgot that that was a thing for the AI Professors’ designs, though I suppose that really would make them stick out like sore thumbs on the street.

Arven: “Um… yeah, I think that I’m going to need to make a run to Mesagoza to get a better disguise than this.” .-.

"Yeah sure," Arven rushed as he flopped down on the couch. Mabosstiff climbed up beside him and rested his head in the young man's lap, and Arven in turn threaded his hand in the thick fur. "So you're...you're back, you're here outside the crater...just tell me all in one go."

Is that even going to be physically possible in a fic that’s like 3500 words long? Since this feels like it’s potentially quite the saga, Arven. ^^;

The AI sat back as if he was taking a deep breath, though Arven doubted he was capable of such a thing. "...All right. I will begin from the beginning."

"No just...just give me the highlights."

Oh, well. That would certainly help a bit for cutting to the chase there.

"Oh..." The pillowcase tilted forward in a show of disappointment. "All right. Although I ask that you do not repeat what I speak of to you."

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Oh yeah, that’s a good omen already for what this is going to entail.

"Anything around Area Zero, I've kept to myself." Arven's hand knotted up in Mabosstiff's fur. "It's uh...it's not even public knowledge that dad's...gone. That's part of the reason I didn't want anyone to see you."

He realized he was still breathing a bit heavier than usual, as if he was carrying something heavy, and tried to slow things down.

"All right. First, have you heard of a being known as Terapagos?"

… I can’t tell whether or not this is going to lead to multiversal shenanigans or not, since I remember that one scene at the end of the Indigo Disk DLC and the implications behind it…

Arven knew about it, all right. The weird glowing turtle that Juliana had taken with them to Kitakami. The younger trainer had been insistent on dragging Arven to the top of Oni Mountain, to a pond that smelled like rotten eggs, claiming that Terapagos was going to show him something amazing. Even after an hour, they had continued to prod the turtle with their foot, offering bribes and trying desperately to get it to do something very specific that they never elaborated on. By the time Arven told them to pack it in, Juliana had been on the verge of tears. "But it did it before..." they had insisted with a sniffle.

Yeesh, and I thought that bike derg’s reaction to that moment from the DLC was sad and depressing.

He never did figure out what his friend was talking about.

So he wouldn't mention any of that. "Yeah, it's a tiny turtle thing. Got something to do with terastalization."

Arven: “... I mean, I can just call up Juliana and ask for a fuller explanation, you know. She is still in my contact list.”

The bag moved up and down with the AI's nods. "In this era, I believe there would be only one present in Area Zero, and it would be very young. In the future, however..." He shifted slightly and rested his hands on his legs. "More have navigated to that place, and their power is stronger. Even at this point in time, the tera energy in the depths of Area Zero is enough that prolonged exposure may rid a tera orb of the need to be recharged. I was not certain that it would work, but I suspected that it would do the same for me. It..." He shifted again, hands moving to the chair armrests.

Huh, I actually wonder if that’s canonically implied or not. I didn’t remember anything of the sort being brought up in Indigo Disk, but it definitely sounds believable as an explanation.

Arven hadn't known that a robot could be *nervous*.

I mean, Tera Crystals are strongly implied to be “wish things into existence” Phlebotinum, so don’t rule out the possibility of a robot built around Tera Crystals having impossible properties.

"...it granted me untold freedom. I was able to leave for the first time, able to truly be the free adventurer I desired to be..." His voice, though still as stilted as ever, was suddenly choked up.

Arven hadn't known that a robot could be *emotional*.

"I have been able to live my dream, *my* dream, and not that of my creator...for over three hundred years..." The AI paused, but Arven gave no reaction. "And after all that time, after existing for so long in a bold world as a free being."

His voice wavered a bit more at that, and he brought a hand to his forehead, a familiar gesture to Arven.

"I realized something. I was...lonely."

I guess finishing those plans for Robomom or else making a RoboArven would have kinda been in poor form, huh? Though I suppose that that answers the question of who was dialoguing in the first scene earlier on.

The young man drew back a breath. The robot's tone, his posturing, the fact that he was sitting in *that* chair, and then saying things like that. Even without seeing his face, or maybe amplified by that fact, Arven had the creeping sensation of a ghost before him, some lingering spirit of a man over three years dead.

"T-take that thing off," he blurted out. "This is ridiculous."

I wonder if that’s a side effect of that extra Tera energy in the future. Since if Robodad’s original “distance” from Turo originally was a function of not tapping into Tera Crystals/Energy/Whatever efficiently enough and suddenly there was a lot more of it to work with…

"Oh? Very well." Though the AI's hand hesitated at first, he pulled away the pillowcase and set it aside. The dim room, lit only by the computer monitors, obscured his face, but even that was a familiar enough sight to Arven, who jolted uncomfortably before looking away. "Do you wish for me to continue?"

"...Yeah." Mabosstiff was pressed against Arven's chest, grounding and distracting him. "Yeah, go ahead."

Mabosstiff: “*... Arven, is this really necessary right now?*” >_>;

The AI paused for a few seconds before speaking again. "As I am not an organic creature, I do not require company for my well-being. It would, theoretically, be possible for me to exist without others and continue to run at full capacity, with no ill effects to my functionality. However," he shook his head, a gesture Arven saw from the corner of his eye and turned a little further away to avoid, "I was unhappy. I was free, but solitude had taken its toll."

Oh, so he’s gone mad from isolation. Lovely. And certainly realistic for an actual human.

"I guess I...kinda figured that you'd end up in some sort of future megacity with a bunch of other robots or something," Arven muttered. He had also thought it highly possible that the AI would shut down immediately, but figured it best to keep that to himself.

Another pause, and when the AI spoke again, his voice seemed to carry a deep regret. "The future was...not what I had envisioned. But then, I could not envision freedom either."

That… doesn’t bode well for what the future entails, especially since Robodad literally saw nothing from it that was worth staying for.

Arven hugged Mabosstiff a little closer, prompting the dog to lick his cheek. "So, you got lonely and found a way to come back." He couldn't help but look towards the AI as he asked, and looked away immediately.

I mean, it’s probably a bit more than that considering the opening sequence, but let’s not think too hard about that one. ^^;

"Yes. I, again, did not know that it would work. But Terapagos has within it the ability to shift beings through time. A young one can do so for a few minutes, so I thought perhaps a much older one would be able to send me back permanently. It was not anything that I could test, so I am grateful that it worked."

… I mean, it also canonically has the ability to shift beings across universes, so who’s to say that this is even the same Robodad from TFBU?

"...You're staying then." Arven's hug got a little tighter. Mabosstiff stayed where he was.

"I am. Staying in this era, anyway. If you wish for me to leave this area, I will do so. Arven, I--"

Arven scoffed. [ ]

"Look, it's great you're back. I'm...I'm even happy for you. I'm not gonna make you leave. But..." He shook his head. "I have to think about things. I don't come to the lighthouse much any more, so you can stay here. It's probably more yours than mine anyway."

I think it would make sense to linger on Arven’s reaction a bit more, since I was having a bit of trouble getting a feel for his intended mood here.

The AI was silent for longer than Arven was comfortable with, but he didn't dare turn back around. Finally, after what seemed like forever but was closer to a single minute, he spoke.

"Thank you. Thank you, deeply." And he paused again before adding "There is much I have wanted to say to you. I have...thought of this day for a very long time, although it was always as a hypothetical. I never believed that it could be possible for me to return until fairly recently, and even now I am in awe that it worked."

There was something in the robot's voice, something other than the stiffness or how much he sounded like the professor, that drew a sigh from Arven. For a machine, he sounded so genuine, so heartfelt, if the term could apply to an entity without an actual heart. And that was something that already set him apart from Turo.

Turo had been passionate, and could speak intently for hours about whatever scientific endeavor was dominating his thoughts, but that never applied to matters like his own family. When he would speak to Arven, there was almost nothing there, nothing but the sensation that he would rather get back to whatever he had been doing before.

These two paragraphs seemed a bit too chunky to deliver in a straight shot. It’s probably worth breaking up at least one of the two into smaller pieces.

"Arven..." It was said so gently that Arven almost didn't register that it was directed at him. "If you decide that you want nothing to do with me, I understand. So I must tell you now that I will answer any questions you may have."

"Don't rush me!" the young man snapped out, but it was harsher than he wanted. [ ]

"I'm sorry," he sighed. Rather than keep his head turned fully away, he drooped down to rest against Mabosstiff's thick fur. "This is just a lot to happen out of the blue, y'know? I just need some time to think. I don't know what I'll decide yet. So I can't do that right now and I don't know when I'll be able to give you an answer."

"I understand."

Another spot where it probably makes sense to get into Arven’s head and mood a little more.

He sighed heavily before gently pushing Mabosstiff back and standing, stretching and shaking his head. "It must have been a hell of a day for you. I'll leave you alone for right now. So you know, sometimes some Scatterbugs get in here. I think there's a loose window or something. Also you'll want to lock the door. Juliana comes in here sometimes to read Dad's old magazines."

Arven: “... Which I’m not really sure why she doesn’t just ask to borrow them, but…”
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"Oh! How is she?" The AI's tone brightened at the mention of the young trainer.

"They. I guess that wouldn't have been in their school file back then, huh?" Arven smiled just a bit as he thought of his friend. "They're doing all right. Still have Miraidon."

Ah, so Juliana is gender nonbinary in this story. Or at least I think that’s the implication. I didn’t recall that detail being brought up in TFBU, but duly noted.

"Ah, my apologies. I will update my databanks accordingly. I assume, then, that Miraidon is also doing well."

"Yeah, I guess. Likes to sleep in the garden a lot. Uh..." He turned towards the AI but kept his gaze averted. "The other Miraidon, the one that...the violent one. It's in the custody of Director Clavell right now."

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He could see that the AI nodded in confirmation. "It did not mean to harm him."

"Yeah, that's what Juliana figured. You'd said it was an accident, that dad got in between them...I don't want to talk about that either, but that's what's what."

That makes me wonder what was going on in Guardian!Miraidon’s head anyways if Turo getting oopsed was legitimately an accident. Since you’d think that Robodad would have some firsthand experience with knowing the ins and outs of its personality.

The AI stood as well, but stayed where he was. "How long has it been since I left?"

Arven groaned, thinking. "I don't know exactly. About two, two and a half years maybe. You said it was three *hundred* for you?"

Well, it’s certainly been a busy two and a half years in that case considering everything that went down in TFBU prior to this point.

"Yes. So you are now--"

"I'll be twenty this year. Uh...still at Uva. Got held back a bit for missing so much, so it's a good thing it's an all ages school. Nemona's already graduated; she's training to be the new Top Champion..." Arven counted off on his fingers though there wasn't a need to do so. "Juliana is seventeen, doing a whole lot of stuff. They'll be glad to see you. Penny's sixteen, she's still working with the league...oh wait, that happened after you left."

Ah, so there were consequences for going off and having an entire fic focused on getting Robodad back. Interesting to see that you HC Arven as being that much older than the rest of the core cast of S/V though, since my reflexive assumption was that they were pretty close to one another.

The AI chuckled, a warm sound. "It seems I have a lot to catch up on. If they all wish to speak with me as well."

"...yeah. They don't have the hesitation I do, so you'll probably be able to talk to them right away. Actually..." He took out his Rotom phone. "You'll probably need some sort of a disguise if you want to go outside. I can have them bring some stuff over."

And then Nemona just casually took a picture and put it on Not!Instagram and ruined everything. Since she does seem like the sort of personality to inadvertently blow up a plan like that.

"Oh! That would be wonderful!" Even with Arven's limited view, he could see that the AI had stood a little straighter and brought his hands together. "Yes, your father's celebrity would hamper my ability to move freely. Although it is much heavier here in this era..."

He brought his left hand to his forehead, a familiar gesture of frustration.

"The cities contain too much information for me to take in at once. It is difficult to deal with, and I will have to seek out someone to aid me in adjusting my programming to limit the scope of my analysis."

I wonder if the original Turo was also not a city person, or if that’s just an artifact of being a robot that’s making Robodad susceptible to sensory overload.

Arven had no idea what that meant. "If it's programming you need, Penny can probably help out with that. But uh...I'm...I'm gonna go. I've got a lot to think about."

I was going to speak up against this, but… yeah, Penny canonically is an improbably skilled programmer, so I’m sure that with some documentation for TuroOS, that she’d be able to whip up the equivalent of custom firmware updates in due time.

A nod from the robot. "Thank you. Arven..." He took a step forward but seemed to remember to give the young man his distance. "If this is the last I see you, please know that I--"

But Arven raised a hand to silence him. "It won't be. If I decide not to have any further contact, I'll come here and tell you in person. You can talk to me then, when I'm better prepared for it."

I mean, are you sure, Arven? Since Turo sure has been fixated on the idea that his presence here might wind up being ephemeral.

"Yes, I suppose I did approach you suddenly..." That gesture again. "I am still limited in what I can do. My ability to contact you directly is hampered. That is why I could not do so before."

"But you can now?"

"In a...limited context." The AI seemed to take in a deep breath, an entirely artificial gesture. "I was only able to do so because of the uncertainty that it was still your contact number. If I had known for certain that it was, I would not have been able to send my message due to that barrier in my programming."

Huh, so there’s something in Robodad’s programming that’s trying to keep him away from Arven. I didn’t pick up on that up to this point, but duly noted.

Arven sighed, unconsciously mirroring the AI's gesture. "Which is why you could only talk to me through Juliana."

"Yes."

"Mm..." The young man shook his head. "I really need to go. This is too much for me to think about." At his side, Mabosstiff barked, a protective sound without hostility. Or at least that was how Arven knew it to be. "You can probably just contact Juliana if you need anything. They live right nearby."

RoboTuro: “... But if I get an update to my wardrobe, then I could-”
Arven: “Again, give her a call first.” >_>;

The AI didn't react to the harsh sound, staying where he was. "I understand. I have much to think of as well. But I would not want to meet with your friends without you present. I had expected that you would enter the lab at the same time."

Oh, so that’s why the next part to this story is called ‘All Together Now’, huh?

But Arven was already headed to the door. "I'll make a list of things you'll probably need and I'll ask them to get stuff together. I'll send a message to the computer here to tell you when I'm coming by. Though I guess you can't respond to me if you know it's me..."

"Thank you." There was a warmth in the AI's voice that contrasted greatly with the mechanical tone. "Once you leave, I believe I will enter sleep mode for a while. I have to process what has happened, everything I have experienced even simply today! And especially meeting with you."

I’m honestly surprised that Arven also isn’t having a “I need to take this all in” moment himself, but I suppose that it’s a neat contrast between these two.

This time, Arven faced him. Fully, without looking away, and took in the sight of him. The exact image of his father, the piercing gaze, the body language from his stance to how he had brought a hand to his chin, the weird garment that looked like something from a television spaceship crew, the well-defined features that had landed the professor on so many magazine covers. But he was smiling, and gently so, something Turo rarely did.

Oh, so his expression looks like the Gigachad meme right now, doesn't it? :V

The AI watched him, that smile not wavering, and said nothing.

So Arven smiled back. It was small, hesitant, accompanied with tight eyes and a puff of air that strongly resembled a scoff, but it was the biggest and brightest smile that he was capable of displaying at the time.

"I'll talk to you later. I'm glad you're ok." Part of him was surprised that he meant it.

I’m a bit surprised too given Arven’s overall mood in TFBU, guess I might have jumped the gun a bit in pegging this as a sequel work.

Alright, and made it to the end where I give my normal recaps of things. I can see how this story is treated as a co-dependent work with All Together Now since it honestly feels a bit like a prologue on its own, but even so I had a good time with it. The characterization in particular is what really shines in this story, with the interactions between Arven and AI!Turo and the passing mentions of what Juliana’s been up to all being surprisingly believable in spite of all of this technically being an expansion of canon. I also thought that you did a good job at selling the sense of Arven still trying to come to terms about his mixed feelings regarding his father and how it impacted how he views AI!Turo as a result.

As for criticism, the first one that stood out to me isn’t really a fault of the story itself per se, but it might make sense to clear up how this story relates to your other Violet stories. Like I kept tripping up over whether or not this story was supposed to relate to The Future Between Us and if so, when it occurred relative to it. It might make sense to drop in a little author’s note at the beginning clarifying things a bit.

For flaws that I saw that are more particular to the actual story, I kinda wish that Mabosstiff had a bit more interactions with the characters. I get that this is primarily focused around Arven and his robot dad, but Mabosstiff felt like a bit of a third wheel at points. Like I actually don’t think that Mabosstiff was described reacting to AI!Turo outside the very beginning? Does Mabosstiff react to him as if he knows him? As if he’s a stranger? Feels like something that could’ve helped color different parts of this one-shot. I also felt there were some parts where we could’ve seen a bit more of the gears turning in Arven’s head a bit, since coming off of The Future Between Us, some of his reactions here surprised me a bit, and I kinda wonder if seeing them play out with a bit more context would’ve helped me better understand where he was coming from.

Though that said, I thought that this was a pretty fun and touching piece @Blackjack Gabbiani . I’m not fully sure what exactly will go down in All Together Now, but I suppose that I’ll find out pretty fast since this story did a good job at teeing things up for it.

Hope the feedback was helpful, and until next time!
 
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Blackjack Gabbiani

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Oh! This isn't related to The Future Between Us at all! Sorry that it confused you so much! Though I guess it will have some similar headcanons so they both kinda tie in with At the End Of Forever because of that.

I hope knowing that alone will resolve a lot of your questions.

The tera orb never needs to be charged after encountering Terapagos and I don't think it was reeeeally explained why exactly but I also figure that the power in the future may be stronger if only because Game Freak will never keep Terapagos unique to SV. It'll eventually show up in a future generation, so the patch I'm covering that with is "it was the only one in Area Zero but there are some elsewhere" and hoping for the best.

Yeah, this Juliana is nonbinary because I am and I'm writing them as a self-insert. Which...is something that will come up in the second part. Not as in "me directly" but as in "this is how I approached the game and my thoughts on things that happened" so keep that in mind when you read the next one.

Regarding there being something in AI Turo's programming that kept him from contacting Arven, I figure that would explain why he couldn't contact him during the game, and said he had been trying to do so. Although I suppose he could have called Clavell and asked to speak to Arven but maybe there was a block on that too. There seem to be some restrictions on his behavior and actions (can't shut the machine down himself, for one) and I figured that would be one of them.

The AI's resistance to cities is what he said--he takes in too much data. Remember, he picks up on things like vital signs even at a distance.

Thank you for pointing out errors! That's very kind of you.

And thank you for reading in general!
 

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First of all, I have to say that the buildup is very well done. Everything is clear and meaningful, driving the plot forward in a way that makes sense. Even though I’m not as familiar with Scaret Violet, everything here is explained in a way I can follow, which is really nice.

The language here is very descriptive! I really enjoy getting a clear mental image from things like the living room/lab and the lighthouse, specifically how Arven sees them.

Arven is such a guy! He’s so emo here. When his perception shifts from things like his friends, down into the doubt into what exactly he’s being called here, you know and understand that he’s genuinely got a good head on his shoulders. That makes the shift into him being so clearly hurt by this all the more dramatic and believable.

He’s shifting into things like keeping a mental distance or being so provoked by something as simple as the AI knowing basic information like a passcode. Poor guy. The dissonance in the house… and recollections of things that maybe weren’t so great, like his father’s passive behavior towards his own family in the face of his professional enthusiasm.

His perspective and hatred of this thing that took his life from him is really showcased well when things like emotions come into play. What this story is really good at doing is taking the expectation that Arven is growing to be more in control than he was and just reiterating that maybe he’s still got growing to do, when placed in more intense situations that remind him of the past. Especially when faced with the idea and reality that the AI professor is just as emotional as he is.

Sitting there with that pillowcase on him!

Arven’s maturity when confronted by the fact that the AI’s going to stay is well done here. I really like his clear hesitancy and discomfort, before relenting and even wishing and allowing him to stay. This is circling back to the conflicts he has the most trouble with, but also showing us that what he’s lived through and learned is actually something that’s changed him significantly.

Yeah. It was harsher than he wanted, when he yells back to something so simple as an offer of information. He even knows himself that he’s losing. At least he has the doggy. Part of his slow trailing off into other topics like the little things about the lighthouse’s quirks might be that distancing manifesting, but it really does speak to how mature he is at this point to recover from that.

Getting the gang back together. They all seem to be having a good time after everything!

That uncomfortable space between them at the end is interesting. Sometimes there isn’t a clean cut resolution, and things just are what they are. Really enjoyed this!
 

Blackjack Gabbiani

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Thank you so much! Gosh this is sorta the biggest spoiler in the entire game so uh...whoops.

In the game, Arven tends to deal with his past via denial or avoidance so being confronted with the *embodiment* of his past, or as close to it as is possible, means he can't continue to do so and he has to actually *cope*. But then, how do you even prepare for something like that? What he knows and what he feels are wildly different things, after all. He can know for a fact that the AI is a separate entity from his father, but when he sees that face and hears that voice, it goes out the window.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this~
 

K_S

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I'm here for another AI Tauro fic... I'm curious as to how tightly this ties to your other works in the SCARLET/VIOLET verse but the tale will tell I suppose. so no point in wallowing in speculation.

I'm guessing AI Turo is requesting extraction from Celibi? I remember that being the ending of your previous fic when the kid visited him...

Perhaps it's the medium I'm reading from is flawed... but did the tale jump from white out a text message without even a page break? That was a bit jarring,

Alright not knowing Penny I'm kinda curious as to what sort of shenanigans she'd kick up to earn that comment from Arven... it feels a bit like a missed tale. Poor kid having to worry about pap' is a shame, but I'll admit most people would spook at a creepy dog snarling at them.

Though random tangent. would the canine snarling turn into a Snarl the move? if so I imagine a few "accidents" like that would keep any and all newspersons very far away.

I'm surprised his go-to was Gargan', I mean the doorway alone is going to take a hit if they have to head out in a hurry...

Hm the fact that Avren's immediate thought is of his deceased dad... that wound is still quite raw obviously but this is more than likely the AI Tauro and I would figure tha Avern would guess that...

And Avern's raw reaction to seeing and hearing... I don't think this is the same Avern as the last fic is it? Well he's definitly signing up for the pain train in this encounter then... not having his alternate verse's healing it seems.

Love how Avern's starter(?) is doing such a good job service animaling. It's a nice touch.

Nice way for the AI to gently insinuate society is nothing like we anticicapted (and possibly non-existant) and the robot utopia is not on.

Though mundane I do love how AI Turo is just thrilled to hear news of Avern's crew. And you can hear betwen the lines Avern squealing "talk to them, NOT ME." I wonder if AI Turo is cottening on to that.

But that last line gives jsut a glimmer of hope that Avern will eventually be well enough to talk to the AI fairly, without the needs for pillow cases sometime in the future.
 

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Thank you for reading! This isn't connected to The Future Between Us but is sort of related to At the End of Forever. Maybe I should preface it with that since two people have asked that so far.

I feel like a snarl and Snarl are going to be two different things.

Without a page break? What do you mean by that? Also, Penny trying to be clandestine is part of the game itself.

when you write "Tauro" I envision the explorer guy from Tears of the Kingdom though he's just as much of a thirst trap haha.
 
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